New World-New Life


Ping.

You have slept in your bed. 'Well-rested' bonus added.

I blinked, 'So last night wasn't a dream.' I thought. 'Wait what's this now.' After seeing the notification I went to the 'Status' page and saw what was that notification was about.

Status:

Arashi, (Tittle Hidden)

Level: 1 (0/200) [Well-rested]!

I pressed the '!' button for more information.

Well-rested (Active)

Time: 4hours 59 minutes

This is a status condition. The user gains a bonus boost for resting in a non-hostile environment. For the next five hours, all skills can be learned 20% faster.

This is a nice bonus, I can learn all my skills faster for the next five hours. I do remember a similar bonus like this in a game I used to play, what was its name again sky-something.

'Oh-yeh now I remember it was Skyrim.' I remembered. Awesome intro music.'Wonder if I could Fus-Roh-Dah someone into oblivion in here.' Hehe, that would be awesome.

I got up from my bed and looked outside my room's window, it looks like I'm up early because the Sun is still rising.

I also remember now why Koime's REP is higher than everyone else. According to my memories, she was the one who found me and from that day she actually took care of me like her own son. I also remember when I was a kid….I mean, when I was around three to four years old I started to call her 'Mama'. Then some prick kid whose name I can't remember told me how she was not my mother and how I was found on the doorstep of the orphanage. I didn't come out of my room for two days, Koime stayed the entire first night outside my door. After the second day, I did come out, but I stopped calling her 'Mama' and instead I started calling her 'Koime-oba-chan'. After hearing those words she looked like someone just killed her puppy.

'Damm, I got to make up to her' I thought.

I took my towel and went for the bathroom. I thought, 'Well, I'm already out of my bed, better take the shower before all the kid's wake's up and start fussing over who gets first.' On my way, I meet Koime.

"Good morning, Koime-Oba-chan" I greeted her. It felt weird calling her like that but didn't want her to get suspicious of me.

She smiled at me and greeted me back "Good Morning, Arashi. Your up early." She hugged me and asked, "Is my little Shi-kun excited for today?"

"Something like that. I was just going to take an early shower." I told her.

She giggled, "Ok. You do just that and I'll make you some breakfast. You do use to like my cooking very much." She continued with a hint of sadness in her voice, "it's been a while since you last tasted my cooking."

Yeh, she wasn't wrong about that. From what I remember from my old memories, it's been at least a year or so since I had her cooking.

"Thanks. That would be great." I answered immediately.

I walked into the bathroom and took a shower. After that, I went back to my room and put on some new clothes. I wore a grey coloured t-shirt and light-brown coloured three-quarter pants and went to the dining hall.

I saw Koime, she was already finished making breakfast. I sat down on an empty table, where she served me a bowl of rice and some small fish. She sat beside me with her own bowl of rice and fish, and we started to eat.

"You know, Arashi…if you don't want, you don't have to be a ninja. You can stay in the orphanage and help me here." She said to me with a worried expression. "I mean the life of a ninja is pretty hard from what heard. People often get injured pretty bad." She continued, "And I could use someone like you helping me around here."

I blinked. She looks so worried.

"Thanks for the offer Oba-chan, but I want to be a ninja," I said to her with a smile.

She sighed. "Ok, I know. Just be careful alright."

"Yup, don't worry."

We ate our breakfast quietly, and after I was done I asked her if I could help her in cleaning the dishes, which she agreed.

While cleaning the dishes I got another notification.

Ping.

New skill acquired!

Maintenance (40%)

Level: 1

Ability to maintaining somethings via cleaning, polishing etc.

+2 % bonus to all item you maintain for whatever their use is.

The bonus lasts for 30 minutes.

I blinked, what does this skill mean? I understand if the bonus will be useful for weapons, but for household items? What, will the dish get +2% bonus for holding food?

I looked at the dishes, they didn't look any different. I narrowed my eyes for several seconds on them, then suddenly another box popped up;

Ping.

Your skill has levelled up!

Observation (10%)

Level: 2

Ability to learn about objects or person by observing them

I blinked again, it looks like my 'Well-rested' bonus will help me in a lot of grinding. I mentally chuckled.

After that, I started to look around. Looking by the walls and the windows, the orphanage has not been maintained for a long time.

"Hey Koime? Doesn't our orphanage get enough money?" I asked.

"Huh! Ah... it's used to." She said in a low voice and continued, "but after the old matron was replaced, the civilian council cut our budget for some reason."

After hearing her explanation, I got an idea but I needed to be sure before I make some big assumptions.

"Hey Koime, before you were Marton…" I continued, "did the orphanage get visitors? I mean someone came more than once?"

She blinked and put her index finger beneath her chin and started to think, "now that you mention it, I do remember seeing the Hokage's advisers more than once with the old Matron." She looked at me and questioned, "Why do you ask?"

"O...Oh, nothing" I waved her off. In response, she narrowed her eyes at me and said, "listen Arashi-kun, I don't want you to get involved with them, NO MATTER WHAT, DO YOU UNDERSTAND?"

"Don't worry Oba-chan, I won't," I said nervously. 'Shesh…she can be scary' I thought.

But on the side note, now I know the reason behind the orphanage money problem. Danzo and his sex buddy's are probably want to force these orphan kids in their 'Root' program.

I started to think, 'I need to find some way to financially support the orphanage, so Koime don't need to go to them.' Then as my thought finished, another box popped up;

Quest alert!

Find a way to financially support the orphanage [S]!

The Konoha Orphanage is almost on their last leg, find a way to financially support, so they don't need to go to the 'Civilian Council'.

Objective:

Give the Orphanage 200,000 Ryo for support.

Rewards:

+100 REP with Koime

+5000 EXP

+10 REP permanent bonus from the people of Konoha

+20 Skill scrolls 2X

-50 REP with Danzo, Koharu and Hamura

Failure:

Possibly forced to join 'ROOT'

-50 REP from Koime

Koime's death

Accept/Decline

After seeing the quest, I immediately accepted. There is no way I will let Koime die. She has been a mother figure to me since she found me and I will be dammed if I didn't found a way, I don't know how but I will succeed, failure is not an option.

I said goodbye to her and started to wander around the orphanage, it was 6:30 AM; I had a lot of time to kill.

I wandered into the backside of the orphanage, where I found an empty room. Looking by the looks of it someone used to live here. I walked into the room and started to look around. A very interesting thing caught my eye. A golden Konoha symbol floating in the middle of the room. Curiously I went to it and touched it. The symbol started to glow causing a box to open in the spot;

Ping.

Congratulation! You have found a legendary spot[!]: Naruto's orphanage room!

Location found in Konoha: 1/30

You can select up to two rewards!

+200 EXP

+5 Stat Points

Mysterious Jutsu of unknown rank [!]

+10 Skill scroll 5X [!]

Ok, this was something new. I first touched the 'Legendary spot[!]' for info and a new box came up:

Hidden in the world are many legendary spots of noteworthiness. This could range from mountain to small boxes, each location is special in some way, find every one of them to get special rewards.

I blinked and turned to see the reward option, I could only select two. The exp could get me next level, then is stat points after that is the Jutsu one and last, is five '+10 skill scroll'; I didn't know what the '+10 skill scroll' did, so I went for the info button;

+10 Skill scroll: A scroll that allows you to automatically level up any skill by ten levels.

Ok, so the '+10 skull scroll' is good and I get five of them. Then I turned to the last option. 'Mysterious Jutsu of unknown ran' by its info I can get an 'E' to 'S' rank any kind of Jutsu, which means not just ninjutsu but fuinjutsu, kenjutsu, genjutsu, medial-ninjutsu etc which will depend on my luck; and let's not forget my luck sucks. Even if by some miracle I do manage to get an 'S' rank Jutsu, I won't be able to use it with my current chakra and control level.

Which leaves only two options. So I selected the 'EXP' and '+10 skill scroll'.

Ping.

You have levelled up!

Arashi, (Tittle Hidden)

Level: 2 (0/400)

HP: 175/175

SP: 140/140

CP: 120/120

EP: Locked

RP: Locked

MP: Locked

Control: 10%

STR: 20

VIT: 25

DEX: 15

CHERM: 15

INT: 32

CC: 5

LUC: 1

Status Points: 5

Money: 0 Ryo

'Alright,' I mentally cheered, 'levelled up before school and by the looks of it I get five status points every time I level up.' So technical I got three rewards. Awesome. I thought of saving the points right now. Don't know when I'll need them later.

But looking around the room, I saw how bad its condition was, it was even worse than my own room. Poor Naruto must have had really tough on him.

After breakfast:

Around 8 o'clock, everyone was ready for the academy. I followed the crowd out of the orphanage as we walked down the streets of Konoha. Koime was the head of our little group, guide us through the street while people smiled at us.

As I walked through I noticed most of the people in the streets were level 5 to 20. I rarely saw someone passing that level when I did it was some times a kid no older than 12 or 13 years old.

I would have been shocked but then I notice those kids had a tittle around their head, 'Genin of Konoha' which meant they were ninjas. Which made sense.

The kids were all excited but kept their talks in whispers. I kept mostly to myself and avoided any kind of conversation until Masako reached me.

"Hey, Arashi! Where were you sitting during breakfast?" She asked, "I was looking all over for you."

"Sorry, Masako," I said, "I had my breakfast early with Koime-oba-chan."

"Oh! Ok then." She continued, "by the way, are you excited for today just a few more moments until we become a ninja."

And like that, she continued until we reached the front get of the academy.

Ping.

Quest Completed!

Join the ninja academy on time [M]!

You are viewed as an orphan, who really don't have much of a life, so when an opportunity comes to become something amazing, you better take it.

Reach the academy before 9 AM!

Rewards:

+25 EXP

I blinked, I opened my status and sure enough, I gained 25 experience points, only three hundred and seventy-five to go.

"Alright, children wait here and don't cause any trouble," Koime called out causing us to stop in the academy front gate. The kids began immediately began to look around, peeking into classroom windows seeing few the older students sitting inside a lecture.

I, however, was looking around students of my age or more specifically trying to find a few familiar faces.

I did find a few of them, I saw Shikamaru and Choji with their parents; Kiba with his sister Hana and his mom Tsume. But their only one person caught my eye. A guy in his mid to late teens.

He had long straight black hair tied in a ponytail behind his back with the front of his hair covering the side of his face, he had onyx black eyes, his skin was fair with a little tan on it and he was wearing a dark blue coloured long-necked, half-hand t-shirt with black full-length pant. On the back of his shirt was a symbol of a battle fan, which's upper part was red and the bottom part was white coloured.

The moment I saw his name I freaked out;

Itachi Uchiha, Inheritor of the Will Of Fire

Level:?

REP: 5

'HOLY FUCK' I mentally screamed 'ITACHI-FUCKING-UCHIA, as in The Itachi, who killed his entire clan for peace.' I blinked, 'Wait…if he is here right now, it means he hasn't gone 'Postal' on his clan yet.'

...

….

What should I do? Should I try to stop him? Even if I tried I'm not strong enough to stop him as I am right now. Hell, he could kill me before I could blink. And if by some miracle I do manage to stop him the Uchiha's will start a coup and start a civil war, which could destroy many innocent lives. I sighed, nothing I could do right now.

My eyes started to drift away from him to his side. In his left side, I saw two figure. The first one was a kid. Looking at his features, the first thing I saw was his black duck-butt hair next was his face. He looked like a kid-Itachi with the same face cutting. He wore a long-necked, full-hand black coloured t-shirt with black coloured half-length pant. He also had a very smug smirk on his face.

Sasuke Uchiha

Level: 5

REP: 0

'He is already giving a smug-emo smirk' I thought. But right next to the 'Duck-butt' I saw a woman standing on his left. This was the most beautiful woman I ever saw. She was a walking goddess in all form.

They say a beautiful woman delights the eye; a wise woman, the understanding; a pure one, the soul. This saying didn't extend to a breathtakingly gorgeous woman like her.

She had luscious straight black hair with bangs hanging on either side of her perfectly heart-shaped face. She wore a brown blouse with a dark purple skirt. She had a curvy body any kunoichi would kill for and even in those baggy clothes, her 'assets' were clearly giving a visible shape.

Mikoto Uchiha, Matriarch of The Uchiha Clan

Level:?

REP: 5

I wanted to blink, but I couldn't, It was like my brain was not functioning properly, almost like if I blinked, the goddess will despair from my sight. I sensed my cheeks started to heat up. I touched my cheeks, 'a…am I blushing?' I thought, then I saw her eyes landed on me, and she smiled. I smiled back at her. I saw her 'REP' went from 5 to 10.

'Oh god! What won't I do to see her smile at me like that.' I thought. 'That smile…I just saw her smile once and I can't get enough of it.' Her onyx black eyes were hypnotic, her smile was contagious – she was the epitome of feminine grace.

Then I realized, she will die, by the hands of her elder son in a few months or in a few years. I sighed.

'DAMM YOU ITACHI' I mentally cursed him. 'That stupid son of a….no-no, that's not the right word….mother-fu…Ah….sorry Mikoto-san…...Asshole? Yeh, ASSHOLE.'

'No wonder he dies by heart-cancer in the future. HE DESERVES TO DIE LIKE THAT.'

While I was cursing Itachi mentally I didn't notice Koime was back and she was calling me.

"shi…Arashi….ARASHI." I turned to see her glaring at me.

"Aaa…sorry. Did you said something Oba-chan?" I asked.

"I said, 'Pay attention'. The teacher is about to take you inside the academy." She told me with a glair.

"Sorry!" I gulped. Like she said a ninja had arrived and was taking the rest of the orphans inside the academy.

I sighed as I slipped into the group and listened to the ninja who was leading the group. "This is the academy, you will study here for the next five years and at the end, depending on how well you do, you can become ninjas of the village!"

This man had tanned skin with hair tied up in short ponytail. He had a scar across his nose and a cheerful smile on his face;

Iruka Umino, Teacher

Level: 47

REP: 5

He went on about, how ninja is being important and all that for a couple more minutes, I honestly went bored and started to look around for anything interesting. I actually found someone really interesting. It was a girl around my age.

This girl had short brown hair and light brown eyes. Her hair was straight on one side but on the other side, it is in a braid. She wore a pink kimono held closed by a pink sash, she also wore a violet baggy pants and red mesh armour underneath her kimono.

Yakumo Kurama, Heiress of The Kurama Clan

Level: 2

REP: 0

I blinked. If my memories are correct she was supposed to be taught by Kurenai Yuhi and later her powers sealed by her.

Yeh, now I remember; Yakumo had a weak body and had a problem controlling her power because of her 'Ido' a sentient and malicious personality in her mind. So The Third Hokage ordered her power to be sealed away. And Kurenai was the one to perform the sealing.

'Maybe I could save her from that fate.' I wondered.

I hard someone cleared their throat when I looked up and saw another man was looking at me with his arms crossed.

He had grey hair, chewed on a toothpick and had his Konoha headband tied like a bandana around his head, I looked at his name and title;

Mizuki, Chunin Of Konoha

Level: 43

REP : 0

"Something you would like to share with us kid?" He asked with a smirk.

I blinked. 'When did he sneak up on me, I didn't even sense him.' I looked right back at him and shrugged. "Nothing that would interest you," I smirked right back.

"You listened to anything he said?" He asked while pointing his left thumb finger at Iruka.

"Just the first part, the rest I kinda zoned out," I told him with and shrugged.

He raised an eyebrow, "You got balls kid!"

"ARASHI! Behave." I heard Koime glaring at me. I gulped.

Mizuki looked at me, "Arashi huh? You think you, hot stuff kid?"

"Hey, I may not know how to fight properly, but I'm definitely smarter than the rest of the kids around here," I answered him back looking in the eye. I saw many of kids 'REP' went down to '0' or '-5', guess they don't like me now. Not that I care.

"Oh! Is that so?" Iruka said joining our conversation. "So you won't mind if I asked you some questions?"

Ping.

Quest alert!

Answer the questions smart-ass [S]!

Rewards:

+1 stat points per correct answer

Failure:

Class clown

Accept/Decline

A mystery reward and '+1' stat points per correct answer. I immediately pressed yes and turned to Iruka and smiled, "Bring it."

"Alright first question, Which clan does The First Hokage belong to?" Iruka asked.

"Senju Clan," I answered immediately.

Ping.

+1 stat point!

Iruka blinked, "r-right. Next question, Who was considered SS rank threat that-"

"-Namikaze Minato, The Fourth Hokage, also known as the Yellow Flash." I interrupted him before he had a chance to finish.

Ping.

+1 stat point!

Iruka raised an eyebrow, "alright…Konoha was founded by two ninjas, one was The First Hokage; who was the other one?"

"Uchiha Madara" I answered with a smirk.

Ping.

+1 stat point!

"Your smart, I'll give you that," Iruka said, "Next question, what was Uchiha Madara's signature Jutsu?"

I blinked, "Fire Release: Majestic Destroyer Flame" This time both Mikoto and Itachi blinked and started to look at me.

Ping.

+1 stat point!

"Wrong answer," Iruka smirked.

I blinked, "What the hell you mean 'wrong answer'?" I asked, "I know it's the right one."

Iruka narrowed his eyes and smirked, "the right answer is 'Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation'; well-" before he could continue Mikoto cut in, "Actually, the boy is right" she said gaining everyone's attention, "while it's true that 'Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation' is a powerful Jutsu, however Uchiha Madara used an upgraded version of that Jutsu which name was 'Fire Release: Majestic Destroyer Flame'. Not many know about this information." She finished and turned to me, "I'm more curious how did you know fo this information?" she asked with her angelic smile on her face.

I blinked, "a…ah, you know books."

"Books?" She asked with her left eyebrow raised.

'Oh…what won't I do to keep her eyes on me.' I looked right into her eyes, 'oh I just want to lay her down, look right into her eyes and…no-no. Bad Arashi.' I was positive my cheeks colour was blood-red at this point.' Stupid brain, stop fantasizing about the hot MILF in front of you and start working.' I mentally cursed myself.

"Eh-hm!" The Uchiha matriarch cleared her throat and said, "Well?"

I blinked, "a…ah, yes books. I don't remember the books name, but I read the info on it. It also said, he made a right of passage for The Uchiha clan, where if a member can't perform 'Fire Release: Great Fireball Jutsu' along with awakening their Sharingan then they weren't considered an Uchiha." I lied. I couldn't just say, 'I saw it in an anime show in another dimension, where I'm from' now could I?

Ping.

New skill acquired!

Lying (56%)

Level: 1

The ability to lie to people without getting caught.

5% chance of success

-20% if the lie is too unbelievable.

I blinked, well this is interesting. Lie, huh wonder if I can grind this too.

She looked at me and smiled, "That is acceptable. There are few books out there with that kind of information."

I walked towards her and took her right hand and planted a kiss. "Thank you, My Lady. The name's Arashi."

This action got several reactions from everyone. Most of them were shocked followed by pin-drop silence. Mikoto raised both of her eyebrows and looked surprised; Itachi looked like his brain just rebooted; Sasuke was looking at me with his mouth open; Mizuki dropped his toothpick from his mouth; Iruka looked like he has seen a ghost. This was the reaction of everyone present until a burst of laughter broke everyone from their shock.

The laughter was coming from Tsume Inuzuka.

"HOLY-SHIT, KID! HAHAHAHAHA…You have some ball on you, AH-HAHAHAHAHA" Tsume started, "Do you even know who she is?" She asked.

I knew who she was, but I wanted to play along. "Well if I have to say…" I started, "Judging by how she knows about The Uchiha clan so much, I'm guessing she is from the Uchiha clan," I answered to Tsume while still holding Mikito's hand. I turned my attention to Mikoto and smiled, "Am I right my lady? Or Am I right."

She blinked a few times and answered, "Yes. My name is Uchiha Mikoto. Nice to meet you, Arashi-san."

Tsume just looked at me with an amused smirk and said, "Oi! Brat! That's not just any Uchiha's hand your holding." She continued with a bigger smirk, "She is the clan matriarch."

"And your point is…ah…" I said while still holding Mikoto's hand in my hand. This time Tsume raised a surprised eyebrow, "My name is Inuzuka Tsume, Brat!" she introduced her, which I nodded.

"Right! And your point is Tsume-san?" I asked

"Well, what I'm trying to say is, any grown men would piss themself after learning who she is." She said to me while still smirking, "I never seen anyone doing this to her, much less a six-year-old." She came close to me, looking directly into my eye, "You gotta be the stupidest or the ballsiest six-year-old I ever met."

I gave her a grin and said, "Hey! What kinda man I would be if didn't even properly thank her." I looked back at Mikoto holding her hand, "especially, if the lady is this beautiful." And kissed her hand one last time and let go of her.

This time I saw Mikoto had a light pink hue on her cheeks and her 'REP' gone up to '10' to '20'; Itachi had his mouth open, everyone went to another shock and Tsume was laughing her ass off.

Ping.

New skill acquired!

Flirting (69%)

Level: 1

The ability to charm your target to drop their guard, confuse them or getting them to like you.

2% chance of working

+5 REP bonus if it works

Ok, this can be an interesting skill. Oh, the fun I could be having with it. I can see it now.

"I like you kid." Tsume said to me with a smirk. "Tell you what, come drop by 'The Inuzuka Compound' sometimes; you will be welcome there."

I saw her 'REP' which was '10' before now it was '15'. I thanked her and turn my attention back to Iruka, who was still looking like he had seen a ghost.

I cleared my throat to gain his attention, "Sooooo, have any more question's for me, sen-sei…" I said with a smirk.

He blinked a few times and opened his mouth to say something but got bet by Mizuki.

"Actually I do." Mizuki started, "just one last question," this time he smiled evilly, "what's worse? A ninja who craves power or a weak ninja?"

Everyone turned their sight towards me, as they waited for my answer.

'Ah, philosophy, nice. I'm guessing based on my answer he'll try to recruit me into his cause of being a traitor. Wonderful.' I mentally sighed.

I smiled, "that depends on the ninja."

"What do you mean?" the chunin asked.

"Well, if a ninja wants power to protect the people who are precious to him, then there is no reason he shouldn't be starving to be the best he could be. But if a ninja is weak and scared, then chances are his cowardness will get other people killed. In the end, it doesn't matter who has the power or not, all that matters is how they use it."

Ping.

+1 stat point!

And just like that everyone's 'REP' score around me went up with '5' points.

"Not bad kid," Mizuki smirked, "hey Iruka, looks like we have little genius in this group."

"Indeed we have," Iruka said with a smile.

Ping.

Quest completed!

Answer the questions smart-ass [S]!

Rewards:

+1 stat points per correct answer

A new title!

Little genius: +5% bonus marks to every written and oral test. +5 INT boost.

I blinked, "t-thanks.

"Alright everyone," Iruka started to gain everyone's attention, "follow me."

We followed him to the class. I found one seat near the window, in the far back of the class free so I took it. I saw Sasuke sat in the same row as me, just in the front as well as most of the clan students, except for Hinata and Shino. They sat on the opposite row, the former sat right opposite of my seat and the later sat right beneath the former.

I opened up my menu and looked at it. I had ten points to spent but what should I spent on.

STR: 20

VIT: 25

DEX: 15

CHERM: 15

INT: 32

CC: 5

LUC: 1

I knew two things one my intelligence is my highest and two chakra was everything. But I did not know, how the stats distribution worked, so I saved this for tonight.

Ping.

For thinking things through you have gained +1 INT!

Just then another chunin walked in with cardboard box filled with red bound notebooks and placed them before us. Iruka took one notebook along with a pencil and an eraser, "this is your notebook, those of you who don't have any writing instrument please come down here and collect them."

I grabbed a copy for myself, it was a black book with the Konoha symbol in front. 'It almost feels like I'm back in college' I mentally chuckled.

Iruka took out an old book and placed it on the podium, "alright let's begin."

"WAIT!" came a cry as suddenly the door was thrown open. He rolled into the podium knocking it aside before jumping to his feet. "I made it in time!"

Boink!

Iruka's came crashing down on his head, "no you didn't."

I couldn't help a chuckle escape my mouth.

Naruto Uzumaki, Kyuubi Jinchuuriki

Level: 3

REP: 25

Everyone started to laugh except a select few at this event. Naruto looked at Iruka and gave him a goofy smile and rubbed the back of his head, "sorry sensei."

He spotted me and gave me a bright smile and waved, "hey Arashi, I and you are in the same class, awesome."

I waved him back with a smile of my own, "yeh." I pointed my right thumb finger at the seat next to me, "come on I have an empty seat." Which he nodded and sat right beside me and the Iruka resumed the class.

Yeah. This is a new world and this is my new life.


This is the second chapter.

Going to start the Third now.

'Avenger13579': Thank you for the kind words.

'd1n0s': That's the idea, Arashi will have his own arc about his origin in the near future.

'ShadowKing241': Yes. He is half Saiyan. All the other heritages will be revealed in the future.

'Doom60': Working on it.

'DarkLightShade': Thank you for the kind words. I am trying to write this in a way, that readers will enjoy this.

'Army of One': Yes, but I made some changes in it. 'Hidden boost 1' is 'Zenkai boost' in my story and 'Hidden heritage 1' will be called 'Saiyan Heritage'.