On a gloomy night in Royal woods Michigan a woman enters a jewelry store. She walks up to one off the showcases displaying jewelry and phases her hand thru the glass.
"You there! Stop that!" Said a security guard who began pointing his gun towards the woman.
"Yeah sorry, but I'm not going to." She said. She took out a gold ring and tried it on not minding the security guard.
"If you don't put that back I'll shoot!" The security guard said. But the woman didn't mind it and just kept on ignoring him.
Then the guard fired at her but much to his surprise the bullet went thru her like she didn't exist.
"What the hell!" The guard exclaimed. The woman looked at him and laughed before walking over.
"I can't go a day without being shot at." She said laughing to herself.
When she got closer the guard began firing at her, but all the bullets went thru her.
"How about I return the favor." She exclaimed before phasing her hand thru the guard's throat, then she pulled out her hand making a huge hole in the guard's neck with blood gushing out of it.
Then she looked at the cashier before walking closer and saying "Sound the alarm. I want her here."
About 5 minutes later a heroine walks into the store fully dressed up in a hero suit. When she enters the heroine looks at the dead body with a pool of blood coming from the throat and sighs.
She looks around seeing the cashier also dead on the floor with a hole in his chest where a heart would normally be.
"Come out Carol. I know you're here." She said.
Soon Carol left the shadows and revealed herself to the heroine. "Well well well, took you long enough place." Said Carol mocking the heroine.
"You have to stop this. Do you literally know how many lives you have taken?" Asked the blonde heroine only to be met with a small giggle.
"Don't know Lori. Maybe 7 and a half." Carol joked.
"This is no joke. I'm taking you in this time." Said Lori getting ready to fight.
"Then you will fail like the last time." Carol said before entering a battle stance.
Lori ignites her fist and begins throwing fireballs at Carol. Carol yawns and goes intangible making the fireballs go thru her.
"How you even learned from our last fight?" Carol said with a cocky smile but much to her surprise Lori chuckles.
"Yes, yes I have." Then Lori snaps her fingers and the fireballs behind Carol explode sending her forwards.
Carol got up and kicked Lori sending her back. But Lori caught herself and landed perfectly on her feet.
Lori threw more fireballs at Carol while she charged at her. But Carol went thru them and punched Lori in the face.
Not wanting Carol near her Lori shot a fireball near Carol's feet, the blast from the ball threw Carol towards a wall but she quickly managed to go thru it.
Lori ran outside not wanting to let Carol get away and was kicked upon exiting by her.
"Can't believe you feel for that!" Carol said. She attempted to phase her hand thru Lori but was stopped when Lori ignited her whole body and flew into the air.
"Try that again. I dare you." Said a now aggravated Lori. She blasted more fireballs towards her at a rapid paste.
Carol almost managed to dodged all of them before being hit by a fireball explosion.
"You are really cheap. You know that, being up there where I can't reach and using other forces to attack me, like the explosions." Carol exclaimed but then she got an idea.
Carol began running away with Lori chasing her and throwing fireballs at her.
Their fight soon escalated into streets where Carol grabbed a pedestrian and used him as a shield.
"What are you going to do now Lori? That government of yours won't allow you to harm this innocent person." Said Carol with a devilish smile.
"Alright then, you want a fair fight. Then come on!" Lori said as she flew back onto the ground.
Carol laughs before phasing a hole in the pedestrian's stomach which enrages Lori and makes her light up.
"Don't think about fire girl. Try to fly and I'll kill more." Carol threatened.
"Fine then. Let's go!" Said Lori.
Carol stepped over the corpses and smiled before kicking towards Lori. Lori sidestepped and fire-punched Carol sending her towards the car which she phases thru.
When Carol got up from the punch, she touched her cheek and noticed that she was bleeding a bit.
"Really Lori, that the best you can do? No wonder why you are always losing to me." Lori grew agitated and threw more fireballs.
Carol phased thru them and tried to punch Lori, but Lori caught her hand and delivered a fire-punch to her stomach.
"What's wrong Carol? Can't handle the heat?" Asked Lori with a smug grin.
"I can handle more than you think." Carol responded preparing for another attack.
"We'll see about that." Lori said before clapping her hands together sending a fire shockwave towards Carol.
Carol attempted to phase thru the shockwave but was hit by an explosion coming from the car beside her.
Lori then threw more fireballs at her, but Carol got up and dodged all of them before sucker punching Lori knocking her to the ground.
Then Carol phased her hand thru Lori's chest but before she could do any harm Lori used both of her feet to kick Carol off her.
When Carol got up a fireball exploded right in front of her sending her back, but she quickly caught herself and stood up.
"Must say Lori, this fight is a lot more fun than our other ones. Do you know why?" Carol asked and waited for Lori to respond. But after waiting a moment she decided to give an answer anyways.
"Because 3 people have already died. And the fight isn't even done!" Carol laughed.
Lori was now angry at the lives that Carol stole and made another shockwave headed towards her.
This time Carol managed to dodge the shockwave and began to run away again.
"What's wrong Lori. Can't keep up?" Carol said as she ran. Lori sighed letting go of the anger and ran after Carol in hopes of defeating her.
While running Lori threw more fireballs at Carol but they all missed when Carol hid behind the cars on the street.
Soon enough the two reach a factory which Carol phased into while Lori made her own way into the factory with some fireballs.
Lori went deeper and deeper into the dark factory hearing sounds all around her keeping Lori alerted.
"Well I'm glad we made it here Lori!" Said Carol happily as she turned on the lights for the factory revealing why she went here.
Inside the factory's storage room were boxes filled with fireworks and explosives.
"You better be careful now. One small flame and we both go boom." Said Carol while pointing at the explosives.
Then Carol jumped at Lori and tried to punch her but failed when Lori ducked and uppercutted her right in the chin.
"Just because I can't burn you doesn't mean I can't fight." Stated Lori who took a battle pose.
"But who is the better fighter is the question?" Carol got up and headbutted Lori before kicking her in the chest.
Carol tried to punch Lori from the side, but Lori grabbed her hand. Carol then smiled before phasing her hand thru Lori's hand and punching her.
Then Carol grabbed Lori's shoulders and kicked her knee into Lori's stomach which made her groan in pain.
And with that Carol phased her hand thru Lori's chest right where her heart would be.
"Goodbye FireHawk!" Carol laughed. But before she could finish Lori, the heroine ignited her fist before exclaiming.
"Let's see whose more fire resistant." Said Lori before firing at the boxes of fireworks.
After the fireballs hit the boxes, they were blasted outside by a powerful explosion that destroyed the entire factory.
Minutes later the heroine regained consciousness and awoke to notice both her and Carol on the ground.
She slowly got back up and watched the police arrive along with ambulances. Moments later the police approached both her and Carol.
"Great job FireHawk. You finally managed to stop her." Said the officer congratulating the heroine. Meanwhile the police force cuffed the knocked-out Carol and sent her of to prison.
"Yeah thanks, but it came at a cost." Said FireHawk disheartened about the people that Carol killed.
"Everything comes at a cost kid. But at least less people will get hurt thanks to you." The officer told FireHawk which made her smile a bit.
"Alright, I think you can handle yourself here. I'm going back to base; you know who to call if there is more trouble." Finished Lori before she began limping away.
After limping a distance away, she managed to go full flame and flew back to base.
Meanwhile at the Saviors base Lisa Loud looked at a file containing all the information she needed and began to record the audio log for her eldest sibling.
"Name: Lori Loud."
"Age: 17."
"Alias: FireHawk."
"Powers: Pyrokinesis or better known as fire manipulation."
"Bio: Lori Loud is the leader of the Saviors and the eldest on the team. While she does have problems with controlling her anger it has proven useful in stressful situations where only brute force is required because her anger provides stronger attacks." Started Lisa.
"She is also one of the most known members of our team publicly. And with the government forcing us to reveal our identity it made her a public celebrity in a matter of minutes due to her popularity online before all of this." Continued Lisa.
"She is the older sister for Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, Lucy, Lana, Lola, me, and Lily Loud who are all superpowered individuals. Her current relationship is with Bobby Santiago who has shown potential to have powers but hasn't surprisingly."
"While being a supernatural hero she has made quite a few enemy's like Carol Pingrey who is a superpowered individual with the ability to control her density and despises Lori for unknown reasons."
"Lastly Lori Loud is a focused and sophisticated person who will always try to get the job done no matter what." Finished Lisa.
"Veronica, please end the audio log and start a new one." Said Lisa.
"Certainly Lisa, what would you like to call it?" Asked the female AI.
"Call it Leni Loud." Said Lisa before grabbing the file for her second oldest sister.
And here we are guys. Now I really wanted to write in how Lori's suit looked but I couldn't make up a great design, so I left it blank for now. If you do have an idea for a suit, then feel free to message me your idea. Also, I know that fire powers are a bit overdone in hero fics but don't worry because some of the other siblings' powers are a bit more interesting. Thanks for reading, leave a review about your thoughts and I'll see you next chapter where Leni Loud makes her debut.
(Also, quick note. Some bad guys will refer to the Saviors by their real names while others will say their hero names. Since their identities aren't private the enemies can call them anything they want.)
