este es el primer capitulo de una historia original que estoy escribiendo asi que si len esto les agradeceria que me degaran sus comentarios de que les parecio y recomendaciones y criticas. por favor no sean crueles ya que es mi primera historia que escribo.

Story following young astronaut Sirius Amory who is setting out on a research project to discover the mysteries of "the Keyowork"; The beam of energy that connects all of the planets of Heaven's Fence that enables travel between the planets throughout space. All characters and story line is the property of Claudio Sanchez and his band Coheed and Cambria of which i am a huge fan.

I recently read the Ultimate Editions Amory Wars: SSTB & IKSS3... Claudio didn't defeat Wilhelm Ryan.. And I wanted to know what happened next, could he make every traumatic event that happened.. COUNT! Could he defeat Wilhelm Ryan... saving Heaven's fence and the children that run along it