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"Their fierce forest hunters. And I can hold my own in combat." I bowed as they dismissed me. Halfway down the hall way light foot steps caught my ear, I turned to see Nezu.

"The entrance exam is in four months, I'll have a teacher tutor you for the written exam." He walked with me.

"Thank you sir." I smiled at the furry creature, my stomach grumbling.


Chapter 2: Entrance exam

I made my way to UA's front gate, my light pike strapped across my back, my shoes scuffing on the ground, I walked past a green haired boy who had tripped over his own feet, a blank look etched on his face before he was saved by a brown haired girl, he floated off the ground. I made my way to the written exam, I felt rather comfortable with it, I had spent a lot of time studying after all.

After the two hour written exam I made my way to a large auditorium with the rest of the students, they didn't give me a second glance, and I thought back to the official public report about my crash, that I had escaped from a villains lair in his secret craft. Most people didn't give me a second look since that day, of course the governments and a few Heroes knew I was an alien, but I didn't really care if people knew. I took my seat and waited, soon a blonde man with the tallest hair I have ever seen stood in front of us. "Yeah! WELCOME TO UA! I AM YOUR ANNOUNCER PRESENT MIC! MAKE SOME NOISE!" No one made some noise. "Keeping it mellow, I dig it. So I am here to explain the practical exam. You will have ten minutes to destroy as many villain bots, of which there are three types." As he spoke the screen heind him lit up with animations of him with very robotic fights shown to us. "Each one is worth from one to three points. Your goal is to gain as many points as possible. Details are on your examinee cards."

I looked down at it and saw that I was in Battle Center D, and that there was something that made me raise what would be my eye brow, clearly marked was four types of faux villains. "Sir, clearly marked on our cards is four Faux villains. If this is a mistake on UA's part then this school isn't living up to it's reputation." A boy with blue hair and glasses stood up. "And you." He turned to the boy with green hair who sat a few rows below us, "Quite your muttering, it is distracting to the other students."

"You are the larger distraction, you brought the whole presentation to a halt." I said. "And so what if he is muttering, I can hear him from here and he has been strategizing this entire time. Instead of worrying about reputations he has his eyes set on his goal." The boys looked at me. "Now take your seat, we don't have all day." He sat down, fists clenched.

"Yes as I was saying, there is a forth villain bot, and it is worth zero points, a trap in each of the arenas to be avoided." Present Mic said. "NOW GO PLUS ULTRA AND DO YOUR ABSOULTE BEST!"

I made my way to battle center D's bus. A blonde boy shoved past me, "Out of my way." He growled as he glanced at me.

"I'm sorry." I smiled, "You must be strong to be here."

He stopped and grinned. "Your looking at the hero that will surpass All Might, if your lucky you may get to be my sidekick."

"Maybe. I'm Haara Ken." I slipped my wooden saber pike on my back. This boy was fascinating, his anger, fury, rage I could feel through the Force, yet... there was no darkness. The Jedi order had told me that these would lead to selfish people yet here he was trying to be a hero, someone who put his life on the line for others.

"Katsuki Bakugo, remember that name because I will be the strongest hero." He walked towards the bus for battle center C.

I sat near the back of the bus, scratching at my chin thinking of the teachings of the order, more specifically the code of the order, a code that I had lived by.

There is no emotion, there is peace.

There is no ignorance, there is knowledge.

There is no passion, there is serenity.

There is no chaos, there is harmony.

There is no death, there is the Force.

My time on earth had taught me a few things, that this code was fundamentally flawed. But my master had lived and breathed this code, I couldn't just turn my back on his teachings. As I thought of my master my mind turned to my lost friend, Captain Aries. 'I miss you Aries.' I refused to think of the last time I had seen him. Rather turning back my mind to the first time we had met. It was on Naboo where I had first joined my master. A small Togruta girl being assigned to a giant of a Jedi Master Quon. He was a large human, nearly the size of All Might and his saber was the size of what would normally be a two handed saber.

I had walked into that command room and had a over sized clone helmet clunked onto my head full of orange gelatin. "Welcome to the Team Commander. I am Captain Aries." I couldn't help but laugh with the men as my master stood of to the side, stoic and silent yet a small smirk on his face.

I was brought out of the pleasant memory as the bus came to a stop. I stood up and walked out to the front gate with my Light pike slowly spinning it on my hand inactivated. My masters saber on my waist. "Okay! Begin!" Present Mic announced over the loudspeakers, this startled the other students, but I was moving before the doors had fully opened. It was a mock city, a concrete jungle. And Jungles were my environment be they made of wood, stone or metal. The first bot kill was mine as I swung from a wire my light pike slashing through it's neck, I used the force to smash three clankers to the ground, I wasn't counting points, just living in the thrill of the hunt. From building to building I leapt, my feet never touching the ground as I cut through bots with ease throwing them high and smashing them to the ground below.

I didn't leave much for the others in my wake, something that I heard all to well. "She is taking all the points!" I heard them complain. "At this rate I'll never get in with someone like her! Why dose she have a support item like that! It isn't fair!"

I spun around on a lamp post while squatting like a cat, taking a moment to feel out the Force signatures of the other examines. They had spread out in the mock city cleaning up what was left of the bots. I hadn't kept track of time either, had it been a minute since it had started? Or was it five? Then the ground shuddered as a massive booming foot step filled the air and a shadow fell over my back. The other examinees turn and ran for their lives. Slowly I turned to face the droid, it towered above the buildings.

'I am glad the Separatists never had anything like this.' I thought as it looked at me. 'I should run now... unless... ohhhhh that's the point of this bot.' it seemed so simple that I was embarrassed I hadn't put two and two together, 'They want to see how heroic we are.'

It's massive hand reached down towards me, steel creaking as I took in a breath and raised my arms, winds picking up as I called on my master to help from beyond the force. I had seen him do this once with a droid super carrier. "The size of the object is of no concern to the Force Haara. For it is with the Force that we live and breath, and we have that power." Slowly the automaton lifted into the air, a few inch's, then feet, then it floated high above the buildings. "For the pressure of life crushes all things artificial in time." My ears were assaulting with the screech of imploding metal. I set down the destroyed droid in a pile of scrap.

"Telekinesis? I thought she had a mutation type quirk? Maybe those growths on her head allow her to do that?" I heard people whisper as it was announced that the exam was over.


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