Hello, I'm Florio Lazuli and I'm new here.

I remembered watching the Great Mouse Detective when I was 16, because it was a great movie and my favorite is Professor Ratigan.

This first chapter is about my OC Clarice Mousse of how she used to live in New York until she moved to London, but this talks about how she met Padraic Ratigan.

I don't own the GMD characters, I only own my OCs.

New York 1852

Clarice Mousse and her family are in the park where she and her older brothers Kent and Pent are playing hide-and-seek while their parents Celic and Hannah are having a picnic with Clarice's younger sister Clara.

She meets a mouse-rat hybrid Padraic Ratigan who is reading a book under the tree since his parents couldn't come to the park with him.They explain about how their family lives a normal life, but what they discovered in their life.

Clarice explains to Padraic; "My parents met during World War One, and they got married since the french countryside had won, they moved to New York in the apartment where they met your mom Pam."

Padraic explains to Clarice; "My mom had been doing ok since she was being abused, I took care of her when I discovered I was gonna have a little sibling".

When it began to rain, Clarice was being called by Celic and he told her that they have to go back to the apartment, she said to Padraic before leaving, "I'll see you tomorrow after school."

Padraic came back to the apartment where he saw his dad smoking on the couch and his mom in her room sleeping, he sneaks to his room and gets some rest.

Clarice heard Hannah and Celic's conversation about moving from New York to London and finding a place to live, much to her siblings dismay.

Their conversation was interrupted by the noises coming from "The Ratigans", Celic comes out of the apartment and confronts Beckett who's been beaten up by Padraic. The two get into a fight, the police arrive and they arrest Beckett for going overdose on drugs, Celic gets arrested for engaging in a fight between him and Beckett.

Clarice and her siblings were wondering what was going on, but they were being told by Hannah to go back inside since it's none of their business.

When the police leave, Clarice becomes worried if her dad's gonna be ok, she realizes that Beckett is Padraic's dad who was abusive towards him.

London 1852

The next day, Clarice and her family were able to move from New York to London since Celic is still in prison along with Beckett for what they did yesterday that was violent.

Clarice and Padraic keep in touch by writing letters towards each other since Clarice told him about her family moving to London to have a place to live.

Her family now lives in a house where they have their own rooms, Kent and Pent share rooms and they sleep in a bunk bed, Clarice has her own room since it had a big bed.

Celic was released from prison and he explained to his family "When I told them that Beckett had been overdose on drugs, they took him to the mental hospital and they decided to release him to give them evidence on what happened yesterday."

Clarice asks her dad "Is Padraic and his mom gonna be ok," he said to her "Pam said that she's moving to london, because of Beckett's overdose and his arrest".

A Few Weeks Later

Pam and Padraic moved from New York to London where Padraic's younger sister was born, and Pam names her Evangeline Ratigan.

When Pam passed out, the ambulance came and picked her up while padraic and evangeline remained silent as they followed the ambulance.

The two of them were waiting for the doctor to tell them if their mother is doing ok, but he said to padraic that pam was diagnosed with cancer on her stomach.

This made Padraic shocked and heartbroken to learn that his mom is not gonna make it, so he asked the doctor if he could say goodbye to her, but he was too late she's gone.

Yeah I made Clarice's dad Celic beat the crap out of Beckett who was beaten up Pam and then Padraic.

I know that the first chapter is a bit brutal, but also depressing, because Celic and Beckett got into a fight, and then Padraic and Evangeline's mom Pam passed away from stomach cancer.

Do you like it or not?