Quick Update
My laptop has come in, and it's time to start writing. I have read the first chapter, and have decided to rewrite it in its entirety. I have read all the reviews and the beginning doesn't really make sense. What happened, doesn't make enough sense for everyone to hate him. If anyone did have a right to hate Natsu, it would probably have to be Cana, and even then she has no right.
So, I am starting to write the new beginning. Chapter one will probably drag into two or three chapters, and then I will heavily edit chapter 2, before following on and evening the chapter lengths and finishing my edits.
Mainly, this is so I can catch up on my own story, to successfully attempt to complete it.
What do you think about a new story title?
"Tales of the Prince" Maybe?
