Abhijit…. sambhalkar… tarika said in louder
Afrer heard her tension voice as soon as Abhijit put his fully focus on the kite and flies correctly..
Tarika : kaha dekhrahe ho Abhijit..janthe hai… ab humare patang ko purvi apne patangh se katnehi Wala thi...
Abhijit in louder : itna asaan nahi hai... Abhijit ka patangh kaatna….
Daya heard but he ignore his words and shook his head no...and mumbled..ye kabhi nahi sudherega…. jitna bolna hai bolo Abhijit par aaj ye Tere baate Mujh pe kaam nahi karpayega...sab bekaar hojayegi... dekhlena.
Abhijit glanced at purvi and then after at daya.
And talk to himself...yaha ek ladki..akele manja aur patangh ko sambhalne me dikkat horahi hai..aur vaha Daya... Yaha uski madad karne ki aage ane se bagair vaha araam se bait kar aisa dekhraha hai jaisi koii movie dekhraha hai…..
Kam se kam purvi ko uska help maangna chahiye, usko bulana chahiye...par ye bhi usse se koi Kam nahi hai….dono ki dono ekjaise hi hai...ek ko help maangna pasand nahi hai..aur dusra bina puche madad nahi karta...ab Mai Kya karu..
Abhijit... Dhyaan se tarika scream in louder..
Abhijit soon back to his focus on kite….
Other side purvi Suddenly heard her shout and was terrified.… on this process..her forefinger slightly cut with that sharpness of the thread...she quickly put her finger in her mouth...and blows air.. She sees tensed to all whether they have seen it or not….now she felt relief to know that no one seen this...then she continued.
Prakash : Abhijit...dekho mere patangh tho sab se unchi hai..dekh dekh..
But with in second his happiness turn into shock surprise and upset.. because his kite was fallen down….he looked at his kite with blankly..
Deepa laughing loudly…: hahaha...haan...aap Sach kaha.. while she try to control her laughing…..aap...aapki.. patangh tho bahut unchi jarahi hai...shayad vo aapki haatme bi nahi ayega..
Listening her comment all are looking at direction and sees his kite fallen down..
Tarika with smiling : dad aapki patangh ko kisine kaat Diya...ab aap tho...haar gayi..
Prakash taunting the person playfully: batanahi..koun hai...mere dushman...mere patangh ko kaatliya..hmphf…
Deepa : shayad vo aapse bahut naraj hai... isliye..apka patangh kaatdiya hogi.
Prakash : naraj…
Deepa turns her gaze towards purvi.. prakash follow her looks and saw purvi… purvi anjaan banke apne patangh ko bachane me lagi hoti hai...
Prakash : Matlab purvi ne...he asked her in little loud..
Remaining people also looked at her…. purvi heard all then she quickly apologize him..
Purvi said with concerned : sorry Maine jaanbujkar aapke patangh ko nahi kaati...Mai apne patangh ko keechraha hu tab achaanak beech me aapka patangh agaya aur cut gayi….she said all fastly while focus on her flying kite.
Prakash feel happy to see her concern and sadness about him,he said with smile : it's ok beta….. game me aisa hote rehte hai...chal Deepa ab araam se baitkar dekhte hai….
Tarika : dhyaan rakhna Abhijit...Hume hi jeetna chahiye..
Abhijit in louder ( trying to divert Daya attention towards purvi ) : haan haan tarika...Jeet tho hamare hi hogi...aur purvi ko bi akele patangh aur manja ko sambhalne me mushkil horahi hai..so hum easily uski patangh ko kaat sakte hai…
Purvi is not ready to accept her defeat,then she immediately gave him the counter answer : Mai itni asaani se har nahi mannewali hu…aur aaj tho Jeet mere hoti hai…. dekhlena..
Abhijit again in louder with smirked : achha..tu akele mujhe haravogi… teekhe dekhte hai koun kisko harata hai…
Deepa ask her : beta mujhe do Mai pakdti hu manja
Purvi : it's ok Mai manage karlungi...aur aap bhi abhi tak khade hui hai...dhak gayi hogi...aap vaha jakar rest kijiye...Mai sambhalungi.
Now both teams have tough competition between them.
Purvi struggles ...now she can't manage to flies her kite properly.. because of slight cut on her finger..so she exchanged the things in her hand..
She holding manja in right hand and the thread in left hand,but again she struggles to flies kite by her left hand…. Now she can't flies her kite more….
Now her kite was in very dangerous zone….and it will cut at any second by Abhijit's kite.
Daya watches at all, purvi feel struggle with her hands, and now her kite was in going to cut..
Abhijit with winning smile : purvi….dekh...bass kuch hi second me Tere patangh ko Mai kaatnejaraha hu... tarika...is saal bi winner Hum hi hai.
Tension increases in inside of purvi, she tried her level best to save her kite...but it's not possible to her...now she loss her hope to being win this competition….
Daya felt sad for seeing her disappointed face….he didn't want to see her fallen face.
Abhijit : tarika bass aur thoda dagha chodiye….bass kuch hi dur hai... phir Jeet hamari hai…
Now purvi loss her hope and decided to she leaves the thread, but at same time….one hand came in between and holding the thread.. then she turn her head and sees daya, he stood on her beside and pull the kite away..
Purvi stunned at his sudden entry, and she surprisedly staringing at him.
Abhijit watches all this, and broad smile appears on his face...
Daya tells to purvi: aap manja sambhaliye...Mai patangh ko dekhta hu.
Purvi down her looks and and simply nodded her head…
Here prakash aur Deepa are smiling at each other seeing them.
Tarika little upset: ohh no... Abhijit...ab Kya hoga….
Abhijit : purvi ye tho cheating hai...koi teesra Kaise entry lesakte is competition me.
Daya : hello..yaha koi teesra nahi hai..dikhta nahi hai Kya..yaha team me dolog hi hai…
Abhijit : par tum pehle se iss team me nahi haina..
Before Daya could say, purvi says..pehla nahi hai tho Kya hua... ab hai mere team me mere saath...mere life line partner bankar…. heard this sentence Daya face lit up and a smile appears on his continuous ..so...ab aap apna patangh ko sambhaliye Verna...aap harjayenge… ask to Daya...aur aap Daya ji...aaj hum kisi bi haalat me jiju ko haranahi hoga…
Daya glanced at Abhijit..
Abhijit also looks at them and challenge them with smiling : dekhte hai…
Daya gave reply to him through his eyes as ok dekhte..
Now both ladies encourage their partners..to get win.
Tarika : Comeon Abhijit... jaldi kaat do..aur prove Karo aapko koi haranahi sakte..
Purvi : achha...jiju ko koi aur tho nahi hara sakte par, mere daya ji tho harayenge..
listening mere Daya ji word from her, he stunned again by her words, and When he heard her, a thousand harps seemed to be ringing in his mind.
haan Daya ji...aap ye bhul jao vo aapke Bhai hai..bass ye yaad rakhna hai ki vo aapke competitor hai aur aap unhe harana hoga...teekhe..
Daya smiles at her way of thinking..and her way asking like a small kid.
Abhijit : haan haan aur aaj Mai bhi bhulunga ki Mai apne Bhai se nahi balki ek ajnaabhi se ladraha hu…
Daya : teekhe...as you wish Abhijit….
Now Abhijit shocked to see scenario...he immediately glanced at daya with his open mouth, Daya gave smile to Abhijit..
Abhijit glanced at daya then after at his kite..
Now his kite in dangerous zone…
Daya : bol abhi...kaat du tere patangh ko...asked him with smirk.
Tarika with hurried: Abhijit….kuch Karo..jaldi…
Abhijit tried to save his kite.
Purvi in tensed : Dayji...Kya dekhrahe ho...jiju ka patangh ko kaatlena...Verna vo hamare patangh cut jayegi.
Daya thinks in mind : ye Mai kaha phass Gaya hu….ek taraf Abhijit aur dusre taraf purvi...aaj Mai kisi ko bi harte hui dekh nahi sakta hu...ab Mai Kya karu…
He glanced at once Abhijit, Abhijit also looked at daya..he understood his contraction,
Seeing him in hesitation, he assured him by a smile.
Daya also gave smile in reply...and ask apology him through his eyes...abhi nodded head it's ok.. with assured smile.
Purvi with very tensed face: Daya ji..jaldi kaatiye….jaldi... please...jaldi kaat lo….but still Daya unable to decide what to do... other side Abhijit eagerly waiting for his action.
Seeing Daya in dilemma, purvi placed her hand on daya's hand and pull the thread..then Abhijit's kite cuts by their kite….
Daya didn't want to do..but unexpectedly it was happened by in his hands.
Tarika disappointedly : ohh no...humare patang kaat gayi..
Abhijit act as he really upsets : ohh shit…
Purvi very happy and in excitement : ohho….hum Jeet gayi..jiju aap haargaye….
Daya was happy on the one hand and sad on the other, happy for seeing happiness on Purvi's face,and sad for first time Abhijit jaanbujkar uskeliye hargaya… he glanced at Abhijit, Abhijit also looked at him..
Daya apologize him by moving his lips, Abhijit gave him reply it's ok..through his eyes..
Now purvi move to near Abhijit and tarika and ask them with proud looks: dekhliya aap jiju...aap har gayi aur Mai Jeet gayi..
Tarika with fake attitude: haan haan...humjanthe hai...par tu akele nahi Jeet paate agar Daya tume help nahi kiya hua tho..
Purvi agreed with her: haan tarika tumne sahi kaha….agar aaj Daya ji ne sahi samay pe nahi Aya hua tho…
Daya : aap bhi bahut achha kosish Kiya hai.. purvi ji..
Purvi with slight smile : Par ye jeet, aap ki vaja se hi Mila... thank you…
Both looked at each other..
What aap Jeet gayi hai purvi ji.. aravind asked her .
Again seeing him, Daya felt uncomfortable.
Purvi with smiling face: haan hum jeet Gaye, sirf aur sirf Daya ji ki vaja se..
Aravind : achha.. thanks Daya..mere team member ko help karnekeliye.. thank you so much.
Daya made a forced smile and say : it's ok.. he turns his face on other side.
Then Aravind holding her right hand in his hand, and congrats her…
Aravind holding her hand: congratulations purvi ji..
But little scream ouchhh...came out from her mouth..
All get worried for her after heard her scream..
But Daya immediately separate their hands,and gently took her hand in his hand, ask in concern...Kya hua...dikhao aapne haath…he saw a little cut on her finger, and he quickly shouted on aravind….ye Kya Kiya tumne...itni jorse koi pakdte hai Kya..ab dekh purvi ko kitni dard horaha hai…
Aravind stunned at his reaction,he try to say something...par Mai tho…
Daya showing his hand : aap please kuch mat boliye ...then after he asked to her.. purvi ji aap pehle neeche chaliye mere saath.. maram lagadeta hu aapko….chaliye
Purvi shocked first time to see him in angry mood... She thinks .. it is not the right time to speak in the middle,..and if she speaks in middle ,it will made him angry again, that's why she stood silently…and stares at him with some nervous.
Rest of all watches at him surprisingly, Deepa steps forward to help purvi..but prakash holding her hand and stopped her.. Deepa glanced at him..he assured her something about through eyes.. Deepa move back but inside she worried for purvi.
Abhijit and tarika exchange their glances at each other.
Aravind unable to understand, what's wrong with him...he blankly stares at both.
Daya again asked to her : purvi... chaliye…
Ji.. haan... purvi replies and went down with him
Chot tho purvi ji ko lagi par dard tho daya ji ko horaha hai..Kyu... aravind Distracted by something, so he could utter a word in his mind.
Listening his words, all were stares at him...then he realized..he speaks out his mind words,then he asked apology from all, sorry..vo mujhe patabi nahi Chala ki Mai Kyu..aisa bola.
Deepa : it's ok beta..par tumne Jo kuch bi bola, sahi bola..
Aravind : Matlab..Mai samjhe nahi..
Prakash: Matlab ye hai ki...Daya abhi se purvi ko itni dhyaan rakrahi hai tho...Shaadi ki baad tho aur dhyaan rakhte hai mere beti ko….
Aravind : Shaadi ki baad..
Deepa: haan beta hum log be decide kiya ki tarika Abhijit Shaadi ki saath saath Daya purvi ka Shaadi bi hojaye..dono Jodiya ki Shaadi ek hi mandap me karneka sochliya hai hum.
After learned the truth, aravind felt disappointed and his face seems become sad,he was unable to digest the truth.
Abhijit noticed his fallen face..then he moves near to him and placed his hand on his shoulder.
Aravind looked at him and gave forced smile to him..he feels sad in inside but he show a constant smile on his face.
Prakash: ab chale hum sab bhi neeche chalte hai..
Here at hall
Daya gently applying ointment on her finger, while blows air on finger.
Purvi is completely lost in his thoughts, and her eyes are staring at him, she forgets about her surroundings... for some time...She feels his concern and caring for her.
Daya with worriedly while applying ointment on her finger : jyada dard tho nahi horahi haina..
Purvi slightly smiling: Daya ji...aap kuch jyada hi tension horaha hai..ye chot tho bahut...chotasa chot hai...ye tho yuhi teekh hojayegi…
Daya finished that and still in little angry mood : haan haan..jantha hu...ye chot choti si hai...par dard tho jyada hi hogi..agar vo chot Chota ya badha..dard tho dard hi hai.
Purvi : haan.. maanthi hu..dard tho ek jaise hi hoga..par ab mujhe utna dard nahi horahi hai jitna pehle hua tha..
Daya : Kya jarurat thi,ungli pe chot ane ki baad bi aap patangh udane ki kosish ki..Kyu...sirf competition me jeetne keliye...aap ko itna shauk hai Jeetna aur aap us Jeet ko hasil karne keleye aap apne baare me bi nahi sochte…
Purvi listening him silently with constant smile on her face.
Daya : Mai aapse kuch puchraha hu...par aap hassrahi hai..
Purvi : kyun ki mere lie jeet ya haar se koi phark nahi padega...mere najar me dono ek jaisa hi hai...Mai kabhi chahkar Jeetna chahti hu ya harna chahti hu..Jo hona hai vahi hojata kabhi kuch hasil karne ka kosish bhi nahi karungi….
Daya : agar aise baat hai tho, aap usi samay Kyu nahi rukha jab aapko ye chot lagi thi.
Purvi looked at him with surprise…
Daya looking at her : Kya hua aisa chaunk kar kyu dekhrahi ho….yahi haina mai kaise janthe hu.
Purvi nodded her head
Daya : Mai usi vakt dekha tha jab aapki ungli me ye chot lagi thi..aur maine ye bhi dekhliya aap sabhi ko dekh raha tha shayad koi aapko dekhliya tho nahi…chot lagti Hui.. haina..
Purvi : haan… verna sab bekaar me pareshaan hojayegi..
Daya : Matlab sab ki fikar hai aapko..par khud ki nahi..
Purvi : aisa kuch nahi hai..
Daya : phir Kyu aap competition continue Kiya...aur jab aunty help karna chahti hai tho...Kyu Mana kiya.
Purvi : aapne dekha nahi maa bhi kaphi der se khadi hai...aur dhak chuki hai.. isliye Maine MAA ko manakiya, aur aap ye puchne se pehle hi Mai aapko batarahi hu ..Mai apko takleef nahi Dena chahti hu isliye Maine aapki help nahi maangi..par bina maange aap Mera help ki.. uskeleye aapko bahut bahut shukriya..
Daya don't know what to say..so he only staring at her blankly.
Purvi : ab agar us competition me Jeetne ki baat Kare tho... actually mujhe pehle se jeetne me koi interest nahi tha….aur beech me mere ungli pe chot lagi...phir maine decide Kiya….aaj phirse jiju hi jeetnewale hai...par achaanak aap mere help karne aaye...aur jiju ka patangh ki peecha pada... par I know jiju aur aap dono ek dusre ki patangh ko kabhi nahi kaat te, haina…
Maine dekha aap kitna sochraha hai….aap bahut confusion me hai us samay… aur aap ko fasla Lena me bi dikkat horaha hai..but I am sorry..pehli baar Maine aap dono Bhai ki beech ki Jo pyaar hai Jo parwa hai, ek dusre ki man me Jo rule aap logon ne eks
Dusare keliye banaya aur itni saalon se follow ki..uss rule ko Maine hi break kardiya…..I am extremely sorry..
Daya : nahi... purvi... sorry bolne ka koi jarurat nahi….ye tho unexpectedly hogaya hai..tum thodi na jaanbujkar kiya.
Purvi : haan...vo Maine jaanbujkar jiju ka patangh kaatdiya.
Purvi gave a high voltage shock to Daya by her words.
Daya : what...Kya kaha...aapne… he asked her with suspiciously…..aap jaanbujkar kaatdiya…. Par kyu…Kyu Kiya aap aisa…
Mai batata hu Daya purvi ne aisa kyu kiya..
Daya turns around and sees Abhijit and all
Abhijit came near to him and tells : Mai batata hu Daya purvi mere patangh ko Kyu kaatliya.. sorry sorry...kaatna pada hai..
Daya : what...ye tum Kya bolraha hai abhi...Mai kuch samjhe nahi.
Abhijit : actually hua hai ki...jab tumhare patangh mere patangh ki pass thi, tabhi vaha ek aur patangh bi dusri taraf se mere patangh ko kaatnewali thi...par us patangh se pehle tumhara patangh se mere patangh kaat gayi..now he looks at purvi and ask...par mujhe ek doubt tha Purvi..jab Mai haarne hi wala tha,par tum beech me Kyu jaldi ki Daya ko mere patangh ko kaatnekeliye…
All family members curiously looking at her.
Purvi : kyunki Mai nahi chahti hu aap kisi aur ki Karan haar Jaye...Daya ji jeete ya aap Jeete dono ek hi baat hai…Mai jaanthi hu aapko kabhi bhi bura nahi lagega...apne Bhai ki haat me haarne se... par mujhe bura lagta hai agar aap koi ajnabhi ki haath me haarne se, aap is Ghar ki sirf damad hi nahi, is Ghar ki bade beta ki Tarah hai.. aapko koi apna hi harasakta hai..baharwale nahi…. isliye Maine jaanbujkar aapke patangh Daya ji ki haathon se katwaya..I am sorry jiju..
All are looking at surprise,Daya wonders about her presence of mind,and her way of thinking about their relationship she giving priority to his brother's prestige.
Abhijit praising her : wah.. purvi..abhi se apne jiju ka samman ki baare me sochrahi ho….aisa saali tho har kisi ko nahi milti, shayad Mai pichle Janam me kuch achha kaam Kiya hoga, isliye, mujhe tarika jaise life partner Mila,aur tumhare Tarah jijaji ka bhalayi sochnewale saali bi Mila…
Haina Daya Maine sahi kahana..
Daya said in distractedly : bilkul sahi kaha tumne... while he thinking about her..
Teddy : first of all thanks to you for giving your opinion as review, thank you so much,and your nickname is very pretty.
Guest s : thanks for reviewing...and I am really sorry for I am going to disappointing you...I hope you understand.
Guest : thanks for your precious suggestion, I understood you are a great lover of your favorite couple,..here I want to tell you something, mujhe reviews ka shauk nahi hai..jin jin ko pasand ayega vahi review bhejange, simple si baat hai….vaise mujhe achha lagrahi hai ye jaankar aap undono ko kitna like kar rahi hai….aur ye story bi Sach me rediculous hi hai...Mai kaise unko kisi aur ki saath pair kar sakthi hu….. kyunki unhe already real life partner haina unka wife ...un dono ka Jodi bhi achhi hai…..aur unka man me uski alaiwa kisi aur keliye jagha bi nahi hona chahiye, kyunki vo apne wife se bahut pyaar karte hai tho vo kaise kisi aur se pyaar karega..….haina….
Ab story ki baare me baat karenge tho, duniya me har insaan ko ek hi cheez pasand nahi ate,..aisa hi ek hi hero ek hi heroin bi pasand nahi ate..sabhi ko apne apne pasand, napasand cheese aur log bi hote hai.. sabhi ka soch bi alag hote hai...aapko vo dono pasand hai...aur .kisi aur ko..koi aur couple..jiska soch usika hai..haina...mujhe aapki baaton se bura tho nahi lagi, actually kuch Dino se mere dimag me ek soch mujhe bahut pareshaani karrahi hai..Kya tum mere uljhan ko Suljhaneme madad karpavoge.. please….
Vo Kya haina...yaha is Cid fiction me bahut sare stories hai Cid characters pe,, kuch stories based on abhi Daya ka friendship, and some stories simple love and romantic type, some stories so bold type,
Mera doubt ye hai..is site ko koi bhi open karsakta hai..agar iss stories ko real life characters ...means Jin logon ko jo naam serial me use ki vahi naam use karke unka fans stories likhraha hai, phir vo actors us stories ko read kiya tho vo log kaise feel karte hai...unka fans unhi pe Kaise kaise stories likhraha hai...Kya un logon ko bura lagega ya kush, unlogon ka reaction Kya hai kuch aisa bold scenes padne ki baad….
I know kuch log iska Ulta jawab denge...par Kya karu..mere doubt ko clarify karna bhi jaruri hai... isliye….aur Maine bahut sochne ki baad Mai kaise unlogon pe stories likh sakti hu... actually Mujhe koi hak nahi hai..unsab characters pe story likhne ka aur pair karna ka…. Mai kaise kisi ko couple imagine karsakti hu...agar padne ki baad unkaa real life partners ko bura lage tho…..
Sochlo humare khud ka gehra relation kisi aur ki saath kuch pal keliye closely rahe...aur sab log ko undono ko saath me dekhkar undono ka Jodi ko tareef ki tho... humko kaise lagega..Kya Hume achhe lagega us tareef sunkar…
Sorry if any word of mine hurt anyone feelings... it's just a small doubt from my side.
I have no rights to make them couple, because they already have their own real-life partners and they were happy with them.
Sorry Cid characters, for writing story by used your on screen names, I like your performance and your on screen family…. But they are only family on on-screen not really,and they are very lucky persons
Whoever you are is a real life partner..
Always be happy and keep your real life partners happy.
Last but not least, Mai phirse kehraha hu..mujhe reviews keliye koi shauk nahi hai….dont misunderstanding me..Maine reviews nahi Mila isliye ye chod Diya aisa sochliya tho ye sab aap logon ka galatfemi hoga, Mai jaanthi hu ye sab padne ki baad kuch log aisa hi sochega, isliye Mai pehle hi bolraha hu, Mai is site me stories padkar excitement me ek story likha, but now I'm realized my mistake.
Sorry for those people who likes this story, simply sorry bolne se kuch nahi hosakta..phir bi Kya karu.. hosake tho maaf Karo..
Good bye.