Well I'm back with chapter 2 please enjoy and give me feedback
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina or any of its characters; they belong to Ken Akamatsu. Nor do I own Scooby-Doo or any of its characters; they belong to Warner Brothers. I am not doing this for profit so please do not sue me. I can't afford it.
Notes: **** means a new setting.
I cut out scooby's tendency to talk in r's for simplicity's sake. You can just imagine it back in if you want.
I am ignoring the language difference for simplicity's sake.
I was too lazy to do honorifics so sorry about that.
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Last time we left off with Kitsune, Keitaro, Fred, Velma, Scooby, and Su were missing, let's see where it goes….
"Jinkies where are we?" Velma asked. "Well, it seems the ghost chased us into the depth of the Hinata apartment's unused rooms," Keitaro replied. As they, Kitsune and Fred creped down the hall.
"I can't believe the ghost chased us all down here" Vemla complained." Well, at least we finally got away" Fred responded.
As the group continued to explore the hall Kitsune slowed to talk to Keitaro. "Yall seem pretty preoccupied hon". "What" responded in shock a little too loudly, getting him shushed by Fred and Velma.
"I don't know what you're talking about" Kietro whispered fiercely at Kitsune. "Oh, yall don't know what I'm talking 'bout? "Maybe you should ask that cutie with glasses that you were playing with earlier"
Keitaro turned red. "I fell on her on accident" he raged quietly.
"Guys" Fred interrupted "we've reached a split in the hall. Do either of you two know they way out?" He asked Kitsune and Keitaro.
"Sorry sugar we're never down here," Kitsune replied. "Maybe we should split up and search for clues on what way is out," Kitsune stated. Interrupting what Fred was about to respond.
Velma and Fred starred at Kitsune for a good 30 seconds in surprise. Before Fred cleared his throat and said "Good plan"
"Well hon, lets me and you go this way" Kitsune exclaimed as she grabbed Fred by the arm and pulled him down the right path. "We have lots to talk about, well we look" Kitsune continued as she threw Keitaro a sly grin and thumbs up.
"I guess it's me and you" Velma commented. "Let's go"
*meanwhile the main group upstairs*
"How are going to find them" Daphne wondered aloud? "We should split up into 2 groups one to search where we last saw the ghost and one to investigate where the ghost came from" Naru reasoned.
"Indeed" Motoko agreed. "you miscreant male" Motoko held her sword towards shaggy "you will take me and Naru to where you found the ghost"
"Like what?" shaggy questioned "don't you watch cartoons? When you split up you become, like easy pickings"
"If I can give you a good reason to do it would you," Naru asked. "Like maybe" shaggy responded. Naru gestures to Motoko who is polishing her sword well giving shaggy the evil eye.
"Those are some good reasons" Shaggy stuttered.
"Shinobu, you and Daphne" go and check where we last saw the ghost Naru instructed as she, Shaggy and Motoko climbed the stairs.
"o-okay" Shinobu stammered
**in the hall**
"Well, this is where the ghost last was," Daphne remarked. "Yeah" Shinobu replied in a distracted tone.
Daphne stops and turns to Shinobu and kneels down to look her in the eyes "hey, what wrong?"
"N-Nothing" Shinobu replied hurriedly.
"Hey, I can recognize an aching heart when I see one" Daphne said seriously.
Shinobu sighed "I'm worried about Keitaro" she confessed.
"He's your landlord right?" Daphne inquired.
"Yes," Shinobu responded "I'm worried if he is okay or if the ghost got him"
"You care deeply about him don't you," Daphne asked.
"Y-yes" Shinobu stuttered, her eyes retreating to hide behind her hair.
"Hey, don't be shy about your feelings. even though he's older than you he wouldn't recognize you care unless you comfort him. I had a crush on Fred for years but didn't tell him and he almost slipped away from me. But when I finally told him, things improved and we got closer"
"What I'm getting at is don't hide your feelings or you might miss-" Daphne got interrupted mid-sentence by a large bang.
"What was that," Shinobu asked in surprise. "I don't know, let's follow the sound," Daphne exclaimed.
At the end of the hall, the saw smoke drifting out of the cracks around a door. And a moaning coming from behind the door. "Rruhhh" it groaned.
It's the ghost Shinobu squeaked in alarm.
"No, I don't think it is. It sounds too hungry" Daphne said as she approached the door.
She threw open the door to find Scooby laying on the ground smoke drifting off him and an ash-covered Su smiling slightly embarrassed.
"Sorry, I thought my super doggy battle armor would be able to break the door down" "Rrughh" Scooby groaned.
"Su, Why would you need to break the door," Shinobu asked. "The ghost chased us here, then locked us in," Su exclaimed. "No matter how hard we pulled it wouldn't open"
"That's because it opens outward" Daphne replied.
"Oh, whoopsie" Su exclaimed grinning.
Sweat drops from Daphne and Shinobu.
**Meanwhile at Su's room**
"Like this is where we found the ghost," Shaggy explained. "Well, know that you know I'll wait in like the kitchen"
"Not so fast you miscreant male, if we let you alone in this place there's no telling what perverted things we will find you at" Motoko Stated.
Like, man what wrong with you people you act like you're in some sort of harem book series. The only place you find me is at the bottom of a bowl of chile"
"No excuses" Naru shouted as she hit Shaggy into Su's room.
"Well, this is where the ghost was among these groovy inventions. But, it wasn't so, like, messy in here when we left" Shaggy exclaimed.
"Hmm, it looks like Su's inventions were ransacked" Motoko pondered.
"But what would a ghost want with Su's inventions?" Naru wondered.
"Like, don't worry this thing looks like it still works," Shaggy said, pulling out a weird vacuum-like thing.
It proceeds to suck the clothes off Naru and Motoko. "Like, zoinks" Shaggy exclaimed as Motoko and Naru proceeded to hit Shaggy into the atmosphere.
A bowl of chili my foot you pervert! Naru shouts.
**back down in the depth of the inn**
"So, Kitsune do you have any ideas who this ghost might be?" Fred asked
"Not a clue sugar. But now that we're alone why don't we stop and for a quick rest and drink" Kitsune stopped to sit down on a bench, pulling out a small emergency drink she kept hidden in her…. Well I'll let you guess where she keeps it because I sure don't know.
"Come on you don't really mean that. I can tell you are as excited to catch this ghost in a net as I am" Fred exclaimed
Wow, this man is dense, but he also is ripped, Kitsune thought as she took a swig of her emergency alcohol.
Kitsune suddenly felt like she was tipping backward. Woah when did I become so weak to drinking she thought, just before realizing her bench was rotating backward into a trap door.
"I can tell this because I am very observant, nothing gets past me" Fred finished
"Save my boozes- Clang" Fred whipped around at the sound of Kitsune's call for help to see he was now alone.
Oh no Fred thought. Then he heard a door open and he turned around to see that Daphne, Shinobu, Su, and Scooby had found him.
"Thank goodness you're alright Fred" Daphne sighed "Do you know where Velma and the other tenants are"
I can take you to Velma and the landlord guy. But my trap sense has failed me, I lost Kitsune. Why? Fred yelled.
Sweat Drops from everyone else.
**Meanwhile**
"I'm really sorry I fell on you" Keitaro apologized.
"Really it's fine accidents happen," Velma reassured him. Shaggy and Scooby run and fall all the time and with our big group, I am surprised they don't land on top of me more.
I'm sure any rational girl could realize an accident they're common in bigger groups. No reason to beat yourself up by it.
I'm not the one who beats me up, Keitaro thought sadly.
"After you," Velma said as she held open a door.
Wow, she is really nice, the only other person this nice to me is Shinobu. Too bad Shinobu doesn't like me that way though. Keitaro thought
"Jinkies" Velma exclaimed, jolting Keitaro out of his thoughts.
In the room, they had entered an odd-looking machine, some clothes, and a book.
"What is that?" Keitaro asked. I'm not sure I would have to cross-check it with my notes" Velma replied.
"You will not get the chances" a voice behind the declared. Keitaro and Velma turned to see the ghost hovering behind them.
"He can fly?" Keitaro asked.
"Never mind that, run" Velma Exclaimed.
They took off running the ghost in pursuit.
**back to Fred and his group**
"Look there they are" Scooby exclaimed
"And the ghost is after them," Daphne gasped.
"Quick in here" Fred shouted as he opened a door and they all jumped in.
Okay, I have a plan to catch the ghost. Su you and Scooby act as bait…..
As Velma and Keitaro ran down the hall they saw something surprising: a dog and a girl playing checkers. As they ran past they realized it was Scooby playing Su.
The ghost stopped hovering over the chess player.
"I'm so glad that we are safe, not a care in the world" Su exclaimed, grinning widely as she recited her line.
"Me too" Scooby agreed
"Rawagh" the ghost roared at them. "Oh hiya," Su replied. "Do you want to play? I have to warn you doggy here has beat me several times. I bet you couldn't beat him!"
The ghost gets a grin as it sits down to play Scooby at checkers.
The ghost places his first move with lots of confidence, but after a few moves, scooby has gotten several pieces and one of his to the other side. "King me," Scooby says.
The ghost grumbles as it goes to do so. Then pause having a moment of realization.
The ghost flips the table overs and yells "Rawargh".
"What a sore loser" Su exclaims as they take off running
**meanwhile**
"So here, the plan" Fred explains to Velma and Keitaro. "Su and Scooby will lead the ghost here when the ghost gets on the target spot we will give you two the single to release on the net. Because you can't see it from here"
Okay, places everyone.
"Ahhh'' Scooby screamed as he ran from the ghost. "Whee" Su yelled as she rode on Scooby's back. They ran past Fred, Daphne, Shinobu.
"Oh no, it's the ghost" Fred exclaimed, well he thought just a bit closer.
"Arrgh" he heard a scream and the sound of crashing and more screams.
The net started to fall. No, it's too soon. Fred thought in alarm.
**a couple of seconds earlier**
"Today is not a good day" is what Shaggy was thinking as he fell back to earth from his punch into space.
Like, all I want to do is have a calm and relaxing day where Scooby and I get to eat our 24 square meals a day in peace. But like instead, we are chasing a ghost to help some people who are easily scarier than any monster we've caught.
Crash. through the ceiling, Shaggy fell screaming as he did so, "Arrgh".
Landing on top of Velma and Keitaro. Ooff the exclaimed as they lost the rope for the net and got thrown away.
The net fell on Fred, Daphne, Shinobu, Su, and Scooby.
"Ahh" were trapped, Shinobu screamed.
Ahahaha the ghost clacked as it floated away with something. Over its shoulder.
"I can't see anything without my glasses Velma complained" as she felt around on the ground.
"Here we go" she exclaimed, picking something up off the ground.
"Velma what happened?" Fred asked as he and the rest of the group showed up.
Something hit me and Keitaro from behind and knocked my glasses off but I found them.
Aren't those your glasses Daphne gestured to the unconscious Shaggy who somehow had Velma's glasses on.
"Jinkies, these must be Keitaro's" Velma exclaimed, swapping Keitaro's for her's.
"Where is Keitaro?" Velma asked.
"The ghost got him," Fred explained.
"And he doesn't even have his glasses," Shinobu said worriedly.
"The only thing to do is reconvene upstairs" Fred decided.
**In the main room upstairs**
"Keitaro was kidnapped and Kitsunes missing?!" Motoko shouted in surprise.
"I suspect this is the fault of that demon dog," Motoko said angrily.
"No, it's not" Daphne soothed. "By the way where's Naru?" She asked.
"She stopped by her room to get something," Motoko explained.
"Ahhhh" Narus screamed pericerd the air.
"Hurry it could be the ghost" Velma exclaimed as they all ran to the source of the noise.
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Well I am stopping there. Please give me feedback so I can improve the story.
