One is inside

then outside what one has been inside

One feels empty

because there is nothing left inside oneself

One tries to get inside oneself

that inside of the outside

that one that was once inside

Once one tries to get oneself inside what

one is outside

To eat and to be eaten

to have the outside inside and to be

inside the outside.

But this is not enough. One is trying to get

the inside of what one is outside inside, and to

get inside the outside. But one does not get

inside the outside by getting the outside inside

for;

although one is full inside of the inside outside

one is on the outside of one's own inside

and by getting inside the outside

one remains empty because

while one is on the inside

even the inside of the outside is outside

-R.D. Laing (i think...)

from Analyzing Prose by Richard A Lanham

Happy Halloween everyone! Yeah, haven't done any writing since the last update.

Ideas/ Challenges:

Harry Potter

Comrad Potter and the Philosopher's Stone:

An idea that was originally inspired by Fire's Red Moon.

As a young lad, Harry finds a copy of Karl Marx's Manifesto of the Communist Party. He immediately sees the parallels on how he is treated by the Durslys and how the ruling class has been treating the working class. Upon entering the Wizarding World, he sees the perversity of the ruling class continuing to subjugate the working class, and oppressing the Muggleborns. Features a RedHarry.

One of the conditions of taking this challenge is having Harry rally the Huffelpuff collective. The option is to have this collective start their own counter-revolution.

Bad Title Ideas:

Harriet Tubman and the Philosopher's Stone.

James Potter and the Giant Peach.

Evangelion

Shinji Ikari was absorbed into Unit One During the attack of Leilel. Left the entry plug looks like Shinji Ikari, but she calls herself Yui.

I can see this going in two different directions here.

1) Yui was not privy to Gendo's plan regarding Third Impact, and is doesn't understand why the love of her life is treating her so cruelly. He was suppose to watch over and protect their son.

2) Yui just doesn't understand how that idiot Gendo could fuck up her plans so monumentally. Oh, he is so going to rue the day he fucked up her godhood.

I've been playing Billy vs. Snakeman game alot lately--

If you want to join my village, it's called NapalmLuck (click on my homepage, and it'll send you right there!)

or click on this link

A note regarding A Human Saiyajin:

I have been asked numerous times if I am ever planning on continuing A Human Saiyajin. The truth is, I really would like to see this story finished, and put to rest. However, I must admit, my knowledge of Dragonball is rather limited, and I don't really like it enough to actually read it. The story has always been a two man project, each of us having contrary view points on where the story should go. Every chapter, there was a fight or argument on the artistic integrity of each of it's creators, and because of that, it has tempered the story to what it is now.

I do not think I can achieve it's full potential alone, which is one of the reasons I have not finished it myself. I have not passed it along because that would relinquish whatever creative input that I hold.

Ideally, I would rather continue this story with Mike. If not, then I would be open to finding another co-author to finish this story, and perhaps put it to rest.

Sincerely, Kazblah

10 April- on the BvS front, made sannin today, yay!My village still needs more people, the good part about joining is that you get to annoy me every day becase I'm on there everyday!

6 April- Wow! Almost a year since I last updated this thing. Anyway. Progress is coming along with Orange Blossom. Stepping Stones take 2 will be getting a new title, I am taking in some ideas, but unless someone can think of a better idea, it'll probably end up being Uzuhime or something. If there are a couple that I like, I might put them up as a poll.

As I stated before, I need Beta-readers! It'll help chapters come out faster,