The Wolf Pack (Under Rewrite, 17 of 18)

by Ol' Maddox

A college student from another, technologically advanced and militarized world is summoned to the country of Melromark. Armed with foreknowledge, intellect, and combat experience he tries to avoid the events he knows will come but a wrench is throw into his plans. Now all he can do is improvise like Hell.

21. REWRITE PROGRESS

I'll be putting the rewritten chapter progress on this tab. Everytime I do, I'll update it so ya'll know which I've down. I'll do it in order to avoid jumping around but here ya'll go.

Chapter 1 REWRITTEN - Grammar, typos, some dialogue. Not much change to actual assurance but characters have a more specified relation

Chapter 2 REWRITTEN - Grammar, typos, scene changes with the wolves, new parts to the plan, starting a different outlook with the heroes and also a change with the wolves. It still ends the same way but this time the relationship between the heroes will be more iffy at first. Cause I kinda screwed up with the last one.

Chapter 3 REWRITTEN - Primarily Grammar stuff, not really story changing.

Chapter 4 REWRITTEN - Primarily Grammar stuff, not really story changing.

Chapter 5 REWRITTEN - Some grammar and changes to Carter's world, not much past. Sorry for the long wait.

Chapter 6 REWRITTEN - Grammar and design changes, not much to the actual story.

Chapter 7 REWRITTEN - Grammar and ending to the story. Not a cliff hanger to the actual wave but still leaves more to known. Also changes part of the plan Carter had.

*CHAPTER 6&7 WERE UPDATED THE SAME DAY*

Chapter 8 REWRITTEN - MASSIVE change to story and fight. Ren warns Carter about the King taking action against the Militia, Luna goes on a rampage, and Carter doesn't seem all to happy with working with the other heroes anymore.

Chapter 9 REWRITTEN - Dialogue changes and different interactions between the heroes. Not the same 'buddy buddy' as before. (This is gonna cause a LOT of changes later on)

Chapter 10 REWRITTEN - Major dialogue and character interaction changes, along with plans that'll change the next few chapters.

Chapter 11 REWRITTEN - Some dialogue and time change, not much else. Was happy with original overall.

Chapter 12 REWRITTEN - Some dialogue and scene changes, not much else. Some things needed the change but others I was relatively happy with.

*CHAPTER 10, 11, &12 WERE UPDATED THE SAME DAY*

Chapter 13 REWRITTEN - Some dialogue and name changes, not much effect on story however.

Chapter 14 REWRITTEN - Some dialogue changes, not much effect on story however.

Chapter 15 REWRITTEN - Minor dialogue, that's it.

*Chapter 10-15 WERE UPDATED SAME WEEKEND*

Chapter 16 REWRITTEN - Dialogue and action changes. Ren still comes to the vault but the lead up is different, along with who is taken. Better flow overall, I hope.

Chapter 17 REWRITTEN - Not much change, a few name changes for the weapons.

*CHAPTER 16 &17 WERE UPDATED THE SAME DAY*