This is a massive rewrite of my first story "Broly, The Retired Deity". I will change many things throughout the story and will admit that my writing wasn't the best, so I've been reading and practicing to better myself and hope you leave a review of how I did.
A/n: Will be a Dragon Ball/DC Comics crossover with a few elements from other anime series and franchises. Also, like the original, it will focus more on the romance aspect with action that hopefully y'all enjoy and will still be a harem. Also If you don't like the story, then simply stop reading and hope you have a good day reading other stories that you may like.
Warning: The world of DC may be a little shaky as I want to include many events from different realities. Also spoiler alert for anyone who hasn't seen the latest Dragon Ball Super movie that starred Broly.
Disclaimer: Do not own Dragon ball, DC comics or any other element of any franchise that will be seen within the story.
Romance/Action/Family
STRICTLY FANFICTION
STRICTLY FANFICTION
STRICTLY FANFICTION
Hope you enjoy Ch.1
Ch.1 "A Legend Begins"
Dialogue:
"Talking"
'Thinking or mentally'
[Techniques, Powers, etc.]
*action like blushing, smiling, etc.*
-Unknown Planet-
Five years have passed since the battle of the mightiest saiyans. Son Goku the saiyan raised on earth and Vegeta, Prince of all saiyans, the defenders of earth who will never forget their hardest adversary to date since Jiren The Grey.
Broly, the Legendary Saiyan of Legend with raw primal power that rival and surpassed the power of the Hakaishins. The Ultimate Warrior. Speaking of the legendary saiyan, he is currently on an uninhabited planet meditating in order to control the wrath building within his being every second, every minute, every hour and so on. (Still in his signature black and green saiyan armor.)
The source of his wrath was the death of one he held dear and above all else. His beloved Cheelai. The one the legendary being considered family, the one responsible for the new emotions that bloomed within his heart. His mate and the love of his life.
Lighting cackled from the skies around the saiyan as the planet shook from the immense pressure emitting from his inner turmoil as the memory of the promise to his late beloved was still fresh in his mind.
[Flash back]
"Cheelai! Rahhhh!" Broly roared as his power fluctuated uncontrollably from seeing the love of his life impaled in order save his life by intercepting a poisonous ki attack from a very powerful intergalactic pirate that led a large fleet under his command.
Primal power raged within the saiyan as his eyes turned completely white with a sinister shade of green aura shrouded his being. "None of you will leave this planet alive. None of you!"
Broly appeared in front of the closest enemy then punched through the startled enemy's skull and then proceeded to incinerate a nearby group with a ki-blast. He then turned his gaze to the one who had his love's blood on his hands that was frozen with fear.
The unlucky bastard let out a pained yell, but was muffled due to saiyan's hand palming his face tightly and proceeded to slowly crush his skull until it splattered everywhere even painting his form, giving him a terrifying look to the rest of the filth who all began to fly away from what they deemed a monster.
Broly stayed true to his word as he ruthlessly purged the scum before him mercilessly. All tried to flee, but it was useless as waves of death engulfed them in every direction, leaving none alive. Just as promised.
The saiyan teleported by his lover's side after regaining control. "Cheelai, stay with me okay? I-it's going t-to be okay babe." 'Damn it! I don't know what to do!'
*in pain* "B-Broly. You and I both know that I won't make it, so please just listen to me you big lug. I-I know it's going to be hard, when I'm gone, but promise me, promise me love that you will move forward. When love appears before you, you better take it, you hear me? I love you Broly and I will not let you drown in sorrow. Take control of that wrath and live your life the way you want."
With tears falling from his eyes, Broly held on to his love as if she was his lifeline. "I-I promise. I know it will be hard and I'll try my best. I love you too." He cried. The legendary saiyan cried his heart out as he felt Cheelai's body go limp after whispering "Thank you hubby."
[Flashback end]
Nothing has ever been the same since then. The death of Cheelai caused him to revert back into his cold exterior, but their promise is what kept him from going insane.
Suddenly, Broly stood up and narrowed his eyes as he could feel an energy signature heading towards his way.
(A/n: I know mortals who haven't attained god ki cannot sense gods, but Broly was exposed to the godly energy when he fought both Goku and Vegeta. And with his broken adaptability, he could easily adapt to the divine energy, proven when he pummeled the two saiyan gods and when he reversed Goku's God bind.)
"Ahh, finally found you. For some odd reason, my staff had a really hard time locating you." A voice rang behind the saiyan, putting him on guard. "Ah no need for that. I am Whis, the angel attendant of the god of destruction Beerus. Pleasure to meet you under better circumstances unlike before hohoho." The angel laughed into his hand.
"Well, you found me. What is it that you want?" Broly asked with his guard still up.
"I'm here to offer you training on one condition. The power you displayed in your last battle against my former students was simply put, mind boggling for a mortal such as yourself to possess power that surpassed the destroyer gods, but that power was unrefined and uncontained. Imagine if you had full control of that power." Whis offered.
The raven-haired saiyan looked down. His mind wandered to the numerous times that he tried with all his might to contain the unrelenting power within him, but always failing to do so. 'This is my chance and I will take it, but first…' "What's the condition?"
"Lord Beerus has been looking for a successor to take up the mantle of Hakaishin for quite some time. There were suitable candidates, two of them being my formal disciples, but they all declined." Whis sighed.
"Done." Broly said with his arms crossed. To him, it was a small price to pay to get a step closer to his promise.
The angel was prepared to hear the same answer as the previous candidates, but to his surprise and joy, the saiyan accepted. "Hohoho, this is great news. I'm sure Lord Beerus will be thrilled when he wakes up."
"Then what are we waiting for?" Broly eagerly asked. As a saiyan, strength and power was very appealing to him, especially when it's needed to fulfill his goals.
'Good, he has the right mindset for what I'm going to put him through. Such talent will not go to waste.' "Haha I like your spirit. Place your hand on my shoulder then we'll be off." Whis laughed as they vanished from the planet.
-Beerus's Planet-
A white beam of light appeared on the land as the saiyan and the angel arrived.
Broly scanned his surroundings and had to admit that he liked it. There was a lake nearby with various aquatic creatures and a big forest next to it. The saiyan was pulled from his thoughts by Whis.
"Listen up my new disciple, I will give you a brief rundown of what we will be covering within your time here. First is control. Your power is quite astonishing, but it's nothing if you let that power dictate your life. After establishing your control, we will move on to enhancing your physical and mental attributes without the constant use of regular ki in order for your body to withstand god ki as your unique saiyan physiology allows you to adapt instantly and enhance it to suit your needs." Whis said in a giddy tone.
Clenching his fist as his eyes flashed golden for a second before a grin appeared on his face. "Bring it."
TIMESKIP: 5 Years later
Five years have passed since Whis took the legendary saiyan under his tutelage and the results were phenomenal.
Under his watchful eye, the angel witnessed the purity of the Broly's power when contained and was left flabbergasted. It rivaled if not surpassed god ki and the angel couldn't wait to see the unification of both. The result of such unification will be an event that will forever be burned into his mind as Broly with unyielding determination, managed to merge his innate power with the divine essence of god ki, turning him into a legendary saiyan beyond god.
[A/n: Saiyan Beyond God is an empowered state undertaken by a Saiyan who gained the ability to utilize the power of Super Saiyan God without having to ascend into transformation.]
His signature green aura morphed into a purer shade than its original sinister glow while his hair took on a darker shade of black and his eyes took on a beautiful shade of gold. No longer he exudes malevolent energy, but one that is pure dominance.
Broly was prodigy among prodigies with a heart of a warrior and with a mind of an conqueror.
Whis discovered that the saiyan had eidetic memory and could flawlessly recall anything he has seen, hear, read, felt etc in perfect detail, so he worked on raising Broly's intellect which didn't take much time as saiyan cleared all of the academic and strategic test that was given to him. The angel also made sure the saiyan had full knowledge of the Omni-Kings, twelve universes, the duties of an Hakaishin, and all that is needed to know.
The results were shown as the saiyan fully utilized his mind and body to act instantly together. The angel found out the hard way when the saiyan skillfully maneuvered three steps ahead of him then flawlessly mimicked his movements and was able to land a mean right hook straight to his face sending him crashing through buildings.
Which led to the saiyan's sparring partner and second teacher, Beerus The Destroyer.
The purple feline Deity was roughly awakened from his blissful nap by the flying body of his attendant. Before anything could get out of hand, he was informed of what transpired and was giddy about the new candidate as he too was stunned by the sheer power of the mortal.
Ever since then, the destroyer could be seen always enjoying a battle with the legendary saiyan with an excited grin while also improving drastically. He was the third strongest hakaishin, but with his constant bouts with Broly had driven his power to surpass those above him.
Day after day, night after night, the saiyan god trained his mind and body with the promise to his late lover as his drive.
Broly went through a transformation of sorts when he attempted to combine his perfected legendary form with god ki which permanently transformed him into a state similar to that of ultra-instinct without the need to separate the conscious from the body as both were perfectly in synced.
As the years progressed, the saiyan god surpassed both the angel and the deity that he considered older brothers and mentors. With their time together outside of training, Broly opened up about what occurred in his past and why he was so adamant about getting stronger.
Speaking of the three, they were locked in a two v one battle with Whis and Beerus tag teaming Broly, wreaking havoc among the planet and uninhabited galaxies nearby. They have been fighting for hours now.
"Come on Broly, stop holding back!" Yelled Beerus as he ducked under a straight jab and proceeded to lay a three hit combo, two to the body and a vicious kick to the head, sending the saiyan towards the sky.
Whis appeared above Broly and kicked him downwards, then sent a blast of divine energy towards the falling form of the saiyan.
Broly regained his balance and flared his power as he charged straight through the blast and with great speed, he rammed an [Omega Crusher] right on the angel's abdomen, sending him crashing through the forest nearby.
Quickly turning around, the saiyan caught the incoming kick by Beerus then dived down towards the land and with immense force, slammed the deity through the ground, causing a massive crater to appear.
Beerus coughed up some blood from the impact, but with a hard headbutt, he managed to get free from the saiyan's grasp and regrouped with his partner.
"Damn that hurt. Haha the cheeky brat has come a long way." Beerus groaned, though he couldn't help, but smile.
"Your lucky you didn't get blasted by his painful crushers, though I agree he has come far. Hohoho " Whis mirrored the smile of his charge.
The angel and the deity shot into the air as their power began to build up even higher as the surroundings areas started to quake while the air thickened.
"You have come far Broly, but it's time for you to prove your worth. Show us that you are a worthy successor, show us that you have what it takes to fulfill that promise!" Beerus stated as he conjured up what seemed to be a miniature sun between his hands, but it quickly expanded as he brought it above his head.
"[Eternal Sphere of Destruction!]"
Whis's form was shrouded with divine white light as he ascended into his fully powered ultra-instinct state while a miniature cyclone danced around his index finger.
"[Symphony of Destruction!]"
Both divine beings launched their attacks that merged together, morphing into devastating drill-like blast coated with a mixture of purple and white ki particles, heading straight towards their disciple who fearlessly gazed at the incoming attack with a smile.
Brody's power began to fluctuate as the universe shook. "Masters...Brothers, thank you for all that you taught me throughout these years and I will not disappoint you." Jade energy burst from the saiyan's being as he charged a ki blast with his right hand with electricity bursting around it and then roared. "[Omega Piercer!]" A massive beautiful yet menacing jade wave of power shot out to meet the opposing force.
Boom! The collision of both attacks caused all twelve universes to quake, catching the attention of very powerful individuals.
Both attacks collided and the opposing force both weren't letting up, but that soon changed as Broly pumped more power into his blast, overpowering the opposing force. The two deities were soon engulfed by the attack and were ruthlessly slammed down towards the planet while covered in bruises. After a few minutes, both stood up shakily as they made their way towards their disciple.
"Haha, damn that hurt." Beerus groaned and Whis nodded in agreement while Broly sheepishly rubbed his neck.
"I agree, but most importantly, you have passed your final test and there's nothing left for us to teach you." Whis stated proudly.
"Thank you both for all that you have done for me, as masters and as brothers." Broly flashed a genuine smile before humbly bowing, though he along with his surrogate brothers felt an overwhelming energy signature from above and all bowed in respect when they saw a prominent figure in the multiverse.
"Grand Priest-sama." Broly along with the two divine beings said with respect while the new arrival smiled at them.