Welcome to my new story Saints Row More than a game
This story will be based on the main story of the Saints Row video game. The story will mainly focus on the lives of my two OCs, The first OC is Micheal Smith. Micheal will be the main protagonist in this story, He will most likely not talk like the first protagonist in Sr1. Now The Second OC is Tommy Gat. Tommy Gat is the deuteragonist in this story and the younger brother of Johnny Gat, He will be the more talkative one. The story will start with Julius narrating the beginning of the story later the story will transition with Micheal and Tommy's background of what led them to join the 3rd street saints. Now stay tuned and enjoy.
I do not owe Saints Row 1. This game is owned by Volition inc, THQ Nordic.
Prologue
Julius Narration
Summer August 15, 2006, it was the hottest day of the fu*king year, like the summers that have past turf wars were going on in the city. You would think after 30 years of gang violence motherfuc*ks will put end to it. Then again I can't even be surprised, they wouldn't stop this turf war bullsh*t even if the police got involved. Here I am, I'm sitting in this church wondering how long I can deal with this sh*t? I won't lie to you, Apart of me wants to leave the city and walk away from it all but do I really wanna walk away from a city that took me from a young boy to a man. I know if I walk away now this city will be destroyed. One of my lieutenants Troy walks in and looks to be ending his phone call.
Julius, what's the move for today? Troy asked me.
There has been trouble going in the Row, man we need to lock our sh*t down immediately, I said.
What do you mean? Troy asked me another question.
The turf war has been a problem for years, now it's entering our territory and threatening to destroy us, I said answering his question. I say we drive around and sees what's going on.
Troy agrees with me and we left the church to ride around Saints row.
Micheal's Smith Pov
Football practice needs to hurry up, so I can get home soon. I can not walk home knowing that any of the three gangs could possibly be out causing trouble. Finally, football practice is over leaving the field and I'm ready to go home. As I get on the bus I see my friend Tommy and his cousin Jasmine Gat. I knew them since we were in fifth grade and they have always been like family to me.
Hey Mikey, Jasmine flirtatiously said, making Tommy glare at us both. How was practice?
I mean it was okay, but I'm just eager to get home honestly, I said to them both.
Yea I get what you mean bro, it's definitely hot as hell out here, He said to me. Hey if you two weren't busy with anything we should go to this party they having a couple of blocks away from my house.
Okay, They both replied.
The bus was now coming to stop and I was ready to get off. I got off and started walking the path to my house and I noticed two men wearing yellow clothing who happen to be Vice Kings members hanging out at the brown baggers. One of them was wearing a headband and the other one had a braided hairstyle. My heart started racing fast because the last time I ran into some Vice Kings and the encounter wasn't pleasant. Even though I walk a little faster, The one wearing the headband said something to me.
How was football practice little ni**a, He said to me.
I ignored him and kept it moving but they started to follow me. Next thing I knew I felt one of them push me. So I turned around and when I did the other one punched me in the face. Instead of fighting back, I fell to the ground and curled in the fetal position. Before the situation escalated a police car rode by.
The Vice Kings began to run and while they one of them said, You got lucky b*tch.
We'll see you again, so watch yourself motherfu*ka, The other one said.
I got up and immediately started walking the way to my house. When I got home, mom was in the kitchen cooking. I began to walk into the kitchen and sat down.
Hey son, how was practice? She asked me while she was still cooking.
I ignored her and sat there quiet dazed out of mind, then mom turned around and noticed my head was down.
Micheal, what's wrong? is everything okay? She asked me questions.
No mom, I'm just really tired, I said to her.
She puts the spoon on the stove and walks towards me with a worried look on her face.
Micheal picks up your face, She said to me.
I kept my head down, then she lifts my face up and noticed my black eye.
Micheal what the hell happened to your face, She said to me with a worried look.
I got hit in the head with a football at practice, I said to her.
Are you sure Mikey? She asked me. This seems like you got punched in the face.
Yeah mom, that's what happens, I said to her. I'm going to my room now.
I walked upstairs to my room and went inside. I flopped on the bed then I pulled my phone out realized I had missed a phone call from Tommy.
I called and then he answered.
Hello, I said to Tommy.
Yeah, you still coming to the party, He said to me.
Yeah, what time does it start? I said to him not really wanting to go.
It starts at eight, Tommy said. I'll come in twenty minutes with Jasmine to pick you up.
AIght, I'll see you guys then, I said and then I hung up.
I began to get out of my football practice clothing and started getting dressed for the party. At first, I didn't want to go anymore but then I realized it was the first party I was going to since I started high school, so I decided I was going to go. Tommy and Jazzy finally arrive at my house to pick me up. I walked out of my room and went downstairs. As I was leaving the house, I told my mom I was going to Tommy's house and walked out the door.
I walk up to them and I notice Jasmine and Tommy changed their outfits as well. Jasmine smiled at me and hugged me.
Hey Mikey, She said to me and noticed I was wearing sunglasses but didn't say anything. Your outfit looks nice.
Thanks, you also look nice, I said to her and looked at Tommy. You look nice to bro.
Thanks, You know I'm not gonna lie I thought you were going to put on something stupid, what's with the sunglasses Tommy said to me, I looked at him mentally telling him to forget about it. Nevermind, let's just get to this party.
We got to the party at 8:10 when we got there and it seemed like everyone was already drunk. I also noticed there weren't any men or women wearing any gang colors that meant nobody would be getting hurt. An hour has now passed by and the party was getting boring. During the party, Tommy went upstairs with girls who had dreadlock hairstyle. Jasmine and I were chilling on the couch and talking.
What do you think he went upstairs to do? Jasmine said.
Who knows Jazzy, I do know this party is getting wack, I said to her. How about me and you go back to your place?
She smiled at me and said, How about some other time when we're not around Tommy? She said to me.
You still haven't told him that we're dating, I said angrily to her. You said when we start dating, I wouldn't have to tell Tommy you would do it.
How am I supposed to explain to my cousin I'm dating his best friend, She said with an angry look on her face. I don't understand why you think that's an easy thing to do.
I never said it was an easy thing to do, but keeping our relationship a secret is also not exactly an easy thing either, I said to her.
I'm not talking to you about this, can you go get Tommy so we can leave? Cause I'm ready to go, She said to me.
Yea, I'll go get him, I said with a disappointing look on my face.
I went upstairs to go get Tommy, and when he was leaving one of the rooms, he was still putting his shirt, smiling and walking towards me.
I'm not going to ask, I said. You ready to go, this party is getting wack and Jasmine is ready to go.
Yeah, we can leave, Tommy said. You get Jazzy and I'll meet you guys by the door.
After that, I went to get Jasmine and we all left the party. We decided to first walk Jasmine home, then me and Tommy were going to go our separate ways to our houses. When we go to Jasmine's house, she hugged Tommy and said goodbye to him, then she walked into her house completely ignoring me. I didn't care too much and I just began to walk more with Tommy.
Hey Mikey, me and Tommy stopped walking and he began talking. What happened with you and Jasmine back there, it seemed like you two were just had a fight.
Naw bro we're good, I think she was a little tired from the party, I said to him.
Yea you right, Jazzy has never been the angry type, He said to me. She'll probably be fine tomorrow.
I nodded to him, and we kept walking. While we were walking there was a man selling watches.
Watches, I got watches, He said to us. Yo man this sh*t will cost you six hundred dollars in the store.
We ignored him and walked past to avoid him.
Ah whatever, He waved his hand down at us and we kept walking, after that a prostitute walked towards us offering us sexual advances.
Hey baby, I can show both of you a good time, She said to us.
I was going to continue walking but Tommy was going to considering her offer. While all that was happening, I notice three Vice King members, two of them happen to be the men that jumped me earlier and there was a fat white one with a bandana.
Man hell naw, One of them yelled getting Tommy and the prostitute's attention.
The three Vice Kings members were sprayed painting a wall that said Rollerz on it before they were about to spray the wall, three men wearing blue shirts walked up to them, I assumed they were the gang called Rollerz. They were all talking at first, then one of the Rollerz punched one of the Vice Kings members in the face. Then the other men then joined in the fight, the roller member who threw the first punch began to run away but was hit in the back of the head with the spray can.
While all that was going on, me and Tommy were still watching the two gangs fighting each other.
Tommy, you see them two Vice King members right over there, I said to him.
Yeah, He said to me.
They jumped me earlier, that's the reason why I'm wearing sunglasses, I said to him.
Damn, why didn't you say that earlier, He said to me.
I shook my head and said, I was trying not to forget about it.
While me and Tommy were talking, a car with the color red pulled up beside by the men and began shooting at them, they killed the fat white Vice King member and two Roller members, I assumed were the gang that was killing the others were called Los Carnales. When they all began shooting at each other Tommy and I began to walk away so we didn't get shot by one of them. Then from a block away, the Roller member who ran from the fight earlier started shooting at the Carnales member's car. The car began to spiral out of control, while the car was driving the drove into me and knocked me down. Tommy came over to and tried to help me up. While Tommy was helping, The Roller who shot at the car killed the driver, then after that, he was killed by the Vice King member with a headband on.
The Vice King member walked over to me and Tommy and said, I know you from earlier, He said to me.
He then pointed his gun at us and said, Wrong Time, Wrong place dawg, Right before he shot one of us. A white man wearing a black and purple shirt came up behind him then he shot and killed him with his gun.
You okay playa, Another man who also was were purple clothing said to me as he and Tommy help me up from the ground.
Julius let's move, The white man who saved us said.
We all started walking away from that situation, the car exploded making all of us stumbled a bit. The man Julius along with Tommy sat me down on the ground and started talking to us.
That doesn't look so bad kid, you should be fine, Julius said to me while talking about my injured leg. That's Troy you two can thank him later, He said. This time talking to me and Tommy.
Hey, Troy said waving his hand at us.
The Row ain't safe no more, boys, Julius said to us. We got gangs fighting over sh*t that ain't theirs, and you in they way. They don't care if you representin' or not.
Troy interrupted Julius, Julius this is no time to recruit, he said to him.
We need all the help we can get son, Julius said to Troy.
No, we need to get our asses outta here, Troy yelled at Julius.
In a minute, Julius yelled back then he looked back me and Tommy. Look, the Row's got a problem, Come to the church when you wanna be a part of the solution.
Julius and Troy walked off leaving me and Tommy to think about what he just said.
A/N I finally remade the Prologue, the reason I did this because I was unsatisfied with how I was going with the story. So I decided to change things around. Now Stay tuned and enjoy.
The first change I made to the story was the name of the protagonist, instead Maxwell Smith, his name will Micheal Smith.
The second change I made to the story is my OCs before they didn't know each other at the beginning of the story, now they have been best friends since fifth grade.
The third change is Julius has a narration in the prologue.
Now the last change to the story, I will do a better job on detailing more. Some of the writing from those chapters were rushed and not good. These are all the changes in the story, review what I can do better on next.