A/N Hey guys, Aegon here, with Chapter 2 of Who I Am, before I begin I have few points to make.
1. There were some writing errors in Chapter 1 and I fixed them.
2. The appearances of the characters are the same as in Part one(thus I did not bother to describe them) except for Naruto, he will have red hair and will have a genius level of intelligence. His outfit will change after the Chunin Exams to accommodate his true personality.
will also be on good terms with the Nine-Tails.
4. The Rinnegan will also be the Kekkei Genkai of the Uzumaki Clan, along with those we all already know of, but no one, outside the clan, in the elemental nations knew of this. And yes the Sharingan's final stage will be the Eternal Mangekyo.
Human Speech: "Hello"
Human Thought: 'So you say, but I know otherwise'
Tailed Beast Speech: "Leave me in peace human"
Tailed Beast Thought: 'Freedom will be mine'
Disclaimer: I Do Not OWN Naruto.
Chapter 2
In The Stands
"Rinnegan? what's that? I bet it's some sort of genjustu that Naruto-Baka is using to upstage Sasuke-Kun!" Ranted Sakura. "No, it's not didn't the academy teach you guys about the Three Great Eye Techniques?" Asked Asuma.
"No, just about the Sharingan and Byakugan." Replied Sakura "Tch favoritistic council" mutters Asuma, "The Rinnegan is said to be the most powerful dojutsu of all the three dojutsu, there is not much known about this dojutsu but it is known that it gives the user control over all of the five basic elements and according to legend, in times of disorder the wielder of these eyes will either be a "God of Creation" who will calm the world or a "God of Destruction" who will reduce everything to nothingness. So there you have it, kids, now let's just hope no one pisses him off enough to destroy the shinobi world" Explained Asuma.
Kage Booth
"I never knew that you hid such a prominent shinobi in your forces Sandaime-dono"
Commented the Kazekage on the event that is unfolding. 'Damn you Sarutobi-sensei for hiding this I could've been a God already if I knew this brat had those eyes, he definitely would've been an easier target than Pein' Fumed Orochimaru in thought. Chuckling the Sandaime replied, "Believe me Kazekage-dono I'm just as surprised as you on this but you know this is the shinobi world, we all have our secrets." While fuming in thought 'Damn you weapon for having the eyes of the Sage Of Six Paths, I didn't plan for this because the Head Doctor assured me that despite being an Uzumaki, well half-Uzumaki, that you would never obtain those eyes, I guess Jiraiya will have to pick off where I have left off after the Chunin Exams and seal away those eyes, Permanently!'
Stadium Floor
"H-How did you of all people obtain those eyes? You're a no talented, clanless loser" Stuttered/exclaimed Neji in disbelief. "How I have these eyes is not important, what matters is that I do and that now that the talking is over I will whoop your ass, not just for what you did to Hinata-chan but also because your ego needs to be cut down!"
"Asura Path Chakra Cannon" Replies Naruto. An extra arm sprouts from his shoulder with the forearm transforming into a cannon, gathering chakra Naruto condenses it and fires at Neji. "Dammit, Kaiten!" Both techniques struggles for dominance but Naruto's dense chakra won out, blasting Neji into the stadium wall. 'Damn him, forcing me to use Kaiten this early'
In The Stands
"Whoa that is one powerful Jutsu!" replied Ino in astonishment. "Told ya," replied Asuma with a smirk. "Yes, indeed my youthful friend," said an optimistic Gai. "I can't believe he broke through Neji's Kaiten defense with pure chakra," thought Tenten. 'Naruto-Kun has become powerful' thought a blushing Hinata.
Stadium Floor
"D-Damn you, I refuse to be beaten by a talentless loser who got lucky on power drawings of life, it is destined that you lose to me, Fate deems it so!" replied Neji while struggling to get up. "Believe what you want Hyuga, this is the shinobi world we all hold our fate in our hands since you are on your last legs and that last Kaiten used up most of your chakra I will end this fight."
Starting to weave hand signs, he calls out "Water Release: Water Dragon Jutsu", expelling water from his mouth, a large dragon with yellow eyes starts to form and swirl around Naruto. Looking at Neji, the dragon roars and starts flew towards him in attack 'Dammit I'm too low on chakra I can't dodge it' thinks Neji. Suddenly he hears a cry of his opponent "Lightning Release: False Darkness". Both jutsu merge creating an electrified dragon with Naruto calling out its name "Lightning/Water Release: Electrifying Dragon"!
'This jutsu I can't dodge' thinks Neji while watching it approach. The Jutsu hits him full-on, slamming him into the wall for a second time and paralyzing his body's motor functions while he cries out in agony. "Well, Proctor- san you can call the match, he is out of it," Naruto says seeing Neji lying unconscious on the floor, twitches of lightning on his body from the after-effects of his jutsu. "Winner Naruto Uzumaki!" the proctor calls out. Most of the shinobi's cheer for the match while the civilians sit, stupefied at the outcome of the result of the match with many crying having lost a lot of money in betting on the 'demon brat' losing.
In The Stands
"Yeeesssss I'm rich!" screams Anko out in joy from having placed her betting outcome on Naruto winning. "(Sigh)Only you Anko would do such a thing" said Kurenai. "Of course Nai-chan, I saw from day one the kid's potential. It's a pity, Kakashi lost out on a real diamond there instead of choosing to focus on a spoiled brat with mental issues." replies Anko, "Well I hope I get my share from your winnings, after all, it's only fair" says Naruto while entering the booth where the shinobi's are. "Well of course brat see it as a reward for wiping the floor with that Hyuga," says Anko. "Well if it isn't the man of the hour, you sure did avenge Hinata properly," says Kiba with a snicker. "Troublesome Blonde" comments Shikamaru and Ino slaps him in the head saying "Hey I'm also blonde!" Meanwhile, Hinata thinks with a bright red face 'Naruto-kun…. honor…. avenged' and faints. While Naruto looks at this phenomenon in bewilderment and confusion while the others laugh around him
Stadium Floor
"The second match of the Chunin Exam Finals will now commence!" says the proctor. "Will Kankuro Sabaku and Shino Aburame make their way to the floor?"
Fin
A/N So what do u guys think of the second chapter? My first 1000+ words chapter and first fight scene, and the Sandaime made his assumption of the Rinnegan based on the fact that in this story the Uzumaki's will be a direct descendant of the Sage of Six Paths meaning he had 3 children instead of 2. I want to apologize to the author(s), if any, who owns the collaboration jutsu that I used. I will say that I'm not that good at writing romance scenes as a heads up for future chapters. And a little insight into the one month break of the Chunin Exams… Naruto did not meet Jiraiya after Kakashi wrote him off for training in the hospital and rather went off to train on his own in secret since he knew that Jiraiya and the Sandaime was plotting against him, thus he also did not sign the Toad Summoning Contract. The main pairing will be NaruHina(many of you will be disappointed by this and I understandably so.), I will do other pairings in future stories though but since I'm a beginner I will, in general, go with canon, my deviation from canon will happen, that I can assure you.
Please leave a review with your thought on this chapter and ways for improvement if you have any! Thank you for reading!
Aegon OUT!