Heres a little quicky
Update: I updated the prologue cause it was kinda shit and you dont make the first thing people see, (technically the 2nd thing) shit so yea, also thanks for the constructive criticism Vedahzii, I want more of that.
also yea, the summery was shit, we dont talk about that.
this one is slightly better, also if you're just reading this now, this part isn't important, just context about me sort off, so if you dont care just skip it.
So I'm new here, but I'm not an idiot (mostly) so I know proper grammar and stuff, which is something I have to clarify because I have read some stories here and... jeez, it's like they never went to school.
So anyway, I got this idea after being dissatisfied with the way Nelliel was treated within Bleach. She didn't get the happy ending, just stuck in Hueco Mundo which is basically hell, alone.
Like some useless one-off character.
I love Nelliel (not in the waifu way, bc I'm not a total loser) so I was like "hey, let's grab one fictional character I like that would go really well with Nelliel, plop him in in bleach, and hopefully make a half-decent story."
Anyways, when you read the first chapter you'll understand what I'm talking about, also, this should probably be put this under crossover but...its literally plopping one guy in, just one guy, not an entire universe so fuck it.
Also, just for clarification, all characters will stay IN CHARACTER. You won't have Nelliel loving violence, Azien being a 2head, or [inserted guy] being a dick, I hate it when people do that. When they change the character fundamentally to fit the story.
I won't do that, so anyways…
Now that, that's all done, let's begin...