# In the remains of a village "Shion" (was newly been raided), a middle-age covered in wounded Huntsman limping with his sword toward the forest.

- The blonde young man appeared in the corner of his sight.

- He startled and raised his weapon.

- The young man tried to reason with him but he had lost his hearing and he could only see a blur (due to blood loss.)

- He accused the young man as a bandit from the Branwen tribe, (something like: "You monster.", "Have you took enough.") and attacked.

- The young man didn't fight back and tried to calm him down.

- His attack appeared to do nothing. (foreshadowing Jaune semblance combat power.)

- After some overhand swing, He felt flat on the ground and darkness consumed his vision.

- *Flashback of the time the village was being raided.* He lost everything, wife daughter *insert rape if you want to.*

- The young man promised to deliver his dying wish.

# In Branwen's camp, Raven groaned and woke up due to the loud screaming.

- She went outside and saw a blonde young man standing in the center a pile of her fallen tribe members.

- Interested in the display. - "Impressive, but if you want a display of real power" - She signaled. "Vernal?" - Cloud swirled in the sky, blocked the sun, a lightning bolt struck really close to the young man.

- She confidently walked toward the young man. - "I don't why you came here but I'm giving you a choice." - Raised her sword. - "Bow down and serve the tribe or die."

- The young man said nothing but started to walk toward her.

- "I see." - She made a quick swing and cut down the young man's head. - "Foolish."

- As she turned back her tribe all shouted to her to looks out.

- She turned back and saw the young man held his head by his hand and placed it back, seemingly unfazed.

- *insert reaction*

- She shouted - "Vernal!" - A giant lightning bolt rained down at the young man.

- After a minute of bright lighting, the young man seemed to be vaporized but materialized himself afterward.

- *insert more reaction*

- She and some men of her tribe all raised their weapon and charged at the young man but all the swings they made closed at a rapid rate. Everyone he directly touched felt flat on the ground, presumed dead.

- Everyone paralyzed in fear, some began to run away.

- The young man continued to walk toward her.

- Vernal (Raven) used her Maiden power to froze the young man in ice.

- The ice cracked, dust poured out and the young man materialized outside.

- Someone shouted - "Grimm!" - As a hoard of Grimm is charging at the camp.

- She knew if she didn't show her true power here her tribe will be slaughtered. But right when she tried the young man closed in.

- She tried to push the young man away by a wind barrier but it didn't stop him.

- She got touched and memories poured into her made her lose control and destroy the camp wall.

- She felt memories of hundreds of men, women, children dying from the village before. (revealing the middle-age Huntsman before wasn't the only one Jaune came and contact, show how dedicated, strong-willed Jaune can be.)

- She still held it together and create a portal, Vernal dragged her through.

*A scene showed the killing and aftermath of the Grimm's attacks, mirrored the village with Jaune stood there in the middle.*

Conclusion:

If you want some spice then Raven went to Tai. I haven't got a clear picture yet.

Raven now became the shell of formal self with some serious PTSD.

Vernal saw how weak Raven became (after quite some time of trying to help her of course.).Lost faith, Vernal attempted to kill Raven to get the Maiden power for herself.

Raven learned the reality of her rule "The weak die, the strong live". Her fate is unknown as I didn't think it through

Ok, I realized there are not many characters in RWBY I can willy-nilly kill and the one I can don't have big enough impact on the story, world.

So leave a suggestion and idea. :)