Ok, I posted this story ages ago and people seemed to like it then, but looking at it now, it seems horribly cliched. It's like everything goes to hell the second *NSYNC enters the story. Grrr. I've revamped it completely since then, but it still isn't done, so anyreading my 1 story is still reading the old horrible version. So don't bother telling me how bad it is 'cause trust me, I know. But if anyone has any suggestions on how to make it better, feel free to e-mail me at PacificGravity@hotmail.com or just leave suggestions in the review. ~Thanks. |