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This is a community dedicated to serious, aspiring writers of fanfic (and maybe-in their 'other lives'-original fiction). So many reviews are fluffy. Here, we enter our favorite fanfics and brace ourselves to hear the truth about how we can improve our work. |
Out of the Darkness by
WeasleySeeker reviews
As the Wizarding community start to leave the horrors of the Second Wizarding War behind them, it's really beginning to seem like there is a light at the end of the tunnel - a light that some people thought could never be found again.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 13 - Words: 23,220 - Reviews: 150 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 100 - Updated: 6/16/2017 - Published: 5/12/2012 - [Ron W., Hermione G.] - Complete
One Year: Falling by
Umbrella-ella reviews
Dean and Luna— it had always been Dean and Luna. Never one without the other— it just so happened that no one had noticed until it was too late. Until they were standing in front of her grave, until he was so far gone that even the alcohol wouldn't help him forget. D/L, post-War.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 867 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/13/2013 - Dean T., Luna L. - Complete
Remembering by
autumn midnights reviews
Canon tells us the story of Harry, Ron, and Hermione during Deathly Hallows. Fanon tells us the story of Neville, Ginny, and Luna during Deathly Hallows. But what about all those other students who had to deal with the fact that Death Eaters were in charge? They all have stories to tell also. Set completely during DH, and focuses exclusively on minor characters. Complete.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,888 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/15/2012 - Complete
Liquorice Allsorts by
Schermionie reviews
Started as a drabble, freeverse and oneshot collection. Now complete at twenty-five unrelated stories: Vincent Crabbe; Nine confessions of love; Bill and Victoire; Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny; Pansy/Seamus/Daphne; Dennis/Gabrielle; Nine atonements; Ron/Astoria; and Bellatrix Lestrange. If you like variety, come on in...
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 4,424 - Reviews: 136 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 12/4/2010 - Published: 5/24/2010 - Vincent C., Bellatrix L. - Complete
Even Unto the Seventh Generation by
AnneNevilleReviews reviews
"Scorpius resembled Draco as much as Albus resembled Harry"-DH, 756. As the children of the leading figures of the last Wizarding War enter their first year at Hogwarts, they struggle to come to terms with their identities in relationship to their famous or notorious parents. At the same time, a shocking political shift forces wizards everywhere to reconsider their beliefs.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 11 - Words: 29,559 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 74 - Updated: 2/16/2013 - Published: 7/4/2012 - Albus S. P., Scorpius M.
Unforgivable by
WeasleySeeker reviews
Molly thinks that after killing Bellatrix, she's almost as bad as the Death Eaters. Arthur tries to convince her otherwise. —first place in School Subjects Competition (Charms).
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,318 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 9 - Published: 9/30/2012 - Molly W., Arthur W. - Complete
Once by
silver-nightstorm reviews
After Severus Snape disappears from the Wizarding world, Draco Malfoy finally gathers the courage to ask the one person who can possibly find the Half-Blood Prince for help – Hermione Granger.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 16 - Words: 27,100 - Reviews: 190 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 112 - Updated: 3/10/2013 - Published: 7/25/2012 - Severus S., Hermione G.
Little Lost Girl by
ladyoftheknightley reviews
Once upon a time, there was a young girl who might have been called Alice. Now, there was just dreams and confusion... x-For the Chocolate Frogs section of the Honeydukes Competition at HPFC-x
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,233 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 3 - Published: 11/18/2012 - Alice L., Frank L. - Complete
A Primer for the Small Weird Loves by
unicornesque reviews
"In the glow of the fires, her unkempt hair was a halo, her eyes were Baltic amber, and he was panicking." Born and raised in France, Draco Malfoy attends Beauxbatons and leads a privileged, well-ordered existence. He meets Hermione Granger for the first time at the Triwizard Tournament, and that's when things get... strange. But kind of wonderful, too.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 20 - Words: 60,876 - Reviews: 601 - Favs: 1,274 - Follows: 603 - Updated: 5/2/2013 - Published: 12/18/2012 - Hermione G., Draco M. - Complete
Decisions by
smilelaughread reviews
Harry and Ginny make a series of (bad) decisions that leads them to a romantic date at an old amusement park. But, of course, it wouldn't be Harry Potter without a little bit of danger. Throw in a thunderstorm, brooms, and Harry's stubbornness, and there you go!
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,940 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/27/2012 - Harry P., Ginny W. - Complete
Glimpses Into the Minds of Unfamiliar Stories - The Trio Era by
starlight.moon.princess reviews
"We cannot change the cards we are dealt, just how we play the hand." - Randy Pausch. A look into the lives of the million people that inhabit the world of Harry Potter. No AU, warnings inside.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 40 - Words: 21,387 - Reviews: 165 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 2/27/2014 - Published: 12/20/2012 - Griphook
For The Greater Good by
MasterSpy reviews
"I can get you Harry Potter," she whispered. "And the traitor Snape. In fact, I promise to hand them to you on a silver platter." She watched his ashen, pale face twist into a cruel, serpentine smile. With a flick of the Dark Lord's wand, her entire body ruptured with the agony of a thousand knives. That is how Hermione Granger celebrated her 18th Birthday. AU postOotP Spy!Hermione
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 38,723 - Reviews: 163 - Favs: 95 - Follows: 139 - Updated: 4/5/2013 - Published: 9/23/2012 - Hermione G., Severus S.
A Very Impractical Man by
AnneNevilleReviews reviews
Frank Longbottom writes a letter for Neville to read at age twenty that explains the positive and negative consequences of having been a very impractical man.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,151 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 4 - Published: 1/7/2013 - Frank L., Neville L. - Complete