Okay, so as so many of you have pointed out, the relationship between Harry and Naruko was a little too fast, it's also been pointed out (at least by a few people I think.) that Naruko is reaching Mary Sue states. That really isn't the case.

Naruko is learning an Uzumaki spell; the spells of the Uzumaki are learned a lot faster because they are more for combat then what we see in Harry Potter. Anyways I said this once before but I have decided to go back and rewrite Chapters 1-7 of book one, I may or may not look over the others chapters I do not know yet.

The Story still mostly belongs to Almp15, so no reporting this as me stealing the story. However hopefully with this rewrite I pull away from what that story was. I may also add extras awhile I'm at it.

Oh and if you want to know, yes I am working on the next chapter of Chambers as well but I hit a wall with how I want to tell it. I will tell you one thing though; Akamaru will be in the chapter.

Okay so that it for this part of the author notes. See you at the end for more notes.

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The Magical Kunoichi: The Philosopher's Stone
Chapter One: Wait I'm a What Now?

-Konohagakure, Village Hidden in the leaves-
-Hokage Office-

If you were to ask why the Hokage had or needed help with paper work then you didn't know the job of the Hokage as much as you thought you did. The child that sat next to Hiruzen Sarutobi wasn't just any normal child.

The child had bright red hair tied in a pony-tail, violet eye, soft tan skin and three whiskers like birth marks on each cheek. She wore a white shirt with a red leaf symbol in the middle, along with a pair of black short the clothing seemed to be a little bit too big on the nine year old.

The Child was Naruko Uzumaki although she likes to be called Naru for short. What made Naruko stand out the most weren't the birth marks, no what made her stand out was the fact that she was the most hated child in the whole village, and while yes she did have friends, she was still very lonely.

"What about this one Grandfather?" Naruko asked as she handed the Hokage a piece of paper. Hiruzen took the paper and looked it over. That was something else that set Naruko apart for other children; she was the adopted daughter to the Hokage's own daughter, Rayne Sarutobi. "Toss it, its other bill to limit you to certain places in the village or some crap like that." Hiruzen said as he handed the paper back.

Naruko smiled, she loved it when the Civilian Council tried to pull some crap on her while they thought Hiruzen wasn't looking, that was some of the reasons why Naruko had a part time job working with the ageing Hokage. Well it was one of the reasons anyways. Other reason was that Naruko for the last few days have been getting attacked by the very same Civilians that she is going to be sworn to protect one day. "I still don't understand; why not replace that bunch of idiots?" Naruko asked. Hiruzen sighed and stopped what he was doing. Naruko however continued. "I mean sure, they have some good ideas, but then they waist a vast majority of their time on trying to make my life a living hell." Hiruzen saw the anger in his granddaughters' eyes, but he didn't see any hatred.

Just as Hiruzen was going to replied to the young red head there came a booming knock on the door, followed by another, causing the two to wonder you the hell was knocking on the door this early in the morning. It was on the third knock that the door fell down, causing all in the room to sweat-drop as a giant of a man walked in.

The man if you can call him that was big in both that he was tall and on the robust side. Naruko wasn't sure if he was fat or if he was on the muscular side. He has long Brown hair that had a little bit of grey in it but not by much, his full bread also had little bits of grey hair as well, but he looked to be in good health.

What had to be the biggest surprise to Naruko was the fact that he was wearing a dark navy blue shirt, the same color could be seen for his pants as well, and Naruko could tell that they fit him very comfortably. She could see a grey chest plate like armor under his black trench coat; on his arms were steel gauntlet that had covers for back of the hands as well.

His feet were covered, and Naruko was guessing here what could only be steel toe boots, they were covered by steel shin guards much like his gauntlets. Something caught her eye as she looked at his right arm. She had to take a guess but she was sure that she wasn't wrong as she as a steel plate much like a Ninja head band, however this one was different, it had a Spiral in the middle, Now Naruto was sure that she had seen this same symbol on the back of Jōnin around the village.

Hiruzen was surprised that Rubeus Hagrid was back in the Elemental Nations. He was even more surprised that Naruko had jumped in front of his desk with her staff out in a defensive stance. He was not surprise to see that his ANBU was standing guard as well. The Stanger had his hands up showing that he wasn't there to hurt anyone. "Everyone stand down." Hiruzen ordered.

Naruko and the others looked at him and blinked, Naruko had raised eye brows at her grandfather. "Sorry to alarm you, I forget my strength sometimes." The Big guy says. He then turns around and with one hand picks up the door and places it back. Making sure that the hinges were back in place He brought out an umbrella of all things and by pointing the tip at the hinges he fixes them in a flash, literally.

Naruko raised an eye brow. Once Hagrid had finished fixing the door, he turns around and brings out a letter. "I bring a letter for Naruko Uzu…Wait is that right?" Hagrid asked. "I thought her last name would be…." Hiruzen stopped him before he could say anything more. "He had to take on the Uzumaki name because of a law or something." The old Kage said.

Hagrid looked confused but he didn't push it and looked at the child in front of him. Blimey, she looks just like Kushina did when she was a child. Hagrid thought. "Well then you little missy must be Naruko." Hagrid said as he handed Naruko the letter. Naruko took the letter and looked at the big guy. "Everyone must be little to you, big guy." Naruko said with a smile. "Thank you." Naruko thanked him as she opened the letter. The letter though was written in Kanji so she was able to read it perfectly.

HOGWARTS SCHOOL of WITCHCRAFT AND WIZARDRY
Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore

(Order of Merlin, First Class, Grand Sorc, Chf. Warlock, Supreme Mugwump, International Confed. of Wizards)

Dear Miss Uzumaki,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment. Term begins September 1. We will a wait for owl no later than July 31.
Yours sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall
Deputy Headmistress

By the time she had finish reading the letter Naruko eyes were as wide as an owl. She looked up at the half giant and asked what was on everyone's mind. "Who are you?" Hagrid smiled. "Rubeus Hagrid, Keeper of Keys and Grounds at Hogwarts." Hagrid had a sense of Déjà vu. Hagrid remembers a time when another little red haired girl asked him the same question.

"I'm sure your mother has told you about Hogwarts." Naruko shakes her head. "Really, then surely she had told you about your magical gifts." Hagrid said once more and once again Naruko had shaken her head. "Weird Kush…" That was when he had noticed his mistake. Kushina Uzumaki had die on the night of Naruko's birth.

So of course Kushina wasn't there to tell her daughter about both her gifts and about Hogwarts. "I'm sorry Naruko; I had forgotten that your mother had died the night of your birth." Hagrid tells her. "Well Naruko, in case that you haven't figured it out, you're a witch." Naruko eyes had widened at that and had turned to Hiruzen.

"You weren't kidding." Naruko clearly tells him. Hiruzen smiled and nodded. "I would never lie to you Naru." Hiruzen tells her. "I think it is also time to tell you who your mother is." Naruko blinked. "But you have to wait on your father; I'm afraid that you are under a spell and will not know of him until you are older."

Naruko nodded. Hiruzen smiled and pulled out a picture. He handed it to Naruko and smiled at the youngling's surprised look. "Are you serious?" Naruko asked. Hiruzen nodded. "You look just as she did when she had first arrived to Konoha, although she was two years older than you." Naruko tilted her head.

Hagrid filled in the young read head. "Children of the Uzumaki clan often awaken their mystic bloodline at different times." The Half Giant said. "However I believe that you are the youngest to have awakened it." Naruko nodded her understanding. She then looked down at the picture. It was the picture of a young woman maybe an older teen she wasn't really sure at the age. What really surprised Naruko though was the fact that her mother was Kushina Uzumaki, one of two people that Naruko looked up to.

"Wow, to think that my Mother was Kushina Uzumaki." Naruko said as she looked at her mother's picture. "Wait a second, I have heard that Kushina couldn't use Chakra like we could and had fought in the Third war with just her fists just like Mega Eyebrows."

Hiruzen laughed at Naruko's nickname for Might Guy, A Master at the Ninja art of Taijutsu. "No Naruko that was just her way of hiding things." Hiruzen explained. "The truth is, the Uzumaki clan was a clan that could use both Chakra and Mana." Naruko tilted her head. "Mana?" Hiruzen looked at Hagrid who had taken a knee next to the child.

"I can't go into much detail right now, I'll let the teachers explain it better." Hagrid told Naruko. "But in a sense Mana is like Chakra, it's a life form that helps those of the Mystic or Magical world live their lives." He told her. "The Uzumaki clan was the only clan that had the ability to use both Chakra and Mana, making the clan very dangerous."

"Kushina, Your Mother used both Mana and Chakra in battle." Hiruzen said with a smile. "She also won every battle without killing anyone, leaving a bitter taste in her foes mouths." Naruko smiled. "So what happen to the Clan? Why hadn't I learned anything about them?" Hiruzen stared at Naruko and tapped his pipe to clean it.

This was news to him. The Uzumaki clan as well as Uzukagure should have been taught in School, but for some reason it wasn't included. "I'm not sure, I'll have someone look into it, speaking of which, it's getting late, and you don't want to be late for school do you?"

Naruko jumped to her feet realizing what time it was, she ran to her bag and grabbed it. Before she ran out the door she gave her Grandfather a kiss on the cheek and ran out the Window? This confused Hagrid before he could say anything Hiruzen raised his hand to stop him. "She'll be back after classes are over for the day." Hiruzen said.

"In the meantime why don't you stay for a while and have a few drinks." Hiruzen said as he brought out a couple of glasses. "After all we have a lot to catch up on." Hagrid Smiled and sat down in a chair that he had transfigured into a bigger one. "You can come in now Kakashi." Hiruzen said out loud.

"Yo." A Young man with Silver hair in an odd style had jump in from the window. This caused Hiruzen to have a headache as it seemed that every ninja and students loved entering and leaving the same way. Whatever happened to using common sense nowadays?

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"Kakashi? Why are you here?" Naruko asked as she left the school building to go and get lunch. "Lord third asked me to pick you up and take you to get something to eat." Kakashi said. He had hard everything earlier that day, and while he knew it would be good for Naruko, he didn't really want her to go. However he wasn't going to try and to tell her not to, after all it wouldn't be far to Naruko if he tried. "Well what are we waiting for? Let's go!" Naruko said as she walked up to Kakashi and then grabbed the sleeve of his navy blue shirt and started to drag him to Ichiraku's.

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Naruko was into her second bowl when she had stopped eating altogether. She set her chop-sticks down and then looked at him. "I take it you heard?" She asked the person who she saw as a big brother, well at least one of the people she saw as family. Kakashi nodded his head. "Do you think I sure go?" Again Kakashi was at a cross roads.

After all His Sense was this little girl's father and was like a big brother to him after his father killed himself, but on the other hand, he knew that if Naruko were to go she could learn more about herself, her abilities, and her clan. "I think you should go." Kakashi said. He turned to look at her. "It's the best way for you to learn about your bloodline, and about your clan." At the last part he took on a thoughtful look.

"Although not much is known about them." Naruko blinked. But before she could say anything A Young woman with purple hair, wearing a fishnet style blouse, a long tan coat and a very short orange skirt walked in. "Hey Munchkin, The old man wants to see you." She said. Kakashi sighed and took a step back from Naruko.

"What the Hell did you call me you old hag?!" Naruko yelled at her. It's going to be one of those days. Kakashi thought as he watched Naruko and Anko throw stuff at each other. I'm getting to old for this shit.

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"I swear if you every call me that again I'm going to stuff my foot up your…." Naruko yelled at Anko as she walked into the Office. Hiruzen didn't want to know what was going on, but he had to make this meeting fast so that Naruko (If she decides to go) and Hagrid could be on their way.

"I don't want to know." Hiruzen said out loud. Naruko stopped yelling at Anko and looked at her Grandfather. "Oh, right you wanted to see me." Hiruzen nodded. "What about Grandfather?" Hiruzen smiled, and then turned the acceptance letter to Naruko. Oops I almost forgot about that, Stupid Anko.

"Have you decided yet?" Hiruzen asked. He had Hagrid had a long talk about Naruko. They both knew that it would be a good idea if Naruko went. "Yeah, I would like to go." Naruko said. "If I want to be Hokage one day, I'm going to have to be able to protect everyone I love." Hiruzen smiled.

"Very good." Hiruzen said. "Did it take you long to think it over?" He asked. "It did, I couldn't really get any school work done, and before long it was lunch time, that when I realized today was only a half day." Naruko explained. "I decided that if I ever do become Hokage I will need to be strong, and I mean really strong." Hiruzen smiled.

"So I have decided that I am going to go." Naruko said. "It's only for Seven months right?" Hagrid nodded. "So there should be any problems, I can ask Iruka-Sensei to give me a study guild and I can take it with me."

Hiruzen liked that Idea, and seeing as how Naruko wasn't yet a Shinobi of the Village yet, the council couldn't interfere with Naruko this time. "I'll write you up a Travel pass, that way the Council can't stop you from learning." Hiruzen told her. "That would be great." Naruko told her grandfather. "However be careful, Naruko." Hiruzen warned

"The Outside world is a Dangerous place." Naruko tilted her head and looked at him. "You'll see once you get to London." Naruko nodded and then turned to Hagrid. "Wait, what's London?" Naruko asked and Hiruzen laughed at this. "It's a City in a country called England, that reminds me, Hagrid is there a way for her to communicate while there?"

Hagrid nodded his head. "Kushina's Pendant, oh I would also need the Vault's key as well." Hagrid had informed the aging Hokage. "Well Naruko already has the vaults key, although if she was able to get the one in…never mind, as for Kushina's Pendant it's with the Letter Kushina had written." Hiruzen said as he went back to his desk.

While Hiruzen was looking for the letter Naruko had turned to Hagrid. "What's that Symbol on your shoulder?" Naruko asked. Hagrid looked to his right upper arm and looked at the Symbol of the village that had taken him in, once upon a time. "That there Naruko is the symbol for Uzukagure, Home of the Uzumaki clan." He said with a smile.

Naruko could see both the look of pride and sadness in his eyes. Something must have happen that had caused the pain she saw. I'll ask some other time. Naruko thought. That's a good Idea Naru. Naruko heard inside her head.

"Ah found it, sorry about that." Hiruzen said as he had handed Naruko the letter that had seen some better days. "I must have forgotten that it was in my drawers." Naruko looked at the letter, she slowly moved to the couch that was in the room, she could fill the weight of something that was inside, Must be the pendant that Grandfather and Hagrid was talking about. The Child thought.

Naruko opened the letter, once it was open she had dumped the contents out, which was a letter folded neatly, taking a quick look Naruko noticed that the handwriting was neatly written as well. Naruko set that to the side as she favored the Pendant that lies on her lap.

It's was aqua or a lite blue color, and for whatever reason Naruko could only think of the sea as she looks at it, what was unique about the gem though was the fact that it was done in a spiral, Naruko turned it a little as she could see more gems acting as a background in the back. This was done in a way that Naruko couldn't help but think of a setting sun.

Whoever made this must have had a hard time, to get the gem to act as a spiral, a symbol of the Uzumaki clan must have taken hours, if not more. "Beautiful." Was the only thing that Naruko could say about the pendant. The silver chain didn't seem all the much important. It was long enough that the pendant would rest at the base of her throat.

Naruko took in a deep breath as she picks up the letter and looked at it. Well better see what Mama has to say. Naruko thought. She unfolded the letter and begins to read the last words of her birth Mother.

Hello Baby...
If you're reading this, then I guess my vison must have come true and that I didn't make it. Hopefully the rest of my vison didn't come true and that you are reading this with your idiot of a father sitting next to you, if not then I'm sorry sweetie.

As I'm writing this I'm about three months pregnant with you, and I can't tell you how happy I am to have you in my life. After the fall of Uzukagure I wasn't sure if Konoha was a place I could call home. Anyways I'm not going to bore you to death with me writing about myself. What I am going to write about is the fact that if you are reading this then you must have awakened your Uzumaki bloodline.

The Uzumaki Bloodline is not like any other bloodline out there, it can be extremely powerful, and dangerous, yes I know that could be said with just about any other bloodline out there, but how many bloodlines do you know that could turn a mountain and the surround area into a crater. (It should be noted that Naruko had a sweat-drop.) So yeah, our power is no laughing matter.

Hey, you're not even born yet and I can already hear you ask, "If our clan was so powerful, then how come the clan isn't around anymore?" the truth is, I don't know what had happen, I was in London when it happened. I always wanted to go back and to look around but by that time the Second Shinobi war had started.

It wasn't easy fighting in a war and going to school at the same time any easier then it sounded. Well in any case I'm sure you want to know about a few things, first off, I am placing a protection spell on you, the down side is the fact that, well let's just say that you won't be able to found out who your father is until you're at least sixteen years old, sorry Baby.

Secondly, I should tell you about why the Village is going to hate you; again this will only happen if the second part of my vision becomes truth, in any case. The fourth Hokage will/going to be fighting Kurama, or the Nine Tails Fox, because of this He will have to seal the fox into you. You my dear baby will become the new Jinchūriki of this fox, However there's something else that you would need to know.

Her name is Kitsuna, and well she's Kurama's older sister, now Kitsuna isn't going to be sealed inside you per s, she'll be in the seal as she was tasked with Purifying Kurama's Chakra, so she will be very busy, as she was when I held Kurama within me. They will give you an extra bust in power if you need it.

Baby I need you to read this very carefully, there are people in the Elemental Nations that will try anything to get the type of power that the Uzumaki clan is known for, but they will also be after of other bloodline as well, the ability to heal fast is something that everyone will want, and I do mean anyone. Even those that live within the village.

Sorcery is no joke baby; it can be used for good, or evil. Not all Magick users are good, however I want you to trust your heart, you will need friends in your adventures, and you will have many, after all you're an Uzumaki, we don't usually live normal lives. Well I guess depending how you see it; it could be a blessing or a curse.

That being said there are many people that I need you to look out for. Since I don't have a lot of space to write, I will only tell you of a few, the last one isn't dangerous per se but still look out for him. That being said here are the people that you should look out for.

Danzō Shimera: This man is very dangerous, with a capital D. He has been after my power ever since I had gotten to Konoha, and the only reason I didn't just leave the village was because your father wouldn't just up and leave his home. Danzō Scares me, and that is saying something since I took on the Snake bastard, and I don't mean Orochimaru. (More on him later, Sweetheart I promise.)

I'm not sure but I think Danzō is planning something, if he is really like what I think he is then being extremely careful around him. Do not trust him at all for whatever reason, he will only see a weapon in you and he will try anything to make sure he gets what he wants.

That being said, the next person is just as bad, His name is Orochimaru, and the reason he is dangerous is that he is after Uzumaki blood, he wants to study it so he can try to use it to grin the powers that we have, However if he ever learns that the blood cells will disintegrate upon reach open air he will try anything to get the Mystic powers of an Uzumaki.

I hope that he never finds a way out of the Elemental Nations, which is more or less by flight. There is a heavy barrier that only a slight few that can get through, it was made to protect the people of the Elemental Nations from the outside world.

Which reminds me, If you have gotten your letter then you should know this there is a rule in London, and at the School, it was made to protect the Magical world and the Civilian World (It's what the Clan calls those who can't use magic) You must not use magic outside of School unless you're on a mission or in danger.

The last person you should look out for is name Jiraiya, while he may not do anything to you; he is the Village biggest pervert. I don't know how many times I had to hit his head with a frying pan or Fireball his ass, he just wouldn't stop. He likes to watch woman in the hot springs as a way to get ideas for his book series. He harmless but I feel that I should warn you about him.

I want you to understand something baby, your father and I love you very much, and we would give anything to protect you, even our lives. If you grew up without us, then we did what we have sworn to do, My visions have never been wrong and if we are gone, then this is one time that I wish they were, Listen to your senseis, you will have many and they don't care if you have mystical beasts inside you, they want to help you, let them.

I have left you things that will help you learn of the Uzumaki spells, if you are as gifted as I think you are, then learning those spell will be very easy, that being said you still have to be careful. Magick may be cool and exciting but it can be dangerous, so practice your spells, if you stay at the Uzumaki compound then you can practice your spells, there are seals that will protect you. Be careful baby, it won't be easy.

Well that all I have to say. Ouch, hey! No beating up your mother, little brat, not even born yet and you are causing me trouble. But it's worth it, I wouldn't trade this for anything, and I can't wait to finally meet you, my Little Naruko.

Love you very much, See you soon my sweet little girl.
Kushina Uzumaki.

By the time Naruko have finished the letter, she had tears in her eyes. She looked up and handed the letter to her Grandfather. Hiruzen eyes widen when he had seen that Kushina had written about Naruko's burden. "I'm sorry." Hiruzen said. "I should have told you about the Fox." Naruko placed her hand on his shoulder.

"You never lied to me Grandfather, like you said before; you knew my parents and you kept telling me that you would tell me when I'm older." Naruko hugged the aging Hokage. "Thanks you." Naruko said. "Can you tell me what happen to mom?"

Hiruzen sighed. "Only if you tell me why you're not surprised about the Fox?" Naruko sighed and then she went back over to the couch and sat back down. "I already knew about Kitsuna and the fur ball." Naruko said much to the shock of the other in the room. "It was when I had gotten kidnapped." No one said anything.

"Not much is known." Hiruzen said as he sat next to. "Your mother had gone into labor, my wife had gone with her to the place where we knew was kept a secret. Someone found out about it and attacked your Mother, your Father and Kitsuna. My wife never made it." Hiruzen said. Naruko held his hand. "I'm sorry." She said in a soft voice.

Hiruzen didn't say anything until he hugged her. "I have or will I ever blame you." He told her. The two broke apart, Hiruzen going back to his desk and handed Naruko a piece of paper. "That is your travel pass. Don't lose it." He tells her. "I won't, umm will you be telling Mom, that I'm going to Hogwarts?" Hiruzen nodded.

"I hate to break up this touching moment." Hagrid said. "But we have to get goin'. I have one more stop before we get your things." Naruko looked at him and blinked. "Were to, and it better not be a bar." Hagrid gave a hearty laugh at the young red head. Yep, Naruko was just like her mother. "No, I have other person that I need to see, he hasn't answered any of the letters that was sent to him." He tells her.

"Oh Okay, do I need to gather anything, or will I be coming back?" Naruko asked. Hagrid looked at her and gave her a smile. "You'll be coming back; you still have a few weeks before school starts." Hagrid tells her. Naruko smiled and then walked up next to Hagrid. "Okay big guy, lead the way." Naruko said.

"Be careful Naruko, and don't cause any trouble young lady." Hiruzen called out. "Hey, it's me what could go wrong?" Naruko asked as she and Hagrid left the office. Anko looked at the Village leader and smiled. "That is what I'm afraid of." Hiruzen said. "Well it is Naruko? What do you expect?" Anko asked. The aging Hokage just shakes his head.

"I'm getting too old for this shit."

To Be Continued…

Well there you go. The first chapter out of seven rewritten, I think you know the drill by now tell me what you think. The other chapters are going to be going the same way, but tell me if you would like to see something happen to the Dursleys or if Naruko should just stay in the shadows until everything is said and down.

I hope that everyone is staying safe, remember to wash your hands and that other stuff so you don't get sick. Take care everyone.

Kidan Out!