This is the prologue to my first novel I'm looking for feedback

this is my own work not a fan fiction and one i hop people will come to enjoy so yeah its about a demon kings heir im not good at this whole summary thing yet so please bare with me please and thank you.

2 new heroes arise.

It is about demons, not a full story, just a preview. This my first one so I hope it is at least a little good.

the story is about a boy vector who after a careless mistake had his entire life change this his story the story of him and the demon who stole his soul

Title makes no sense!I swear the story is better than it sounds.Please read and Please Rate&Review! And I'm sorry the Chap's are so short! D:

a very unknown boy named mark moves to a town called redlake with his father but many hidden things lie in this biys memores and what will become of his life or if his deal with death can make him a human

como dije antes no soy buena en esto mejor leanlo

WARNING - This is work in progress and many things might/will change. There won't be any drastic changes but little details might be altered to better suite the outcome of the story.