I was reading through a lot of these chapters and I realize that I forgot a few plot points. On top of that, the writing can be improved.
So, as soon as I can, I am planning on updating and editing this whole entire story. I don't have time to do it at this moment, but I plan to start working on it rather quickly.
Please let me know what you think about me going over and editing everything. I personally think it will be a good thing for this story.