Scooby-doo and the Love Hina mystery

Hi everyone I am new to writing fanfictions so constructive criticism is appreciated. And I know I suck at grammar. Rated T to be safe.

Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina or any of its characters; they belong to Ken Akamatsu. Nor do I own Scooby-Doo or any of its characters; they belong to Warner Brothers. I am not doing this for profit so please do not sue me.

Notes: *** means a new setting.

For scooby's tendency to speak in R's I've minimized it to try and lessen confusion. Sorry if you still struggle to read it.

I am ignoring the language difference for simplicity sake.

I was too lazy to do honorifics so sorry about that.

Naru was sleeping soundly in her bed when she woke with a start. Her burly just woken up eyes scan the room to see what had woken her. Her room seemed normal enough. Naru had just decided that it was just the wind when she heard something fall.

Whipping around she saw her diary and a couple of other books were on the ground. I bet it's that perverted idiot trying to sneak a peek at my diary again she thought as she stood up ready to deliver her super Naru punch.

But that is when she saw it in all of its spooky horrors. "GHOST" she screamed as she fled from it. But in the process managed to fall down the hole connecting her and Keitaro's room.

Keitaro who had been woken by Naru's screen was shocked to be grabbed by a frightened Naru. "G-g-ghost" Naru stammered. "Eh?" Keitaro questioned.

Then Naru realized who she was clinging to. "Get out of here you pervert" Naru screamed as she administered her Naru punch. "Ahharg" screamed Keitaro as he blasted off.

The door slams open as Kitsune, Motoko, and Shinobu rush in. "What's wrong Naru," Motoko asked. "I'm pretty sure I heard her say a ghost" Shinobu whispered.

"I, I" stuttered Naru. "Come on, tell y'all what's the matter hon." Kitsune soothed. "I saw a ghost in my room," Naru explained. "Are ya sure yall didn't sneak down to see Keitaro?" Kitsune teased. "Don't say weird things" Naru shouted at Kitsune.

*in Narus room*

We see Narus bed a mess, cover missing from the hole down to Keitaro's room, and several books scattered on the floor, but no ghost.

"Well, where's the ghost Naru?" inquired Motoko. "It was here a minute ago" Naru stated. "Are ya sure that you just didn't sneak down to see Keitaro?" teased Kitsune. "Stop that Kitsune, there was a ghost". Naru screamed. "And tomorrow I'm going to call the best ghost hunters in the world to catch it."

The door bangs open to reveal Su dressed as a Ghostbuster. "I gotcha you ghost," Su shouts. As she proceeds to turn on a replica proton pack. Sweat drops from everyone. As it proceeds to explode.

We see the Scooby gang driving along in the mystery machine. It is the next day.

"Wow, that was sure an urgent call this morning. I wonder what a ghost would be doing haunting a hotel." Remarks Fred.

"Like who cares man, I bet the place will be stocked full of good food". Shaggy exclaims. "Reah, good food." Scooby agreed. "Don't you too ever stop thinking of food?" Velma asked. "Like sure, sometimes we think of eating". Shaggy replied.

"Well, I'm looking forward to Hina Hotspring." Stated Daphne. "But daphne we'll be busy solving a mystery". Fred exclaimed. "Well, there could be some important clues in the hot spring." Replied Daphne.

"Were here". Fred stated as the van pulled to a halt in front of the stair to the Inn. "Like zoinks, I've seen skyscrapers with fewer stairs than this place". Shaggy exclaimed.

*once inside the inn*

"Like wow, this place is huge". Shaggy exclaimed.

"Hello, anyone here? We got a call about a ghost problem". Fred called.

"Hello," Naru replies as she, Shinobu, and Motoko come down the steps. "Aww what a cute dog" Naru and Shinobu start hugging scooby. "Rog? Where?" Scooby askes.

"Whaa"? Naru and Shinobu gasp recoiling away. "It talks"?

"It must be a demon dog". Motoko exclaims. "I will gladly destroy it". Motoko says drawing her blade.

As scooby dives out of the way of Motoko's blast, Keitaro enters the room. "What's going on here? Arrgh" Keitaro screams as he goes flying. "Like please don't hurt Scooby he's not a demon just our dog". Begs Shaggy. "How can you be sure it's not a danger"? Motoko questioned. "How can you be sure he isn't actually a demon in disguise like in some poorly written fanfiction crossover?"

"Please we've had Scooby for years, I can guarantee he isn't a danger to anything but food". Retorted Velma. "Very well" Motoko replied. "But I will keep an eye on him". She said as she left.

"Uhh, will that guy who you hit be okay?" Daphne asked Naru. "Yes, he will be fine" Naru replied. "Now, you are the Mystery solvers, right?"

"So that's what happened" Naru concluded telling the Mystery gang of her run-in with the ghost. "Jinkies, that sounds like a mystery all right". Velma exclaimed. "Is there any way we could investigate your room?"

"Sure" Naru replied. "But I should give you some warnings this is technically an all-girls dorm so be careful around the bathrooms, hot springs, and" she turned to address Velma and Daphne directly "that pervert that manages our dorms".

"Hey, that's not fair" cried Keitaro who had just got back from his flight (joke intentional).

"And furthermore, you should know there are several other residents that live here, so be aware of them" Naru finished.

"Like, do you have a kitchen here," Shaggy asked. "Sure it's over there, help your…" Naru didn't get to finish Shaggy and Scooby were gone.

"Are they always like that?" Naru asked. "No, sometimes they are really hungry". Daphne joked.

"Anyway let me show you to my room" Naru finished. As she, Keitaro, Fred, Velma, and Daphne proceed up the stairs.

Meanwhile Scooby and Shaggy had found the kitchen. "Like man, oh man. This kitchen is huge" Shaggy commented. "Shall we cook something, old pal?" "Reah" Scooby replied.

As they started cooking they had no idea they were being watched. "Like pass me the tomatoes would ya Scoob," Shaggy asks as he looks in the drawer for a cutting knife. "Rokay" Scooby replied as he reached for the tomatoes out of his ingredients only to find them gone. "Ruh? Where did they go?" Scooby asked. Looking around.

"Raggy, do you have the tomatoes?" Scooby asks as he pats Shaggy down to try to find them and even lifts Shaggy off the ground to check under him. "Like, of course, I don't Scoob. I just asked you for them" Shaggy replied. "What happen Scoob? Did you eat them all?"

"Rnot me" Scooby replied. "Likes it's fine if you did Scoob I'll just use a different vegetable," Shaggy told Scooby.

"Rut I didn't," Scooby said in confusion. As he turned back to the Curry he was making only to find it gone.

"Raggy, how could you". Scooby accused "Like, huh?" Shaggy said, turning his back on the rice bowl he was making.

"Rou ate my curry" Scooby continued. "Like, what?" Shaggy responded. "Like I didn't eat your curry Scoob. You must have eaten it and forgotten" Shaggy replied as he turned to find his rice bowl empty.

"Like, Scooby you're eating is out of control" Shaggy complained. "Rit wasn't me," Scooby replied innocently. "Then like who was it?" Shaggy countered. "Yo" Su greeted as she landed on Scooby's back with curry and rice on her face.

"Thanks for the yummy foods" Su greeted. "Zoinks" Shaggy shouts in response to the sudden appearance of this girl.

"Are you here to play doggy?" Su asked as she patted Scooby on the head.

"Like she must be one of the tenants" Shaggy exclaimed. "Rand, she ate all our food". Scooby complained.

"Ohh, you want more food?" asked Su. "I have yummy bananas in my room. If you want some." Su exclaimed as she hopped off Scooby onto the ground. "Like zoinks, lead the way" Shaggy replied eagerly. As they set off to Su's room.

Meanwhile in Naru's room

"So this is where you saw the ghost," Velma asked as she examined the ground. "Yup," Naru replied.

"And downstairs in my room is where…" Keitaro started. "Don't tell them that" Naru rage hitting him to the ground.

"You really shouldn't do that he could get seriously hurt". Fred said Worriedly. "Trust me he's fine" Naru waved off his concern.

"Ooo" came a voice. Kitsune entered the room. "Where did ya find the hunk of a man?" Kitsune asked as she scanned Fred with a sly grin. "Ya looking for a replacement for old string bean Keitaro?" She teased Naru secretly.

"Kitsune!" Naru shouted. "It's not like that, he's part of the mystery group here to catch the ghost." "Oh, that means he's free hmm?" Kitsune inquired secretly. "Kitsune" Naru shouted.

Sweat Drops for everyone else as they watch this.

"So" Velma interrupted "is there anything missing from your room?" "Only my diary" Naru replied

"Odd what would a ghost want with a diary?" Daphne asked.

"I don't know" Fred responded "But I think we should…" Fred never got to finish the sentence as a scream split the air. "Zoinkies"

"That sounded like Shaggy and Scooby" Daphne gasped in concern. "Lets go" Fred shouted as he started to run to the source of the noise.

Earlier in Su room

"Like man, oh man. Those were some good bananas" Shaggy declared. "Reah" Scooby agreed. "But like, this is sure one weird room. I sure hope it's safe here" Shaggy contiunted.

"Ooh you're worried about safety" Su asked. "Well I have security tech" Su exclaimed, as she pulls away some leave to reveal her stash of machines.

"Like wow I've never seen such a groovy group of machines before" Shaggy commented. "Reah" Scooby agreed.

"Rhat does this do?" asked Scooby as he checks out one of the machines. "It's a device that makes ink and lead proof paper," Su explained, excited that someone was interested in her devices.

"Like what about stuff? Shaggy askes. "My laugh track machine" Su repiled.

"Rhow about these shoes?" Scooby inquired. "Hover shoes" Su exclaimed excitedly.

"Like, how about this statute?" Shaggy asked, indicating the odd thing in the corner. "Oh that's not a statue that's just some ghost," Su said smiling.

"Like what," Shaggy questioned. As he slowly turned back to it. Hahahaha the ghost cackled as it surged forward.

"Zoinks!" Shaggy Screamed, he ran in terror with Scooby carrying Su following close behind him.

"I heard it comes from this way". Fred exclaimed as he and the others raced down the hall.

"Ahhhh- Bam" as Scooby and Shaggy run right into the others.

"Ow" Keitaro complains, as he realizes he is touching something soft. Uh-oh he thought as he opened his eyes to see he had landed hands first on Velma's breasts.

"Ahh" he recoiled away. As he heard Naru shout "you pervert". But when no blow came he opened his eyes to see Fred on the ground, a victim of Narus' punch.

"Hmm, getting chummy already, are we?" Kitsune teased.

"What's wrong guys, did you see the ghost?" Daphne asked. "Like who do you think we're running from, this little girl?" Shaggy asks as he gestures to Su.

"Hooo" the ghost moans as it turns the corner and comes into view. "Ahh" everyone screams as they start running.

A classic Scooby doo door chase scene starts. With gags including: A Scrappy doo cameo, Keitaro tripping as he runs landing on top of Naru then proceeding to get chased by her instead, Fred carrying Kitsune away from the ghost as she flashes a quick thumbs up and grin, Shaggy and Scooby run into a room then run out of the room while being chased by a half-dressed Motoko screaming "perverts", Su riding some crazy rocket invention as she chases the ghost, Shaggy and Scooby rowing a canoe across the ground as the ghost follows them, and ends with Shaggy, Daphne, and Naru running in on a naked Shinobu in the hot springs.

Who of course proceeds to scream in embarrassment, followed by Naru hitting Shaggy away screaming "Pervert".

Well Daphne has a thought-bubble of "how could any real person possibly survive that?"

Everyone regroups in the living room only to find that Kitsune, Kietaro, Fred, Velma, Scooby, and Su are missing!

I am going to stop there and wait for some feedback before I continue.