Oaky-dokey, this'll be my first attempt at a story on.. well ever.
Anywho, this be a Naruto fanfic. In drafts of stories, I've noticed I attempt to move the story along too quick and as a result, pay little attention to detail. If that is the case in this… I apologise
Now, context! This will be an AU wherein ya boy Minato gets drunk, has a three way (as you do) and shit hits the fan. Of course chaos ensues! And the world will never be the same and all that jazz.
I'll try using Japanese suffixes, simply because I like them and Japanese nouns. Places will be in good ole' English as well as Jutsu. I'll try not to screw up
Pairings wise Naruto, the absolute Playah', will have a harem… because I like multiple pairings and am too weak willed to choose just one
I'm thinking, Hinata (of course), Yugito (same age as our hero!), Kurotsuchi (pattern forming) and finally a female Haku… well a normal Haku in my opinion but nobody cares about that and just for clarification (I strongly believe that Haku was a lass and not a lad). Sasuke gets pinned with the OC for this fic in Naruto's twin-not-twin, Mito as she'll be called
But I've blabbed enough, on with the tale of tyranny, action and Ramen!
Bijū talking/summon talking/Jutsu
Bijū thinking/summon thinking
Average joe talking
Average joe thinking
(Rated M for Mature and Macaroni!)
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It was a clear black night with clear a white moon, Minato and Kushina were in a tavern in a village a bit of a ways off from the Village hidden in the leaves. The dynamic duo were having a night on the town. They usually did this in a different village, as to not draw attention to the fact that they are together, and to simply have a good time without someone trying to blow smoke up Minato's ass
The tavern was busy, not overly so to the point of moving around being difficult or annoying, but busy to the point where there were very few spare seats
Minato and Kushina were sat at a small table in the corner of the tavern, merely enjoying each other's company… for now
Sipping Sake and making small talk, the couple were interrupted by someone sliding into the seat next to Kushina. Now Kushina would be the first to admit that she was no expert of social etiquette, however she was pretty sure that taking a seat without asking is somewhat rude. However when she saw who it was that had taken a seat next to her, her eyes widened and her eyebrows rose
"Tsunade!?" Minato's attention was drawn to his wife at the sudden exclamation. Having briefly zoned out up to this point, he looked at who had taken a seat at their table. Low and behold there she was, that last of the Senju, old torpedo breasts herself
"Kushi-chan! How've you been!?" Tsunade responded. Her voice was loud and her tone was exaggerated. She was clearly three-sheets-under already. 'Not too surprising' Minato mused
"Me!? How've you been? I haven't seen you in years, where have you been? What have you been up too?" Tsunade's hazel eyes lost some their enthusiasm at the questions, however she responded nonetheless
"Drinking, gambling and running from debt collectors!" She all but cheered in response
"Who woulda' thunk" Minato muttered as he was about to take a sip from his Sake saucer
"Say something side burns?" Tsunade resounded with a scowl and a tick mark of her forehead. In response, the vaunted Yellow Flash coughed into his saucer and proceed to exclaim his innocence
The trio spoke well into the night. Kushina told Tsunade about her and Minato, as it was a secret known only to a select few, and Tsunade could be considered family. They spoke of recent and past ordeals and told stories. At some point, a young girl with shoulder length black hair dressed in a dark gray kimono came over to the table and told Tsunade that she was returning to their hotel so that she could go to bed
Minato and Kushina learnt that this young woman was Shizune Katō, Tsunade's apprentice and also Dan Katō's niece. The couple dare not open that can of worms and left it at that
By around midnight, the tavern had emptied mostly and only a few people remained. During this time, a drinking game had kicked off at the table
They were having a game of 'Never have I ever', where if you've done what the speaker has never done, then you drink. They'd been playing for a while now, and things had been said, where if they were said sober, then the person who spoke would never be looked at the same way ever again. Put simply, they were beyond hammered. Hey the life of a Shinobi is dangerous and usually short (if your not very good that is), so people do as much stuff as possible to have a 'full' life
Around two in the morning, Tsunade asked a zinger
"Never have I ever-er, h *hic* had a tree some!" Nobody drank. Oh dear. "What! You two *hic* have never-r gotten fruity in the sack!?" The question was slurred and loudly asked. They received 'looks'. Not for the first time that night
"D-do Shadow Clones count?" Minato inquired. He then laughed himself silly while Kushina adopted a sultry look on her face
"Mmm-hmm, I could really go for some Shadow Clones right now" Kushina said almost wistfully in a husky tone. Minato and Kushina briefly stared at each other, they began to giggle. Perversely
"R *hic* room for one more?" Tsunade asked
Now, perhaps there was some higher power up there at this very moment that decided to make some alterations to the fate of the world with all the grace of a freight train, as little did anyone know that this round of sexual intercourse would have unimaginable repercussions, on such a huge scale that an abnormally large Toad sat in a bath of oil who-knows-where managed to fart himself awake from the whacked out dream he was having about a red head with anger issues, and a blond with bi-polar disorder
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The next morning, across the elemental nations, the 'bro's' of the world awoke due to a disturbance in the force. The boys could sense it. Some Simp out there had found the grail and had stepped into the promised lands. At exactly eight o'clock that morning, all of the bro's from the Raikage in the Village hidden in the Clouds to Zabuza Momochi in the Village hidden in the Mist simultaneously nodded their heads in ultimate respect. For somewhere out there, one the boys had reached god-hood
Minato Namikaze felt it. His ascension. As he regained consciousness, he felt two weight on his chest. Cracking open an eye, Minato saw a head of light red hair and a head of blond hair. Minato turned his eyes to the ceiling and acknowledged his fellow bros through the force
Then he came back down to reality. Both Kushina and Tsunade groaned and began to stir. Minato panicked. He could feel the heavenly fun-bags of both his wife and Tsunade pressed up against him. 'There's no instructions of what to do in this situation in the ancient bro codex!' Minato screamed mentally
Kushina awoke to the heart beat of her beloved husband. Her core felt sore, wet and warm. Her legs were shaky and her abs were achy. 'An intense night. Definitely Shadow Clones' Kushina adorned a content smile. She lifted her head and went to turn to look up at her husband when she came face to face, eye to eye with none other than Tsunade Senju
Tsunade awoke to pulse of somebody. She felt sore. 'This hasn't happened in a while, well, who's the poor bastard who's about lose their manhood' she went to look up at the soon to be eunuch, only to come face to face, eye to eye with none other than Kushina Uzumaki. 'Fuck' oh fuck indeed
Violet eyes stared into hazel eyes and hazel eyes stared into violet eyes. They were both still as the grave whilst looking at each other
Seeing the stare down. Minato adhered to his primal instincts. He played dead
That morning was deemed so secret, that an entirely new class of secret had to be made to ensure that this whole fiasco was to never be spoken of again. And so the first ever Z-Class secret was born, not to be spoken right up to when a persons catching Z's in a coffin. This was a genuine law passed by the almighty Yondaime Hokage simply to stop the worlds foremost medic from castrating him
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A whole month after the unspeakable event, Minato rose from his bed. He looked out of his bedroom window at the crimson sky. 'Red sky at morning, shepherds warning. An ill omen. Blood will be spilt today' Minato could only hope that it wouldn't be his
Minato had left home for the office before his wife had awoken. After the event, Kushina became a dominatrix as punishment. Her Adamantine Chakra Chains had never experienced such extraordinary use before. She put the fear of god into Minato with those chains
The day went by like most. Slowly. On the plus side, Jiraiya was around and in the office spending time with Minato, as was the Sandaime Hokage. Hiruzen Sarutobi. As a result, there was no need for any ANBU to guard the Hokage, as his present company was more than capable
That was false
They felt it before anything else. A low, far off rumbling that could be felt through minor tremors in the floor. But it got closer. And closer. Until it felt like an earthquake that measured 10 on the Richter scale was bearing down on top of them
Jiraiya began to panic. He knew these rumbles. He could feel the rage. 'Tsunsde!?'. Jiraiya hadn't felt such fury in her foot steps since that time she beat him half to death for performing observational research on her. Jiraiya shuddered at the memory
Hiruzen was having similar thoughts. He just hoped that typhoon Tsunade would pass quickly. And that whoever her target was had their affairs in order
Minato was scared. He had no clue what was going on, but the fearful looks on his Sensei's and predecessor's faces told him that he should be scared too. Just as Minato was about to Flying Raijin to the roof of the tower to see what was going on, his poor door was launched at him at around three hundred miles per hour. Only experience and reflexes allowed him to duck under the table to dodge the door which launched out of his office window. Shattering it first
Like a scared mole, Minato 'peeped' over his desk to see death. Tsunade stood in the threshold in a wide stance, head tilted down with eyes shut and fists balled. She suddenly looked up and opened her eyes and saw the object of her rage pitifully peer over his desk at her. She barely noticed the old pervert and her Sensei standing in the room
"You!" Minato ducked back under the table. Tsunade marched through the office over to the desk. She punched through it and pulled Minato through it from underneath, splitting the desk in two
Tsunade held Minato up by the strap of his Jōnin vest. Minato played dead. It had no effect on the wild Tsunade. Bringing him closer to her face, Tsunsde spoke in a low growl
"Which limb would you like to lose first?" By this point, ANBU had arrived at the door to the office to defend their beloved Hokage, with the commander Dragon at the head of the squad. Noticing who it was, he did his duty and made the logical decision
"ANBU… retreat!" A wise choice. Being made of sterner stuff, and also having the balls to attempt to quell Tsunade's fury, the original occupants stuck around
"Tsunade-Hime, what's the matter?" Jiraiya prodded. Tsunade turned to Jiraiya with a life ending look on her face
"Do you know what this Bastard did to me!?" Worried now, Hiruzen attempted to step in
"Tsunade-Chan, use your words now" Tsunade turned to Hiruzen
"Words!? Don't talk to me of words! This son-of-a-bitch here should take that advice" she shook the 'dead' Minato to get her point across. " And not his Dick!"
Well Jiraiya and Hiruzen certainly didn't expect that. Sporting bewildered looks for a moment, they both said at the exact same time
"What?" Minato let his tongue hang out for good measure to try and make his act seem more believable
Jiraiya, being a creature of habit, let his mind roam. While not drawing any conclusions, he did begin to blush and giggle
"My my Hime, if it's male genitalia you're after, I could be of service" Minato was momentarily dropped while Tsunade broke Jiraiya's… everything
Ever the pacifist, Hiruzen tried to calm Tsunsde down
"Tsunade-Chan, what's the matter?" Jiraiya managed to lift his head slightly so that he could listen. Tsunade walked back over so Minato and picked him up by the ankle and help him upside down
"This blonde Bastard" she spat out "impregnated me!"
Pin-drop silence. While Tsunade was about to preform the iron lotus with Minato but instead launch him halfway to the land of wind, Shizune came charging in
"No Tsunsde-Sama! It's not good for the baby!" That really hit it home for Jiraiya and Hiruzen. Tsunade did seem to calm down at this and dropped Minato
Minato rose to his feet. His mind was moving faster than his Flying Raijin. Impregnated. Woman. Pregnant. Pregnant woman. Tsunade is a woman. A pregnant woman now. The unspeakable event. Father
The silence was interrupted by raucous laughter coming from the threshold where the office occupants looked up to see Kushina laughing. She was leaning forward holding her stomach while pointing at Tsunade
"You too?!"
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Minato had always prided himself on having some semblance of honour. As much honour as a cheating, conniving, back stabbing Shinobi could have. However, when he learned that he managed to get not only his beloved wife Kushina pregnant, but also Tsunade of the Sannin. He lost that honour
Tsunade wouldn't admit it to Minato, however she was excited. Perhaps her maternal hormones were kicking in early but, she already loved the little meat sack cooking in her womb
Kushina was down-right ecstatic. It was all she'd talk about with whoever she could tell and whoever would listen. Of course this led to some interesting scenarios, one of which occurred whilst at the Ichiraku's ramen stand, where the adorable little Ayame asked the dreaded question of 'where do babies come from'. Kushina attempted the cabbage patch, Teuchi the stork and Tsunsde… well never being one to beat around the bush, gave little Ayame a medical rundown of the whole procedure. Ayame has yet to speak to her father
Tsunade, as she had been, was unwilling to stay in the Village hidden in the Leaves. So, she stayed in one of the small towns that surrounds the great village. Minato would visit daily
Regardless of the different mothers, he'd be there for both of the children no matter what. He often found himself believing that this was the real reason for the invention of the Flying Raijin
Shizune had to work overtime to ensure that Tsunsde didn't indulge in any vices. She'd be dammed if she let her little brother or sister be corrupted or harmed by her teacher whilst still in the womb. She didn't say that out loud of course, however her doting, servant attitude spoke volumes
Nine weeks after the reveal, it was time for the ultrasound
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It had been decided that when it came time for Tsunade to go into labour, she would be brought back to the village to give birth in the hospital. As was the same with checkups and the like
Kushina and Tsunade went together along with Minato. By this point, both Tsunsde and Kushina were sporting noticeable bumps. This was all done in secret of course, as were it common knowledge, it would be like throwing out an invitation to the the other villages that said 'come stop the Yondaimes brood from developing!'. So both Kushina and Tsunade were teleported to the hospital room by Minato
Tsunade and Kushina had become very close. Kushina would often accompany Minato when he'd visit Tsunade and the soon to be mothers already planned to raise both of their children as brothers or sisters
The trio's doctor was none other than Shizune. She had always wanted to work on the labour ward. She also wants a baby now. Where's Kakashi when you need him?
Kushina went first
"You'll he pleased to now that your baby girl is healthy as can be!" Kushina was overjoyed. 'A little girl!'. She couldn't wait to talk about boys, couldn't wait to cuddle all day and night, couldn't wait to clean up and kiss better any cuts and bruises, couldn't wait to charge her up on sugar as she was leaving for a mission or something similar and then drop her off in Minato's office. She couldn't wait
Hearing Kushina's verdict once more reinforced the reality that Minato was going to be a father, and that Tsunade was also going to be a mother
"You're baby boy is as strong as can be!" Tsunade was having a son. She was over the moon. A little boy. Maybe be he'd be the shy cuddly type, or maybe he'd be the adventurous daring type. Either way, Tsunade couldn't wait to meet him
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On October 9th, Minato's Chakra homing seal that he has placed on each of his tri-pronged Kunai, went off like a jack hammer in his head. The Chakra homing seal would alert Minato to someone channeling Chakra through it. Reaching out mentally, Minato felt the Kunai just outside the village. In a small settlement, where Tsunade happened to be staying. The seal was only supposed to be used in case of an emergency. Or labour
Minato first teleported home. He told Kushina of what was going on and told her to meet him and Tsunade at the hospital. Then Minato teleported to Tsunade
When Minato appeared in a Yellow Flash, Tsunade was standing, holding her stomach whilst being supported by Shizune, taking deep breaths. Shizune was holding a bag that held clothes, blankets and all manor of baby products
"Her water broke!" Shizune shouted, trying to reign in her panic. Minato teleported the three to their personal hospital room
Tsunade was laid down and dressed into a hospital gown, begrudgingly with Minato's help, as Shizune got dressed into hospital scrubs. During this time, the very pregnant Kushina had arrived as well
It was in the early hours of the 10th of October when, after a C-section, Naruto Senju was born. He had sun kissed blond hair, much like his fathers and glowing (figuratively) forest green eyes
When Tsunade held her son for the first time, after being thoroughly cleaned of blood, Tsunade felt love once more. Unconditional love. When he came out, Naruto was crying and screaming. That was until he was placed onto his mothers chest. Whilst he was lying on Tsunade's chest, the mother son pair made eye contact. Forest green stared into chocolate brown. Tsunade decided then and there that there was no price that would be too expensive for her baby
Exhausted and weak from labour, Tsunade had to be put to sleep in order to recover. In the mean time, Minato held his son. The tiny bundle of joy warmed his heart. Kushina, saw Naruto. The child of her husband with another woman. And even she fell in love. Chubby little cheeks and wide open eyes staring all around the room, which landed on her. Perhaps this was one of those otherworldly moments, where some ethereal being played his or her hand however, when Naruto cracked an adorable little smile at Kushina, whilst looking at her belly, Kushina's waters broke
Minato wouldn't be sleeping tonight
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Kushina had to be moved to a remote location in order to give birth. As the chances of the Nine-tails escaping was especially high when a woman was in labour. Kushina was in labour from the time Naruto was born in the early hours of the 10th of October, to 9 o'clock at night. Minato was in a right old state. His hand had already been crushed by Tsunade, and now Kushina was crushing his hand while the other worked over time in order to keep the Nine-Tails at bay
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Outside the cave where Kushina's wails could be heard, ANBU were patrolling
All was quiet in the night. Too quiet
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Tsunade awoke with a start. She felt pure, cold, unbridled fear
She hadn't felt fear in a long time
She was being transported on her hospital bed by Shizune. She knew not where she was, but she knew where she was going. The Hokage monument. The evacuation point. 'Naruto!'
She looked to the side and saw Shizune. When she went to talk, her voice caught in her throat. She knew something was wrong
"Shizune! What's happening, where's Naruto!" Tsunade shouted as loud as she could in her bleary state
Shizune was hoping that her master would stay asleep. After all, how do you tell somebody that her child was taken, and that the Nine-Tailed fox was his destination. Shizune stopped
Luckily there was nobody around
"T-the Nine-Tails appeared in the village" Shizune clenched her eyes shut as tears ran down her face. Tsunade knew what this meant
"Shizune. Where. Is. My. Son!?" Tsunade needed an answer. She hadn't been with him long, as she needed to sleep, however in those short moments. She knew she'd do anything for her baby
"M-Minato came to the hospital" implications started whirling in her mind. Did he run away with her baby? "H-he said he needed Naruto and Mito to save the Village"
Tsunade's heart stopped. She knew now
"Ninja art Creation Rebirth: Strength of a Hundred technique!" Tsunade's forehead seal glowed, before it disappeared and in its place, black lines ran over her face. Instantly feeling renewed, Tsunade rose from the bed, against the wishes of Shizune. Luckily she was dressed, must've been Shizune
Tsunade took off. When she got to the nearest roof, she spotted the big-chungus. Nine thrashing tails, eyes as red as blood, fur orange like fire. It was a travesty. There was carnage and chaos and destruction nearly everywhere she looked. Her brain told her to run, that she couldn't face such a behemoth, but her heart instantly killed such thoughts. She ran for the one place where she thought her baby would be. The frontline
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Sarutobi Hiruzen was catching his breath. How the Fox got out he didn't know. All he knew was that it was here now. Enma in staff form was leant against his shoulder. He'd managed to push the Beast back, but it mattered little. Where was Minato?
Looking around he saw something not entirely foreign to him, but heart breaking and demoralising all the same. Death. It was everywhere. The Fox was merciless. With a swipe of its claws, friends, family members, lovers were wiped out. Not even making an impact. Just there as cannon fodder to draw the Foxes attention for the briefest of seconds. Who would remember them, as horrible as he felt about it, he knew he wouldn't. So who would? If nobody would then what was the point?
Someone landing next to him drew his attention. He saw the last person he expected to see. Tsunade was there with her anti-death seal activated
"Where's Minato!?" She roared. Hiruzen wished he knew that. Well ask and you shall receive. An enormous toad dropped from the sky and landed on top of the Nine-Tails
Watching in awe and anticipation, Minato, Gamabunta and the Nine-Tails all disappeared in a Yellow Flash. The Shinobi roared and cheered in victory and for their Hokage. But Hiruzen knew it wasn't over yet. He could still sense the beast, far away but it was still there. As could Tsunade
Without saying a word, the two disappeared and ran for where they knew the beast was
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Ever since he could remember, Minato had always wanted a family. Growing up as an orphan, he longed for a mothers love, a fathers approval, a siblings rivalry, a grandparents doting. He wanted it all. And when he learned that both Kushina and Tsunade were pregnant with his children, he would be there for them. He wouldn't let his children be alone and long for the same things he did. As the loneliness was crushing and cold and merciless. It didn't let up, constantly there as a reminder that he meant nothing to no one and if he died, no one would care. Morbid, but the truth. He wanted his kids to know that they were loved and cared for, that they mattered. And yet what he was about to do…
He hated himself for it. Pinning his two innocent children with such a burden. They hadn't even had their first feed yet
Little Naruto. Tsunade was reluctant to let her baby be called Naruto, as she learned of its origin being from one of Jiraiya's books. But she read the book Tales of the utterly gutsy Ninja and agreed with the name. His hopes for his little boy were that he would grow up to be just like his name sake and would protect and strive for peace in this war ravaged world
Little Mito. She was named after the first Hokage's wife and Tsunade's grandmother. She was going to be the spitting image of Kushina when she grew up, but with his sapphire eyes. How he wished he could be there to scare off boys, well actually if she was going to be like Kushina, he wouldn't need to. But still, he wanted to be there to walk her down the aisle and to watch her grow.
Minato resigned to his fate. He finished the hand seals. He had drawn the seals in blood, his blood, onto his children. His legacy
Kushina next to him had her chains out holding down the Fox. Why did this have to go so wrong? If Minato was the superstitious type, he'd curse that masked bastard a thousand times over, but he wasn't. Speaking of superstition actually
He felt the ethereal hand reach into him. He looked up and came face to face with death. The Shinigami. He didn't really care about that however. He didn't care about any endless suffering he may have to endure. As long as his children lived
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Barely ten meters away, Tsunade and Hiruzen landed. Tsunade spotted her baby, and another whom she assumed was Mito
"No! I should be the one doing that!" Hiruzen growled
"What do you mean!?" Tsunade demanded. She tried to walk forward, but to her horror, she walked straight into a barrier that repelled her
"Those hand seals… it's the Fuinjutsu: Dead demon consuming Seal it summons the Shinigami itself to seal something away, in this case the Nine-Tails" Hiruzen explained defeated. He is the old and Minato is the new. It should be him in there doing the sealing, but it's not "as payment, the casters soul will be consumed by the Shinigami"
Tsunade was at a loss. Her baby, barely a day old, was going to have that sealed inside him?! Never had she hated more in her life. She hated Minato for what he was doing. She didn't care if it was necessary for the survival of the village. Bringing her baby into this… it was inexcusable
She went to smash down the barrier, to feed Minato to the Fox. But before she could. All hate was dashed. In its place was relief
The Fox managed to get free of its bonds. In a deep guttural voice, it roared out that it refused to be sealed again. He went to kill the two infants on the sealing alter. They needed to die, had to die
But before the claw struck
Minato and Kushina threw themselves in the way of the claw. Impaling themselves upon it, stopping the attack and saving the infants
Tsunade saw the blood. But she didn't care, for in that moment she was cured of her Haemophilia. Seeing Minato and Kushina give up their lives for her baby. Minato had repented in her eyes. Even if she wanted to do it herself (kill Minato that is)
In the next moments, the Fox was sealed. Half in Mito and half in Naruto
The barrier dropped with Kushina and Minato. She approached and swept up her baby, running all manor of diagnostics. She also checked Mito
"P *cough* please Tsunade… watch Mito, please look after her" Kushina wheezed out. How she was still alive was beyond Tsunade… she pinned it down to Uzumaki resilience
Seeing the pleading look in the eyes of the dying woman. Tsunade couldn't refuse. She would raise Mito just like she would Naruto
Tsunade took Mito up in her other hand. Both babies were fast asleep, sleeping off their vulpine meal
"I will!" Tsunade reassured. Kushina smiled. Of all smiles Tsunsde had seen in her life, all paled in comparison to the feelings and emotions in Kushina's last smile. Resigned to death but overjoyed at the fact that her baby would be cared for and loved. She didn't care about the village in that moment, her past, the hole in her stomach, even Minato was second best. Mito meant everything, she was Kushina's world in her final moments. Tears fell out of joy
Death is often considered the end. The end of life. And in our own perspectives, life is everything. Nothing means more than life. And for it to end, is the end of everything for a person. No matter who they are, regardless of everything that they were in life. They could be evil, good, cruel or loving. In the end it doesn't matter. For the end consumes us and our everything becomes nothing, snuffed out like a candlelight. That's what life is for, making sure that there is something after we're gone, some sort of mark that says 'I was here!'
Kushina knew this was her end. But she didn't care. It was her babies beginning. Regardless of circumstance or how it begins, it doesn't matter. What does is how it turns out. And as long as her baby got to live, that meant everything to her
"H-Hiruzen… p-please transfer… all possessions and assets *cough* to Tsunade" Kushina's last words were in hopes that her baby would grow up and have all that she would be given from her parents. With her last words, Kushina Uzumaki breathed her last
Silence reigned for a time. Hiruzen and Tsunade stood and watched the bodies of the fourth Hokage and his wife
"Move everything to the Senju compound. Even the things in the archives and vaults. All of it. Then have Jiraiya seal the compound" Tsunade spoke "Naruto and Mito don't exist. We'll leave the village"
Hiruzen could only nod numbly. Luckily everything wouldn't be hard to explain. Moving all Uzumaki accounts to the Senju is understandable, being relatives. And in the Uzumaki accounts, he could slip all Namikaze assets into the Senju as well
"At least bring them to the village at some point. They deserve to see the home their father gave his life for" that struck a chord with Tsunade. Could she in good conscience spit of Minato's sacrifice by never bringing his children to the home he gave his life for? Honestly, no she couldn't
"Okay" she whispered in a small voice. Whispering a final prayer to the fallen couple, she turned and walked away "come on Mito-Chan, Naru-Chan, you must be hungry" Hiruzen heard as she walked away
Wiping a stray tear from his face. He collected the bodies and also turned away
Righto! The first chapter done!
I hope it was long enough. In my vaunted opinion, I believe that you can tell the quality of a Fic through the length the chapters
Not much action, I wouldn't be too sure of how to right good fight scenes so imma psyche myself up for it
I hope it wasn't rushed as well!
I did kinda skip over some parts and moved it along quickly, because let's be honest, the Nine-Tails attack in every Fic is usually the same... Boring!
Any who, till next time!