i am totally new at this so please only positive and helpful criticism, thank you.
naruto uzumaki was training one day and fell asleep during his training. While he was asleep he noticed that there was a sword, a staff l, and a shield. Naruto goes to investigate each of the random weapons that just appeared, and chose the sword. Then he gained more power than he thought possible.
outside of naruto's mind
Kakashi was watching him until he woke up and kakashi just thought that naruto was talking to kurama the nine-tailed fox. Just then naruto awoke and felt a sudden surge of power, he stuck out, closed his hand and the keyblade, oblivion appeared. and so kakashi and naruto were both surprised.(just naruto is able to do this until a certain someone appears.)Then both kakashi and naruto were attacked by a swarm of heartless then poof sora appears in final form and destroyed them all. After sora transformed back he greeted both naruto and kakashi with a smile only his face could make. Naruto asked, do you know what this is referring to his keyblade. Sora replied yeah that's a keyblade only some people can wield them and your fist person here that i have seen do this in this world. Kakashi stopped them before they could finish and asked sora if he would come the leader of the village, the sandiame hokage, sora said, "sure why not".
At the hokage mansion
Once they got there kakashi knocked on the door and asked if they could come in, of course sarutobi said, "why not." They came in and sarutobi asked who the new guy was and sora introduced himself, "I'm sora." and I'm Haruzin sarutobi, so sora what brings you to the village of the hidden leaves. Sora replied, well a bunch of heartless keep appearing here, points and says like that and slashes it with impossible speed. Sarutobi replied okay then is there anyone else who you can train to kill these heartless. Sora replied yeah naruto here can summon the same type of weapon i can. Sarutobi asked kakashi to leave and then asks naruto to summon said weapon. Naruto summons said weapon then sarutobi asked if he would be willing to train naruto to kill everytype of heartless that has ever seen.
I am going to cut chapter one here and chapter two will start the training and friendly reminder please only positive and constructive criticism please see you next time