Rise of Darkness (Being rewritten

by dewlyfrau

While searching for her father in Sinnoh, Lillie is captured by a mysterious group with sinister plans. Only with the help of a new friend, along with her classmates, can they hope to stop this new treat before it's too late. (Takes place after SM anime. rated T for now, may change.) Being rewritten.

2. Chapter 2

First off, I would like to apologize. In my haste to get a first chapter in, I failed to fully proofread, which means that many problems slipped through the cracks.

While writing chapter two yesterday (directly after I had posted chap 1, like an idiot), something occurred to me. I could not have deviated further from my plans, which, having ADD/ADHD, I am fully committed to, and this story just doesn't work.

My OC was not introduced or executed like I planned, Lillie doesn't exactly feel like Lillie, I pushed Snowy into the sidelines just like with every other story I have read, I introduced characters for the sake of introducing them, and the OCs with the most back story are three of the vulpix line. They are a family. That's it. Thus, I will be rewriting this story, taking the time to proofread every chapter and making sure it works for my story. Luckily, as of writing this, it has no favorites or follows, so I don't think I'll be disappointing many of you…

Anyway, sorry for this. Thanks to JustThatOneFox who sent some helpful writing tips. As for when the rewrite will be out, I am aiming for this weekend, most likely sunday.