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Reviews: 22
Chapters: 13
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Chapter One
savethemadscientist - Dec 17, 2019
Really good opening chapter, definitely pulled me and made me want to read more.
Chapter Two
Fullshadow - Jun 14, 2019
'I'm Inconvenient, it's nice to meet you Jessica' HAHAHAH. Oh my fucking god I love her
savethemadscientist -Dec 19, 2019
I'm sensing that the relationship between Dean and Skye is a love, hate one and it really funny to read their interactions. Skye really does make me think of Tinkerbell. Thanks for making a character that is short, it's nice to be able to relate to her in the height department as I'm less than 5 foot tall.
Chapter Three
savethemadscientist - Dec 19, 2019
Communication through song, I love it. It really works for people like Dean and Skye who have trouble expressing themselves normally. I feel sorry for Sam, stuck with the two of them.
Chapter Four
Fullshadow - Jun 15, 2019
Wow good memory, I mean damn. You got what Dean and Sam said to a T. Well done.
Savethemadscientist - Dec 19, 2019
I'm getting the feeling that Skye and her mum have a bad relationship. I understand how Skye feels about looking younger than she is, I often get mistaken as being younger than I am.
Chapter Five
Fullshadow - Jun 15, 2019
'The man really did seem to always be able to find the perfect parking space. Maybe he'd sacrificed a few lambs to the traffic god, if there were such a thing' Oh my god. Hahahahahah. Oh my fucking god. Now that was a good one
savethemadscientist - Dec 19, 2019
Yep Dean, you are so screwed when it comes to Skye. I am loving the nicknames the three of them keep calling each other.
Chapter Six
savethemadscientist - Dec 19, 2019
I think Dean loves his car a little too much. I loved Dean's reaction to Skye's new clothes, it was brilliant. We learned a little bit more about Skye in this chapter.
Chapter Seven
Fullshadow - Jun 16, 2019
"Dean's voice dripped with sarcasm so think you could butter bread with it'
'He's a few sandwiches short of a picnic, if you get my drift.'. Love that one
Love sarcasm
savethemadscientist - Dec 20, 2019
Sam really is playing matchmaker with Dean and Skye. Sneaky reference to the Wizard of Oz at the start there.
Chapter Eight
savethemadscientist - Dec 21, 2019
Skye's acting skills are quite impressive if she managed to get Dean thinking what he did. I do love the banter between Dean and Skye.
Chapter Nine
Fullshadow - Jun 16, 2019
I can see Dean humming the Cops theme song.
And i so need a tank-top that says 'Tell Me Not To Do Something And I'll Do It Twice And Take Pictures'. I mean damn, that's so me.
savethemadscientist - Dec 21, 2019
So we have a bit of Sam on his own, it's scary that Sam can hotwire a car.
Chapter Ten
savethemadscientist - Dec 21, 2019
Dean really is a typical man sometimes, didn't get past the mental age of 5, it is really amusing to read.
Chapter Eleven
savethemadscientist - Dec 22, 2019
It's sad to think how low Skye's self esteem has to be for her to not think there's anything special about her. It is curious that she could see the ghost children before the others could and that they saved her.
Chapter Twelve
R.K. Messilson - Aug 7, 2019
Hi! Just wanted to let you know there's something wrong with this chapter. The chapter has a bunch of formatting coding embedded in it that makes it difficult to read.
savethemadscientist - Dec 22, 2019
Sam actually does remind me of the BFG now that I think about it. We also have another time of Skye's ability to comfort people.
Chapter Thirteen
Guest - Jul 25, 2019
I so love this!
Tcarpenter - Jun 21, 2019
I enjoyed this story. I especially like the relationship between the characters and the way they banter and tease with each other. I also like the way you wrote Sam.
Lady Ramona - Nov 12, 2019
Well, very well done.. I'ma gonna quote our favorite guy...
Son of a Bitch!
savethemadscientist - Dec 22, 2019
We have the end of the first case together for the three of them. Now onto the next one.