STAR WARS:
THE BLACK CRUSADE
The Empire Remant has fallen and in its place a mysterious new army has appeared...
The Knights of the First Order ruled over by Ren "The Jedi Killer" from Coruscant,
Once the shining gem in the galaxy now turned into a ruined paradise for the Knights
with Ren acting as a beloved and kind leader to the people. As the NEW REPUBLIC sends
The heroes from the "old war" to seen if The Knights are a new threat or not but only
have vanished among them Grandmaster Luke Skywalker, with the rumors saying that only the Knights
know of there whereabouts. And faint rumors of the rogue Stormtroopers taking on the Knights in the very streets,
Heading it seems toward open rebellion and the fear of war once again...
Among such new fear is something only the blind can only see as faint hope...
"Kira"
"Let me go..."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
"WHOSE THERE!?"
"Why do you fear me?...you should give in to what I WANT!"
"I'll tell you once again...I AM NOT TAKING IT"
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
"Stop laughing..."
"...AHAHA I always find this amusing my dear"
"I AM NOT AN AMUSEMENT"
"...Enough then, why don't you just give me what i want...i wouldn't ask again...KIRA"
"STOP CALLING ME THAT"
"Only I know of your name, Kira...only I can love you as once love me..."
"LOVE YOU?...no i can't because...because!?..."
"...STOP FIGHTING ME THEN!...here then let show how much i loved you!"
Suddenly within the flash of lighting within the vague dark planet, the girl turns to see a brown clocked figure holding a lightsaber.
The figure moves towards the panic girl as the saber heads towards her face!
"NO"
Rey shouts as she awakens from her sweat filled bed as the shining blue lights pierce her small apartment area. Her nude body covered now in sweat as she breaths hard,its a nightmare that never seems to go away.
The same angry figure, the same dark evil planet filled with smoke and blackness
Her long hair covers her breasts as she quickly gets up from her bed. Its too late still but she doesn't care as her hands feel the walls around the room.
Her right hand touches what she was looking for...
A worn old tall machine part stick from a Empire wreak, she starts tipping on the floor as she moves to get up.
Rey's beauty would get somewhere within this vast universe but not on this planet at least. She doesn't care about it as well as she moved toward the open view overlooking the city. She could smell the some of the passing cars as there fuel floated near her window.
She know it was night but hers was a permanent darkness...she was blind after all.
Her nose sensed also the smell from the nearby beach, such people in the galaxy take for granted such things but not her.
Being nude just added to how cool it was when this planet get at night.
It made her aware of how everything felt and she don't mind it when it come to how she slept.
She forget what her eye color may have been when it come to sight, since...whatever happened to her. Generally they were bright white and they give off a uneasy feeling to those around her. Judging from the looks she give whenever she revealed them, she felt the balcony as to find a piece of blue gray cloth tight around the center.
It become something of a tradition to tie the cloth around her eyes
Even blind it felt like the most normal thing to do, given she never wanted to scare people and beings around her
Going back inside she would begin getting ready for her late date soon after her shower...
Rama City, the planet of Culture
"My friends, I your're beloved leader faces the task of holding your're planet as an act of kind mercy...
Some see me as a "monster", a monster who untied your're planet against the remaining forces of the Empire...
The same Empire who seeks to take back what ISN'T there's. They are part of old way my friends...
The old ways that my beloved order wishes to stump out...please help your're beloved leader...
I am NOT the Empire, there nightmare died with the Death Star and the coward Stormtroopers must be stomped out...
I NOT General Skywalker...Am just a better version of him!"
The dark voice of Beloved Leader calling out from the holoviewer made Rey smile, clearly he was right in bringing the water planet of Culture to fight the whatever remained of the Empire. She sensed there "kindness" as she was helped from the morning fast light train.
The Knights don't give off the cold feeling that come with the Storm Troopers
There armor was sleek shining silver and the helmets were formless. The Knights wore bright yellow cloaks around there already slim figures
Unlike the troopers of old, there held small sleek blades and there blasters around there hips were the new sleek N7 model.
"Think you for your're help.." Rey said as the Knight leaned toward her
"Have a nice day madame" The Knight's voice seemed like hard and cold yet friendly toward the young blind woman.
She entered into the sleek shining restaurant that was held under a vast public area that was the center of the city.
"Has mistress Rey come for the usual table?" The humanoid gray droid asked as Rey nodded as he helped her toward the back of the restaurant
"Food always smells quite good here, E9"
E9 nodded in agreement as he found Rey's seat. "Mistress Rey always has such good taste given your closeness to our benefactor"
She smiled again "When will she be here?"
E9 looked around the vast area "Past the usual time, may i serve Mistress the Falcon special?"
"Why not, i can't wait" Rey said as lay back into her chair as the droid went to get her meal.
She wear the sleek purple dress designed in the style of Naboo as was a favorite with her lover, her life since then seemed to drew a blank since being found by her.
Rey know through her eye cloth held tight as the people chatted among themselves.
They don't noticed or cared that Rey somehow knew how each person and creature the other droids in the room were weirdly sensed, her mind can't understand what or how she was reading everyone's "feelings" and it seemed scary only to her.
Why was she always "sensing" just feelings then?
Her mind wandered toward other things like how different her life was here compared to some people from outer rim like Jekku. But then again felt like visiting that planet, everything couldn't be this perfect with her life otherwise.
Culture was topical in areas even in the polar areas, the people lived in vast wealth and long lives. In small part to the Beloved Leader and his First Order, there were ten times better then the black hearts that roamed the galaxy within the Empire.
She heard about older parts of Rama city once holding a battle between the Rebels and the Empire, these areas of the city never get rebuild due how much damage both sides made.
Legend held that even Luke Skywalker once came to Rama and faced Vader during that battle...
But that was then, besides the Rebels were just hated by the entire universe now, heroes that were now seen as villains
Rey couldn't deny the damage and the very war was sickening to her...
"Rey..still trying to eat without me?" a sharp deep voice said as Rey smile as she sensed the alien woman sitting next to her as she laughed
"Am sorry to start without you...Dejah "
The tall pink Kaminon smiled in green shining gem dress as she come near her young beautiful lover "Now about the Falcon special..."
From tall a rooftop, large hands gripped a viewfinder as they watched the young girl and the Kamionon eating and laughing within.
"Sir is this her?"
"Of course Lieutenant, it has be her!"
"The Crusader!...then that means...that means.."
"...Our mission is almost over.."
"But what if she doesn't help!?"
The figure toward the second in command over the busy street "We're make her help us"
Coruscant, the Headquarters of the Beloved Leader
"Sir i must protest this...this hearing for the New Republic and i wandered.."
"...The answer is NO, again General Hux and my word is final"
The dark grabbed masked leader in the style of the Sith, if strangely not the attitude of one. He faced the red haired General clothed in white as he watched him shacking in fear and yet anger in his youthful face. "Ren, this is embarrassing. WE should be the ones calling the shots NOT THEM!"
Ren it seemed laughed in blackened mask "Keep thinking that Hux and the New Republic will destroy us without a single thought. President Holdo after all will look for any excuse to undo our years of work on each planet we have. As if she has any idea as what we're after!"
"What must i tell them then?" Hux questioned in near rage as the Beloved Leader come close to him
"Hux...have i ever told you that you are a complete moron. Much less a "general" then someone i can easily stomp on...without care?"
Hux was shacking some more before standing still as the unmoving mask come close to his face "No sir not lately"
Ren began to laugh and then grabbing Hux's shoulder
"Soon General Hux my "dear" friend...this galaxy will KNOW true peace
The wars that infested it like a parasite will be destroyed
The thousands who dead by the hands of monsters like Admiral Thrawn, the Emperor and Darth Vader will have there revenge
And even this once shining gem in the universe Coruscant will be clean again from the very filth that makes it rotten!..only then will the New Republic see my great work in the name of peace"
Hux's eyes watered abit from the small speech as Ren now stood at the high overlooking window of once grand city "Sir once again...WHAT do i tell them?"
Ren stood still never looking back at Hux "...Tell them that Grandmaster Skywalker and his friends are dead"
Hux smiled widely "That will get quite a reaction sir" as he begin to leave though..
"Oh General, also tell them that so called "New" Age of the Jedi has ended
...MAKE the Republic cry for me!"
Night in Rama City
"EMPRESS"
"NOOOOOOO...GO AWAY PLEASE JUST GO AWAY" Rey yelled as her right hand smashed the holo-lamp as Dejah grabbed her other arm.
"No one is here Rey!, your're safe" she said as Rey still trumping in fear awaken up from the terrible nightmare. The faint white scared mark across her eyes were filling with tears as she hugged Dejah. The being's warm naked body covered over her's as Rey just cried.
"Same nightmare?" Dejah finally questioned as Rey get up from here, still with a painful look within her face
"No a different one this time. One were there figures all around me bowing before me, there voices echoing in some dark cave and there was a sickening rotting air with them. It felt terrible because...because..."
Dejah then walked toward Rey, her body felt comforting to the troubled woman "You can tell me anything my love"
Rey continued on even a fearfulness in her voice "...They seemed to be wanting for me become there...empress!?"
Dejah give an horrified look on her face just as both of them heard a crashing sound from the other side of the bedroom...
As small astro-droid in the shape of a ball come across both them, then with its little head turn to see the ruined lamp.
Rey and Dejah begin to laugh together as the astro droid spoke in harsh sounding computer beeps "...Its all my fault for the mess, BB-8. Sorry to annoy you"
Rey intoned as both she and Dejah went to the outside terrace of The Kaminon's beautiful manor. Nether bothering to put on any dress wear as the cool night breeze of Culture's topical air run over there naked toned bodies.
Dejah Burroughs was among her people's standards the definition of beauty, she stood taller then most Kamino women. Her pink figure was thin curves, her neck sit an itch shorter then the standard. Her blue big eyes shined more brightly at night then during the day. Her pink breasts also stood out more as well as long sleek black hair running her thin figure. Her thighs and legs were equally thin but strangely beautiful in an different sort of way from the human standard
Kamino had generally changed Dejah felt since the time of the Clone Wars
Some of her people felt like they needed to atone for the horrors, there clones brought upon the galaxy
Dejah's people had this one job and now it seemed like it was forbidden to talk to anyone about it. The lying words of the Emperor to bring peace through the Clones felt like a dagger to the heart of any who survived there attacks including the rebelling Kaminos who wanted to free it from him .
And no thanks to the very same Empire, her homeworld almost get destroyed when helping the Rebels
But how her own people seemed meaningless compared to helping out the troubled woman before her
Rey in Dejah's mind was still the most beautiful woman in the entire galaxy surpassing even Princess Leia and President Holdo. It seemed most people never seemed to notice the blindness so much as her physique.
She was lean and very muscular, her back showed numerous deep red scars. She never know how she even get them in the first place among what looked to Dejah like a blaster burn across her right shoulder. Shapely legs and toned thighs still showed more smaller scars
Her hair was black and shoulder length, her toned breasts stood in the cold darkness of the night. Her skin felt soft and yet rough in the being's thin hands. Her lips were weirdly colored black and part of her checks were turning dead. A confusing feature to otherwise beautiful human woman in the Kaminon's eyes
Truly she in essence the most perfect woman in the entire galaxy
Dejah smiled at Rey and all the intimate moments caught between them as her thin hands moved around Rey's backside "What can i do to make you stop having these horrible dreams?"
Rey playfully giggled and lay herself into her lover's arms "I can think of a million things i want from you Dejah"
As Rey turned around and with her full naked body, begin to kiss Dejah's lips "Make me forget the nightmares!"
New planet of the Galactic New Republic...Delta Prime
General Hux walked smiling outside the steps of the Delta Prime Capital building
Just as a green haired woman in red uniform of the Republic quickly catching up to me before slapping him in the face.
"YOU BASTARD!" she yelled out as he stood still smiling a bit
"And good day to you too President Holdo"
Holdo still had the look of utter disgust on her face as she answered him "What the hell do you mean to say that Luke Skywalker is dead!?"
Hux laughed "I'll already answered that oblivious question in your're hearing. The fact that Skywalker and his "friends" were heading rather foolishly i may add toward ion storm around the planet Geonosis"
"THEY were proving aide to the suffering Geonosians. Aide i may add General your're so called "Beloved Leader" forget to give during the event, in case a planet ever goes through a rough interplanetary crisis" Holdo tried to sound calm but was far from it as looked down at Hux
"My beloved leader answers to nobody not even the GREAT Luke Skywalker..."
"Those planets under the Knights of the First Order are suffering but..."
Hux laughed out loud rather lightly "...But you and i both know if ether side moves or does anything to help the planets. War will be the ultimate result, something i don't think ether of us wanted and nether does the Leader. We take down the fleeing remains of the Imperials for you, Madame President don't forget that..."
"What the HELL is your're game then Hux" Holdo said rather angrily as Hux's hover car arrived
"...Madame President...there is no game but if there was i doubt YOU or your're Republic would see it coming!"
As Hux's car take off, Holdo marched herself back into the Capital Building. She hold out her right hand to make use of an holo-viewer
"...Give me a direct line to Crusader"
Few days later in Rama City
Rey had know the pathways and deep streets that surrounded the upper city as she moved toward Dejah's place once again.
She had don't tell Dejah in the last few nights what was really going on with her. The senses around her were getting heightened, they making out rough outlines among the sometimes confusing streets and walkways that surround the whole city.
They outlined in pure blue or green colors that give off the shape of the object above and below her
The world was basically on fire within her mind but she still couldn't understand it or know how it worked
She could smell an roasted Locar burger from ten of thousands of miles away. Her hands could feel the vibe of a passing hovercar and each touch she could read the letters in the store fronts.
She could "see" but it still don't mean a thing to her
It was something frightening and the more her mind tried it the more insane it was to her
A blind girl without a memory who somehow could still feel or act like this was normal!?
She couldn't always control it and her mind seemed to tell her it was quite possibly a nightmare. Yet she was living it and felt real, Dejah wouldn't understand.
Rey wouldn't tell her at least at first besides she had this insane nightmare ability since the blindness and the memory loss. There were enough problems to add to the confusing puzzle that was Rey.
Hopefully now after work would finally tell her about it ...
As Rey entered into Dejah's home, something was seriously wrong.
Her feet felt loose papers and shattered statues across the floor, the hands felt checks of wall were missing.
There was no sign of BB-8 anywhere within the room and she felt like had broken into the house and she couldn't "feel" Dejah in any parts of it, she started shacking but not from fear...it was a much more powerful emotion as she tried in vain to search for her girlfriend.
She touched an area of wall which was covered in blood...quickly she smelled it.
She begin to form tears as the rage was now overwhelming...when she heard a noise from behind her...
With bared teeth she quickly grabbed her staff as she run toward the stranger in pure anger, pushing the much taller build form into the back of a nearby wall.
"YOU DID THIS!" she ?"yelled as the stranger didn't want to fight back but seemed surprised by her action
"Lady...please don't you see whats around you?"
The distorted voice sounded like it come from an helmet com and that was proof enough whoever did this to Dejah. Plus it seemed like they wouldn't looking close at Rey to tell she couldn't basically "see" anything...
"Of course i SEE and it's the fact that clearly my FRIEND IS DEAD
...STORMTROOPER!"
The Stormtrooper's neck was being tightened by the clearly skilled young woman with her long black staff
"Your're friend isn't dead!"
This wasn't helping matters as she suddenly felt the sound of the Trooper's heartbeat. Somehow he wasn't lying to her face and it felt even more confusing then before.
Suddenly she let go of him from the wall as the Trooper coughed "Where is she then?"
The Storm Trooper looked at her rather strangely before shacking his head "Your're guess is as good as mine since clearly we both missed her"
Rey suddenly heard a loud beeping sound coming from the bedroom.
She run to open the sliding door as BB-8 slide out in fit of anger as she hugged the smell droid "Oh BB-8 at least your're okay..."
"Burroughs can clearly put up a fight...Rey"
She turned at the sound of her name at the Trooper "How the hell do you even know me or Dejah for that matter?"
The Trooper seemed silent before giving he's answer
"Because she was the one who contacted me. Knowing fully well the danger that was present once President Holdo sent me and my team here..."
Rey seemed confused by this "What does the New Republic have do to with a stage actress?"
"I know she is possibly the Crusader...
A secret leader behind our revolt against The Knights of the First Order"
She had thought the revolt was a myth since the Knights had mainly crushed such rumors against the Beloved Leader
"Your're asking me to believe that MY girlfriend is some...infamous traitor to the entire galaxy!?"
Clearly he didn't have time for this as went toward Rey "Whatever the Beloved Leader is saying is wrong. The Crusader is only a traitor to him and him alone. I was once like you...loyal to the wrong person who didn't a crap about me.
But the Crusader showed us another way better then the one we had.
Now she needs our help!..."
Rey still don't want to trust him but then again she had no choice in the matter, she had to find Dejah
She grabbed his hand in less tense way "Where do you start looking?"
Before the windows near her broke as a number of the First Order Knights crowded around both the Trooper and Rey
"...General Hux, we found the remaining Stormtrooper!"
"Good work captain...now blast him were he stands!"
Hux ordered over the com link as they aimed there blasters at both of them
Rey suddenly felt her senses going wild as she raised her staff above her head...something within her was taking over!
As the first knight shot his blaster at her. She throw her staff at his head, hitting another one along the way
"...GET HER!" yelled the captain toward Rey as the rest of them charged at her. She was actually smiling at this
Her hands begin hitting any of the Knights.
Including one of her arms smashing open a Knight's helmet till only one Knight stood alone...
"REY!" The storm trooper shouted just as laser blasts fired wildly around him. Forcing him to take cover as he rolled near a N7 blaster...
"Walk away from here and let us finish off the traitor..." The Knight intoned as Rey heard blaster shots from the next room
Smiling she nodded her head no as she tightened her fists "Your're not going him!" he roared out in anger as he attacked.
The Knight begin to fight her as his fists hit hard, as she try blocking and the blood flew from her mouth. Several times her own fists connected to her rather tough opponent as they kept up there own personal fight. The Knight was clearly trained for this but somehow she felt like...she did this all before!?
Meanwhile the Trooper eyed the snipers from across the rooftops nearby building
Breathing hard he take aim at the first sniper to the left...
Rey roared in rage as the Knight take a cheap shot to her chest as there fistfight continued. Random blast shot hit close to her stomach as she cried out in pain..
Hearing shots from both nearby and faraway, she had no idea as what happened to the Trooper as her enemy kick her into the next bedroom. Stupid to think of his safety compared to her own. She leaped up from the bed to kick him into the other side of the wall...
Seemingly ending there fight
BB-8 rolled near her, beeping wildly as the trooper entered the room "What happened to these guys?" he questioned as Rey suddenly felt like laughing
"AHAHAH they been all having a bad day today" she nearly fall over from exhaustion as the Trooper run to her...
"Bravo but i think we should all leave"
A crowd was forming around the home distract of Rama as more units of Knights gathered around the area...
The Trooper carried the unconscious Rey toward the ruins of a tall nearby building.
Several hours later within the building as the Knights's carrier hovered over it with shining lights. BB-8 and the Trooper looked as the Knights seemingly searched for them. The Droid beeped an angry sound toward him.
"Yeah i get what your're thinking...i get a bad feeling about this too"
The trooper eyed Rey on the blackened floor, he noticed numerous cuts that bleeding out. Not even bothering about any modesty, he torn open part of her red dress top. Rolling her to her side, he grab an metal rod and without looking. Used his blaster shot to heat it up, now that was done he lowered it into her bleeding wound...
"OH MY...THE HELL!" She yelled as the trooper dropped the rod, getting right up in a fit of anger
"Your're welcome by the way...you would have bleed to death otherwise if i hadn't taken action quickly"
She tore the rest of her lower dress as put around her chest as she backed away from the trooper to do so. With her hands she felt like that he had also cleaned off the blood from her face and arms.
Seemingly he don't noticed or cared about her blindness
"How long have they been looking?"
The Trooper get from the floor as she questioned him "Seems like ten hours at the most and they aren't stopping"
Through her senses she noticed a few odd details about the Storm trooper. His helmet was an old style Clone Wars era but the rest of his armor come from classic Imperial design. She noticed he was a foot taller then even her. Seemingly an imposing figure of an Storm Trooper to be sure
"Whats your're name?" she questioned softly as she guided her left hand to her side
The Trooper laughed softly as he answered "They never really give us in the way of "names" but i prefer to be called Finn..."
She smirked a bit at that "Okay "Finn" it is...now how do you think to help us get out of the First Order's watch?"
Finn begin to call his com-link
"Lieutenant Jennah come in for pick up...Come in, it seems that Crusader is not here...come in...DAMN IT"
Rey walked toward him worried "Your're friend's not answering?"
Finn stood silent before her "...The Knights must have get to her once i left!, this isn't how the mission is supposed to have worked out"
She don't quite understand what was going on here "What mission and how is Dejah in involved in all this?"
Finn seem to come toward face to face as he speak
"President Holdo secretly promised help to all the Knight controlled planets mainly Courscant. I and my team of three were sent to meet with Holdo and form away to break Ren's hold over the planets.
With the help of Crusader we would untie the planets under the banner of the New Republic
Push this madman from his total grip over half of the galaxy..."
Rey was trying to get to her head wrapped around all this "Your're speaking about an resistance or something?"
"More like a small revolt really. Am one of the many different leaders across these planets including this one..."
"Besides this lieutenant who is the third?"
"Our commander was actually captured when they were looking at a unimportant area of the galaxy...likely tortured for being just another traitorous Imperial.."
Rey groin seemingly because of her wound as all this information to take shape in her mind. Dejah was keeping this from her...seemingly because she herself felt safe and comfortable with the Knights running everything.
She wanted there protection and the ignorance of knowing how far and away the New Republic was from her
The so called "Beloved Leader" Ren was a hero compared to the likes of President Holdo or Senator Leia
Figure heads to a war before her time or better yet when her memory was gone
Now she felt like all this amazing comfort with the Knights of the First Order was shattered because she had to give it up...
And if she don't give it up, Dejah would die...
"What is your're plan then Finn?"
Courscant
"What is your're report Captain?" Ren said as the nervous officer stood before him
The captain neared Ren as looked out his window
"My men report...utter failure in capturing the rogue Storm trooper he escaped from them..."
Ren gripped the railing around the huge window in silent anger "Officer Finn is proving to be rather difficult to handle. His skills as the former commander of the guard to Admiral Thrawn are annoying to say the least!..."
The captain stood still as he talked further "He didn't cause the most casualties Leader...the men say it was a young girl with him. AHAHA SHE caused the most harm and fought like an professional within our hardcore of units and..."
Ren tore off the railing and throw it at the captain as he lifted up by the neck in pure anger
"TELL ME EVERYTHING ABOUT THE GIRL!"
In the ruins of the old Rama City
"Why are heading into this place Finn?" Rey questioned as Finn guided her and the droid BB-8 among the crumbing walkways of what once the old capital.
"I have a backup plan to escape the Knights pursuing us" From the sound of his heartbeat, Finn sounded like he was telling the truth. Rey had no other way but to follow him. It seemed like Finn was ignoring the fact that Rey was blind.
Yet she sense and feel everything around her
She smelled the burned out ruins of what was once high tech buildings, could feel the trail of a standard hover car.
Bizarrely enough also the smell from blaster fire and frozen in there place...outlines of both Rebel and Imperials fighting.
This was terrifying to look at like an warning to her or just the weird "senses" playing with her
She moved past it as she followed Finn, never once figuring out how to trust him but he did save her life. If was perfect like Dejah's vision of her to be...
She should have rescued Finn but that wasn't what happened. Her thoughts were at best still confusing...
"Rey i think i found it" Finn said happily as they overlooked an centered ruined building. Rey moved toward him as her senses give off what Finn saw.
Two Knights were standing guard around a large ship covered by an black sheet
"Ohhh another day...another boring prize for General Hux's personal collection" the second guard said bored out of his mind
"How can Ren stop promoting that... moron?" The first guard questioned as the second guard turned his head
"Don't ask or else we're both ended up in the fortress!"
The two guards stood quit as Rey mouthed "Fortress?"
"Am guessing that is our way out?" Rey pointed at the ship to Finn.
"Yeah am going to cause an distraction and you are going to fly us out of here"
Finn left as this suddenly panic Rey...
SHE had no clue to fly an even simple ship much less one made for space travel!?. She felt BB-8's little handle arms guide her down a small path but she still don't like this idea...
Her hands felt the metal of the ship legs as she and the droid walked slowly careful of the two guards. Suddenly one of them seem to heard something to his right, running in that direction.
Then the other guard heard something to the left now...a high whistling sound
Rey laughed a little, there was something about this storm trooper. Something heroic and nice about him compared to most of the men she usually met in Rama.
BB-8 now lead into the ship's main area, rather nice and big. It's design seem rather old fashioned to her
"Yeah BB-8 what a beautiful piece of work this is!..."
She and the droid made there way into the cockpit of the ship, as the droid's sounds were teaching her about the various controls
Then the sounds of blasters were coming from everywhere even one hot bolt come close to her "TIME TO LEAVE!"
Finn shouted as with guiding arm of her droid she started up the engines of the ship. "BB-8 um...this is when the fun begins!?" she was scared when saying that as she grabbed the petal.
The fire from the engine hit the two guards sending them flying as it take off
After there recovery a bit the two Knights eyed one another "How are going to report THIS to General Hux then?"
The second Knight bowed his head in shame "We don't tell him anything...besides who want that piece of crap ship anyway?"
From out of there sight and into the skies of Rama was an legendary ship from the old war, a Corellian light freighter that somehow get into the greedy hands of General Hux.
The Millennium Falcon after a few mysterious years of waiting was flying once again in the galaxy...
WRITER'S NOTE: A full reworking of the ST sequel trilogy with some elements from the old EU and the early story treatments for at least Rey.
Her being blind but with a force heightened senses does come from the early DUEL OF FATES script.
As well as the force sensitive Storm Trooper revolt on Courscant lead by Officer Finn, just the fact that here we don't see him out of uniform though. Just taking different elements from these treatments but some improvements.
The First Order is not the replacement Imperial Empire here but are more like Cold War style Communists who seeking the weapons from the Empire. The New Republic here has a president and the "old" heroes from STAR WARS are now spies for it.
Also with a blind Rey, am going for basically a brutal female Daredevil like heroine then the much talked about "Mary Sue" from the movies. A new jedi hero whose basically failing at everything with a darker past. Plus Luke Skywalker is still the great hero he was before(Kylo Ren is NOT his student but feels like darkly replacing him).
The entire old cast is here and i do feel like write them right hopefully
See what your're comments and reviews are for this story:)
NEXT CHAPTER:THE DEAD PLANET