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Chapter 1 The Killer
Ext. Coruscent - Night
( A man with 4 arms and 6 pitch black eyes is outside on the street, his name is Xerp and he is waiting for someone. A man appears and gives him a briefcase)
Xerp: Pleasure doing business with you
(He opens the briefcase)
Xerp: Death Sticks my favorite
(He tries to inhale them but stops)
Xerp: Wait hold on, these aren't death sticks they're *sniff* sticks filled with cyanide. These wouldn't kill me but you were trying to kill me
(Xerp grabs the man and pulls him toward him, random people around him pull out blasters toward the man)
Xerp: Why were you trying to poison me, no why was Arela trying to poison me
Man: He didn't I swear. Because it wasn't him. It was the father himself. Thy who don't believe shall be struck with the wrath of the black sun, his power shall engulf the galaxy in eternal darkness
Xerp: You're part of that sick cult. Say Hello to the Grim Reaper for me
(Xerp throws him over the ledge gate)
(Sirens began to approach them)
Man #2: Boss we gotta go
Xerp: crap
(He enters the back of a vehicle and it files off escorted by other vehicles)
Ext. Coruscent - Day
(Our main character Ghoel, is walking down the street, and enters a police station)
Int. Police Station - Day
(It's busy)
Domino: *Slow clap* Ghoel, that man who reaches his Goals but can't get to work on time
Ghoel: You are terrible at Rhyming, it makes me cringe
Domino: Everything is cringe these days, and although your late your just in time to get a new case
(Domino walks down the stairs)
Domino: Homicide, pretty gross scene
Ghoel: I seen worse
Domino: It's that cult again
Ghoel: Again, fifteenth time
Domino: Yeah, get your uniform on we'll go to the scene
Ghoel: Your driving this time
Int. Fancy Restaurant - Day
(A woman in empty restaurant with a fancy white dress with black bob hair sits on a table eating stake and sipping wine, Her name is Yartek. A man appears and whispers something in her ear which she nods to)
Yartek: Good, my plan is working and you did great
(The man walks away)
Yartek: You know what I need some entertainment
(As the man walks off, she grabs out a blaster and shoots him. He is still alive and begins to crawl away)
Yartek: *laughs*
(She shoots him again and he dies this time, her holodevice beeps and she opens it to show a man)
Yartek: Yes boss
Arela: Did it work?
Yartek: Yes, the police are investigating. Soon we'll get that trash off this planet
Arela: Good, you're credits will be dropped off
(She turns off the device and continues her meal, she snaps her fingers and robots drag the body away, as nice and calm classical music plays)
Ext. Alley - Day
(A bunch of officers takes pictures of the body on the ground. Domino and Ghoel enter the crime scene. A body in the middle has a carved symbol on it)
Domino: Wizon age 24 female
Ghoel: Cause of death?
Domino: Blood loss
Ghoel: Any witnesses?
Domino: Unfortunately no
Ghoel: Do we have anything else?
Domino: Not much, just the vehicle, but it has no lisense plate
Ghoel: Must have been removed by the cultist
(Ghoel investigates the purple vehicle, everything on the vehicle that hints at its origin is removed)
Ghoel: Well I can't tell you where it's from, but I can tell you what it is. It's a work truck, like police cars or delivery trucks, more likely to be a delivery truck
Domino: Let me check something
(Domino puts on gloves and inspects the body, he checks the jacket pocket and grabs a holodevice and turns it on)
Domino: Okay, it says here that he works at. Um... The infinite Nightclub
Ghoel: You mean the nightclub owned by Xerp?
Domino: Yes
Ghoel: Man I hate him, his beers aren't even good
Domino: You guys tried beers in the battlefields?
Ghoel: Yeah when I was on break of being a commander and badass
Domino: I bet it was hard to come
Ghoel: You're darn right it was hard, I had to convince the republic that something was on Coruscent and that I had to go and investigate it, and her I am
Domino: it's better than you're mother forcing you to join the police academy. She was annoying telling me to join the police over and over again, then I joined and she stopped
Ghoel: You're right that is annoying, at least it wasn't you're wife that would be more annoying
Ghoel and Domino: *laughing*
Ghoel: How about after all this we go get some lunch at Bowskis
Domino: Yes, yes and yes I love that place
Ghoel: Let's go find that truck
(They wall out of the crime scene)
Int. Storage Facility - Day
(Arela is on a holodevice as someone speaks to him)
Arela: Okay then, thanks
(Arela turns it off and holds)
Arela: *yells*
(Arela throws and it is smashed on a wall right next to Yartek who is sitting and reading something on her holodevice)
Yartek: 15th time you've done that
Arela: I can't believe this, Wat Tambor was caught on Ryloth by the republic. Without him we don't have any credits to be donated to us
Yartek: I can solve that problem in about... 5 hours
Arela: I believe that, you're the smartest man... I mean woman I have in this gang
Yartek: I learned it by playing chess in the Orphanage
(Footsteps approach, it's Xerp and his men)
Arela: Speaking of problems
Xerp: You better have a gosh darn explanation for what happend in level 1313
Arela: What are you talking about
Xerp: One of you're men was part of that cult
Arela: What?!
Xerp: That means that there are moles in your gang
Arela: Yes but if we kill father Dom then maybe they'll collapse
Xerp: That's a big maybe, maybe we should break off the friend agreement
Arela: Come on, we made an agreement two years ago and now you wanna leave
Xerp: Because you're gang has been compromised
Arela: This will start a gang war!
Xerp: Together we own 70% of 1313. However when spilt we own 40% and you own 30% so we'll be fine
Yartek: Gentlemen please be calm, if we fight we both go bankrupt
Xerp: Who the hell is she
Arela: This is my greatest and smartest member of my gang, you might know her, her name is Yartek
Xerp: Yartek, thee Yartek, the psychopathic serial killer
Yartek: I wouldn't call myself psychopathic but a serial killer yes I'd say about 22 innocent victims I murdered
Arela: Don't worry, she works for me
Yartek: Hear me out, Xerp you lost so much currency after fighting other gangs becoming almost bankrupt so you joined Arela for credits. Now Arela has lost funding from Wat, but she still has a lot of credits to give to you. Start a war and you loose that economic trade, including gold and glow sticks, not to mention that the war will make us all bankrupt without a source of credits. Go ahead start a war you'll both loose
Xerp: She's right we need credits
Yartek: All we gotta do is kill a few priests and we're done
Xerp: Fine, but what about the donations
Yartek: I have that cleared
Ext. Nightclub - Day
(Ghoel and Domino appear in the nightclub in a vehicle, they soon exit the vehicle)
Ghoel: Remember don't be awkward
Domino: Please I'm am never awkward
(They enter the doors
Int. Nightclub - Day
(The nightclub is empty and there is only one person in the bar area a female Twi'lek. They both walk toward the woman who is cleaning the tables)
Den: Sorry boys we're closed
Ghoel: Not here for the party, my name is Ghoel and this is my partner Domino from the Coruscant police station
Den: Well my name is Den
Domino: We don't mean to interrupt you but do you know this man
(Domino pulls out a picture and hands it to Den)
Den: Yep Wizon he delivered cargo to the nightclub
Ghoel: We're sorry this but he's dead
Den: Oh, oh well
Domino: Do you have any time reports of some sort
Den: Yeah in the back, password is 51689
Ghoel: Thanks
(They go to the back to a holodevice and activate it entering the password)
Ghoel: Lets see time of death was 7:30 pm
(They enter the time and see only 15,000 results)
Domino: Now enter the address
(They find only two results)
Ghoel: Strange two results in the same street
Domino: You think the cultist was working here
Ghoel: Maybe. Let's see if I remember about this company, there it is required that all trucks were to be tracked
(They enter a different screen)
Ghoel: Now we enter the license plate
(They enter it and it shows a location)
Ghoel: Bingo we got our killer
Domino: Whoever did this whole thing was stupid and sloppy
Ghoel: Exactly
(They walk off to the outside doors, den turns on a holodevice showing a hologram of Xerp)
Den: Boss they found them they're are going to there location
Xerp: Good get ready
Ext. Alley - Day
(Den is now dressed as an assassin with a sniper rifle on her back and she throws a tracker on the back of Xerps and Ghoels vehicle. She then follows them in a hover bike)
Int. Restaurant - Dusk
(A bunch of politics and senators enter a restaurant)
Yartek: I hope you enjoy your meals in this restaurant
Senator#1: It's such a fancy restaurant
Senator#2: Agreed
(A familiar face enters the room)
Yartek: You must be Padmé Amidala
Padmé: Yes I am, I'm glad you brought us here for this special meeting
Yartek: Yes very important, just wait until you have a meal. You will see that the food is to die for
(Yartek smiles)
Ext. Storage Building - Dusk
(Reinforcements, Ghoel and Domino park in front of the building, Ghoel and Domino exit their car)
Ghoel: How many
Man #1: About a hundred
Domino: Swat team is about to go in you wanna join the action Ghoel
Ghoel: You know me
(Ghoel joins a swat team who break in the building)
Int. Building - Dusk
(Ghoel and the swat enter a room full of people watching a stage, Ghoel signals them to go to the top and attack from there)
Ghoel: Throw in gas on my command, we need to wait
The Father: My children for generations the Jedi have silenced the untold history of the black sun claiming it as a myth and legend. But some have escaped the silence and gave this information to us, to this day no one believes us but now they will see their true ruler
(Everyone cheers)
The Father: We shall take over the Jedi and show them the true power of the dark side
(Two monks give the the father, a skull with a dagger stabbed in the forehead on a pillow, which he raises up)
The Father: Witness the wrath of Darth Bogus
(Everyone cheers)
Ghoel: A Sith Lord?
(The Father pulls the bloody dagger out)
The Father: The blood of a non believer and the water of the dark side
(He taps the dagger, causing the blood to drop into a cup of water. The father grabs it with his two hands and says a chant. He then takes a huge gulp and after he is done, he collapses and spasms. His veins glow ruby red and grows muscles, he stands up. Everyone begins to chant)
Ghoel: Now!!
(The swat throw gas bombs and start to attack people, people evacuate while others fight. Ghoel punches a man in the face and shoots him, he kicks and other while uppercutting another man. He runs to wall and runs on it, before launching himself to a cultist and kicking him in the face. Sundenly the Father comes in and kills some swat member by Breslin their bones, he comes after Ghoel who of course shoots back which has no effect. He gets punched to the stage, not breaking his back by landing on a stage curtain)
Ghoel: That man is indestructible
(He looks around to see a dagger. He picks it up and runs toward the OP father stabbing him in the back. He collapses and turns back to normal. The father looks at Ghoel in defeat)
Ghoel: You're little party is over, welcome back to being a normal person
(Two swat officers handcuff and force him to stand up)
Ext. Building - Dusk
(They escort the Father out of the door)
Domino: What happened in there
Ghoel: Some sort of dark side ritual, now we know what the cult is, worshippers of some ancinent Sith Lord named Darth Bogus. I need contact with the Jedi Order
The Father: The Jedi will be exterminated soon, it is a prophecy that is inevitable
Ghoel: Yeah I hope, your little cult followers eat slop all day
The Father: My followers will free me from-
(Before he could finish two blaster bolts hit him in the head, everyone takes cover and look at the roofs. Den runs off and everyone slowly go out of cover)
Domino: Who was that
Ghoel: Don't know but whoever,she or he was, he or she did this for a reason
Domino: Does that mean the case is solved
Ghoel: Yes but that means another case is opened
Int. Restaurant - Night
(A robot approaches Yartek)
Robot: Master Yartek, the assassin has terminated the priest
Yartek: Good, the cult thinks that just because they know Dark Magick means they are indestructible, but everything ha s a weakness
(Yartek clicks a glass in the dinner room)
Yartek: Ladies and Gentlemen this meeting is very important it will deal with the separatists and the many problems we have to deal with. If you look under your table you will see a letter with your name on it open it and you will get a surprise. I know people use holodevices now but I like classical things like paper letters. Go on find and open them
(They look under their tables and pull out letters which they open)
Senator #3: What is, Almaxsin?
Yartek: *chuckles* Antidote
Padmé: To what?
Yartek: To the poison you just ate *laughs*
(Everyone is shocked)
Yartek: Well it's actually a fungi more than a poison, but I like poison better
(Yartek puts on a gas mask)
Yartek: A Highly contagious airborne fungi, called The Grim Rep Licen
Senator #4: We gotta get outta here
(Everyone tries to stand up but can't)
Senator #5: What's happening
Yartek: Oh did I forget to tell you that when the fungi is exposed to a certain chemical which was in your in the letter causes leg paralysis until an antidote is given
Padmé: What's gonna happen to us
Yartek: Simply really. First the infection is going to give you yellow markings to appear on your skin. Then the spores will travel to your lungs and grow on it creating more spores. You will cough extremely with blood. Your body will then try to fight it off with heat, causing your blood to boil. The after two hours black roots will grow in and out your lungs and it will spread to your heart then to your brain. After a few hours the roots will inject spores in the heart which will devour your heart from the inside out. You'll all die a slow and painful death but luckily it can be all solved with a full dose of an antidote
Padmé: You're sick really sick
Yartek: Oh we have a fighter, I'm Yartek by the way the serial killer and today you'll be my victims *laughs*
To be continued...