Death Reaper Z: Well we don't want Kevin to be a cheater
Negaben364: I will say this to start, reviews are never buried. We answer as many as we possibly can.
Now onto the rest. I am happy to meet a new long time fan, it is always fun talking to people who have enjoyed our work.
I am really happy you've enjoyed our work... and you shouldn't be slacking off in class, this is coming from someone who's dropped out of collage. Don't.
But on a serious note... I am very happy that we helped you through some tough times and inspired you to write. And I hope you enjoyed Nega's happy ending in Krystal
And no there won't be a Krystal 2. The reason James was split into two halves is the difference in tone and the large time skip, it just felt right for it to be a story and a sequel. Meanwhile Krystal is one long ongoing story and needs to be its own thing. So Krystal isn't getting a sequel but it keeps going
Immage: We might see that one day, who knows
The4thHorseman: It isn't even just fics. Even in the show she has an unhealthy obsession with aliens.
Guest chapter 1 Feb 28: ... why are you giving a crapily edited review of Interspecies Reviewers? We did not ask for it. Fuck off
Smashing Skunk53: Do you know how many alien species are in Ben 10? Reaching 50 chapters with this story is highly likely
yugiohfan163: Glad you liked it dude
TOAA5501: That is what we said, yes
Shooting Star Dragon 3000: And more, you have received!
Guest chapter 1 Feb 26: Our first request, granted
Now for Ghost to answer some reviews:
Shooting Star Dragon 3000: Let the Quagmire jokes begin. *laughs*. We have more!
kyubbi99: Does this chapter answer the question?
predator1701: We'll do our best.
TOAA5501: Yeah, Gwen's a lesbian in this story.
yugiohfan163: *Laughs* Here we go!
underdogking: I see you are a man of culture.
Smashing Skunk53: We'll try and keep it not that long.
Guest chapter 1 Feb 28: What the absolute hell are you on about?
The4thHorseman: Looks like you reread chapter 1.
Immage: Err... yes?
redfro: Here we go!
Negaben364: ... *gives a hug*
Co-Written by GhostKaiser23
Disclaimer: Do not own Ben 10. We also do not own Interspecies Reviewer.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Oh... Wow...
I...
I didn't expect to get so much love for this story. Just... just... wow
So, here is the next chapter! I hope you all enjoy!
Ben 10 Intergalactic Reviewer
Chapter 2: Fastcat's and Harem's, Oh my!
It was a couple of days since the formation of the 'Intergalactic Reviewers' and they were wracking their brains for which brothel they should go to next. And it was Ben's turn this time. "Seriously? You've got nothing?" Kevin groaned.
"Spoiled for choice. It's like being a kid in a corner store." Ben answered.
"I suppose that is true, perhaps you can try a randomiser on your Omnitrix?" Rook suggested.
"Oh? Just choose a random alien and whichever species I get, we go to that brothel? Good call. And keeps our choices unbiased." he commented
"Hey guys!" a cheerful and powerful voice said, Manny walking towards them
"Hey/Hello, Manny." The three responded.
"How's it going?" He asked
"Pretty good, just trying something new for the Reviews." Ben answered as he got out his Omnitrix.
"Yeah, I read them... Pretty good idea." Manny admitted
"... Wanna join in next time?" Kevin offered
"Really? You'd let me join?" Manny double took.
"Of course. Having another person involved will help broaden the reviews and your experiences." Rook explained
"You'll need to set up a profile though." Ben added as he was randomly twisting the Omnitrix
"Here you go." Swift commented, placing food and drinks on the table
"Thanks, Swift." The three answered
"Hey, Swift." Manny waved
"Careful around these three, Manny. They're getting in trouble with that site of theirs." Swift playfully teased.
"Err." Manny blinked before she left.
"Okay, here we go!" Ben smiled as he set his transformations to 'Random'.
In a flash of green light, Ben had transformed into an alien. A black-furred cat-like humanoid alien with blue chest and head fur, blue 'gloves' and 'boots' made of his natural fur, green eyes and black tufts of hair around his eyes that looked like he was wearing a mask. "Fasttrack? Yeah, okay." He spoke in his slightly higher-pitched voice.
"A Citrakayah brothel. Hmm, it is an uncommon one." Rook admitted
"So it should be easy to pick from the list." Ben nodded before turning to Manny with a smirk "And don't worry about Swift. She's just jealous she can't get this." he joked while pointing at himself
"... You're a paragon of humbleness, Ben." Kevin groaned with a smirk before a laser beam flew through the air and hit Ben's ass
"OW! Damn Swift, I was joking!" Ben yelled
*Time Skip*
After traveling to the closest Citrakaya brothel; while also getting Manny's reviewer profile up and getting Ben some salve for his wounded ass, they finally arrived at their destination.
'Blue Blur Breasts.'
"Huh." Ben blinked at the name
Kevin just shrugged as they walked inside. "Perhaps it is a reference to something?" Rook asked
"I dunno. All I know is, this is our next review." Kevin answered
"Err." Manny gulped nervously.
"Are you alright, Manny?" Rook asked as he saw their friend and fellow plumber there.
"Gotta be honest, didn't think I'd be here. I mean... aren't we on duty?" He responded
"Manny, it's our day off. We're just facilitating a service. We're not doing anything illegal." Kevin reassured him.
"'Facilitating'?" Manny raises his eyebrow.
"Shut up!" Levin answered
Inside they saw the hostess of the brothel, a slender, slightly hourglass feminine figure of Fasttrack. Shiny blue fur, nude...if you call being furry 'nude' and had a smile. "Welcome to our brothel, sirs."
"Hello." Ben nodded
"Wait, you are the 'Intergalactic Reviewers'; aren't you?" The hostess asked
"That is correct." Rook nodded.
"This is an honour." She responded
"Don't you guys have like 2 reviews each or something?" Manny responded
"Xtranet goes far." Kevin shrugged
"Hey, do ya a favour; don't make a big song and dance about us being here. We don't want your girls trying harder than they need to." Ben asked. "Let them be themselves."
Kevin quickly grabbed Ben and pulled him to one side. "What're you doing?"
"Not giving this place false reviews. If the girls here give us "special treatment" that makes other people think that they get it all the time. Regulars will think they got cheated and the girls would be burned out before a week with orders." Ben clarified.
...
"Fuck." Kevin hissed
"Pardon me, Miss. But does this establishment have 'special treatment' options?" Rook inquired
"Yes, we do have that sort of thing. If you want it." The hostess answered. "I should warn you, it does require special lube."
"Problem solved." Kevin answered. "Whoever has 'special treatment' we'll just put it in the next review."
"Well with four of us..." Ben commented, sighing "... Two of us can try the special option."
"I think I'll play it safe." Manny admitted.
"So will I." Rook agreed
"Alright, we'll be the brave ones." Kevin sighed
"Okay then." Ben nodded
"Understood, sirs. Here's the catalogue for the girls; the special treatment will be labelled as such." The hostess spoke as they searched the catalogue. The four nodded as they started looking through said book
"Hmm. She is cute." Rook spoke up.
"I dunno. You got any girls with more of a chest?" Kevin asked
"Sorry, but due to the limits of our species, heavy chests would throw us off our balance when running." The hostess responded apologetically.
"Top heavy." Ben nodded
"This girl here. The one with the stripes." Manny asked
"Of course, Sir." She nodded
"I will have Miss Page 44." Rook asked politely
"Of course."
"Where's the special...? Ah, here we go. Hmm... This lovely lady here." Kevin pointed to a slender lady, who wore a choker around her neck.
Ben hummed as he was the only one left to choose. It seemed to be a bit of a pattern, he noticed with this being the third time in a row 'Why am I always the one to go last?' He thought. "Hey, what about her?" Ben pointed to a picture of a timid looking girl.
"Very well." the woman nodded, smiling as she took the book back
"Please wait momentarily while I call the girls. Oh, and you two." The hostess followed up and passed a pair of bottles for the two. "You are going to need these."
Ben shrugged and took the bottle, wondering what this special even was
"Please enjoy our girls." The hostess asked
The four went off to their separate rooms, seeing the girls who they chose. "Welcome, Sir. Thanks for choosing me~." Manny's girl smiled, she had dark blue fur with light blue stripes on her back and a slender frame.
"No worries Tiger." he joked
"Mreow~." She purred
*elsewhere*
In Rook's room, was a lady wearing only a fake tail around her hips, giving the effect of a 'playful kitten' "Hello, Sir. Thank you for choosing me." She purred.
"Not at all." Rook answered as he closed the door. "I did not know you wore tails to work."
"It's removable. Some people like it." Rook's chosen girl answered
"I see."
POP!
"Is this better, Sir?" The girl asked as she removed the tail
"Much." He smiled and nodded, as he began to take his armour off
*With Kevin.*
"Hello~, Kitty." Kevin smirked
"Hello, Sir. Thanks for choosing me." The woman smiled.
He laughed softly as he got a good look at her
She was slender, slightly busty for a Citrakayah species, at least a B/C-Cup covered by her chest fur, pouty lips and slightly clawed fingers. "You ordered the 'special' right?" She asked
"That's right." He nodded.
"Good~." She purred as she took the lube from his hands. "Don't worry. I'll treat you well." As she kissed him. Kevin kissed back, grinning 'I wonder, can he keep up?' She thought
*With Ben*
"So, what's this lube for?" Ben asked his chosen brothel girl
"Oh, it's a special protective lube. Like a liquid frictionless condom." She answered. "For those who want the 'full effect' of our species speed."
"... I get it." Ben thought and then nodded. "I understand." As he was getting a hand-job from her. She had the lube in one hand, pouring it over his body while her other hand rubbed the lube into his member "Ah~, are you often picked?" He asked
"Only by those who're little 'adventurous~'. But mostly my own species." She answered, carefully licking his cock.
"W-Why?" he gasped, his hips bucking slightly
"Most men can't handle our speed." She purred, before sucking on his member, at least going half way down.
Ben groaned, admittedly wondering how this lube tasted since he knew these things could be flavoured "How? Does it. Taste?" He panted
"Hmm~, hot. Thick. Meaty~." She purred as she pulled back, having the fully lubed cock brought to full hilt.
*with Kevin*
Kevin was in the middle of mid-fucking his girl, having grabbed onto the metal bar of the bed had changed his skin to a slick, shiny metal which didn't remove the lube thankfully, but also gave his woman a smoother surface to work with.
"This is! Fuckfuckfuck! Useful!" the girl moaned as she came. As she was moving faster than he was, she was hitting orgasms much more frequently than he was
"Oh, god! You're like a living vibrator!" Kevin grunted as he had to grab the rings above her bed so he didn't fly off of her.
It felt fantastic!
*with Manny*
"Don't be so serious, Sir. Please enjoy." The lady asked, feeling how tense Manny's muscles were and how hard he was trying.
"I'm just... Trying not to hurt you." he explained
"You're sweet." She smiled and kissed him, feeling his cock rise and rest between her ass-cheeks. "But I'm not made of glass. You can be a little rough."
"Well. Okay." He answered, lifting her up with two of his arms, while the other two groped her breasts as he lowered her down and filled her pussy.
"Ah~!" she moaned happily
"S-So tight~!" Manny moaned as he gently inserted his massive cock inside of her.
"S-Sir! You're so big!" She moaned as Manny inserted another inch inside of her.
*With Rook*
"Ah~! Sir! Hmm-hmm-hmm~!" She moaned as Rook was spooning her kissing her tender lips as he fucked her pussy.
Rook moaned, swirling his tongue around hers. Rook's hips thrust deep and fast as much as he could, fulfilling her pussy with his member. His paws played with her breasts softly, their blue fur contrasting and matching at the same time
"I-I'm cumming~!" She panted and climaxed, shuddering at a higher speed.
*with Ben*
Ben's woman was bounding on his cock, at great speeds, thanks to the lube, she could take his cock and he could fuck her without breaking the condom "Ah~!" Ben moaned, feeling like he'd loose his mind
"Fill me! Fill me with your hot cum!" She moaned as she wanted Ben to climax.
"Oh! Oh! Fuck!" he moaned. Within seconds, Ben came deep into her pussy, though the lube contained it all "Yes!" he growled lightly
"Ah~! Sir... That. Was. Amazing." She panted as she slowly pulled off of Ben's cock.
"Yeah." he smiled
She looked down at Ben's wilted cock, seeing the cum inside of it... and saw it was like a deflated water balloon. How much could he climax with? "Oh... Gods..." she whispered, carefully peeling the ballooned lube off his body like she was removing the plastic cover off a new phone screen
"Ah~. God. Like peeling off tape off." Ben joked lightly.
"How much?" She whispered before she began to pour it into her mouth
"...Oh fuck, that's hot." He blinked in awe as she gulped it all down, she licked her lips before smiling at Ben once again.
*Time Skip*
"Holy. Cats! That was great." Manny admitted as they approached their ship
"Yep. Now, we got to do the review on the way back." Kevin answered
"Please come back soon." The woman waved as she saw them leave.
"So, who will be driving?" Rook asked
"You drive. I want to give my thoughts first." Ben asked
"Someone is eager." Kevin joked
"is that so wrong?" Ben responded as they boarded.
"No." Manny assured
"Right, so I'm going first." Ben answered as he sat at the computer and began to type away. He began, recalling the events that just transpired.
Ben Tennyson.
I have just experienced quite the wild ride at 'Blue Blur Breasts'.
I asked for the 'special service' which was an incredible decision. They give you a special bottle of lubricant so you can fully experience the beauty of a Citrakayah woman, I won't give away *all* the surprises. Tight and warm vaginas, silky soft fur and speeds that make you feel you're fucking a ten-speed flesh-light. The hostess is kind and attentive, well informed for her customers and the chosen girls can be kinky as all hell.
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"I think that's good." Ben nodded
"Manny, would you like to give your thoughts?" Rook offered as he drove.
"Um. Sure." He nodded as he went to Ben's seat and looked at the computer. "So...just be honest? Give a rough idea what happened?"
"Yeah and don't forget to give a number from 1 to 10 on how well you enjoyed it. One is the worst, ten is the absolute best. And give constructive criticism as well, we don't want to be dick-bags." Ben nodded
"Oh. Okay."
"... One last thing, I don't have a last name so... Give my job?" Manny asked
"Sure. That works." Kevin answered.
"Okay." He began, recalling the events that just transpired
Manny, Intergalactic Plumber Officer
Today was the first time I went to a brothel. I was worried due to my strength that I might hurt the girl I was with. But fortunately, she made me relax, even let down some of my barriers so I could enjoy it.
It was a very fun experience, all things considered. And as I occasionally have sex with a half Kineceleran girl, the event wasn't too strange for me. But the slower pace and soft fur was a nice change of pace. Especially as, since they are physically stronger than Kineceleran's I could go a bit harder as well. I got to be clear, I didn't go for the special package but these girls do tend to faster than most species by instinct.
These girls where also right up my alley, to. Thin bods, small boobs and cute little assets. The typical 'slender cute' type which I can not resist.
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"Rook, your turn!" he called
"Very well." Rook nodded
Rook
Hello again every.
I, unlike some of the others, went with the normal package. And I must say... It was not that interesting. Their fur and feline nature made it very similar to being with a girl of my own species. And her breasts where the smallest I have ever experienced. While enjoyable it was not anything special, unfortunately.
4
"Wow. Bit harsh." Ben blinked and shrugged, it was Rook's opinion after all
"Your turn Kevin." Rook called, Manny taking his turn in the helm
"Alright, here I go." Kevin cracked his fingers and began to type.
Kevin
Hey everyone.
Well, I just got back from sampling some of the nice girls at 'Blue Blur Breasts', and yes, they weren't the biggest girls I've ever had, I can honestly say that having someone soft to cuddle was a subtle change. But I prefer some girls with a bit more 'up top'.
5
"There we go." Kevin leaned back and relaxed
"Really?" The others asked
"What?"
"You had the special like me. And you're only talking about their breasts? Nothing else?" Ben pointed out
"Alright, alright." Kevin groaned and rewrote his.
*time skip*
The Plumbers looked at the reviews the lads had made, while Manny...was looking a bit embarrassed "What's the matter?" Ben asked him
"I think it's just... people are reading it; you know? I'm a bit self-conscious." He answered
"Dude, it'll be fine." Ben assured
"Yeah, we're three reviews in and-hello~." Kevin added as he was flicking through the reviews' comments and saw the pinned comment from the brothel. "Hey, listen to this."
The group did as they where told, gathering closer to their friend
Thank you for your patronage, anyone who wants to come and have fun, here is our website. We promise to try better next time. Kissy face
And there's the link to the brothel there.
"Huh. Okay." Manny blinked in shock as he saw the comment.
"At least we gave our honest opinion." Rook added
"Huh. This is our biggest hit yet." Ben commented as he looked at how many hits their page had
"Well, it is our third review. Our fame is slowly growing." Rook answered
"Maybe cause Manny's here as well?" Kevin added
"Yeah, maybe." He nodded.
"Do you want to come to the next one?" Rook asked
"Err... No. I think I'm good." He answered
"MANNY!" a female voice shirked
"Was that Helen?" Rook asked
"I was never here!" Manny panicked and began to run.
"MANNY!" Helen yelled once again and immediately caught him. She slammed him against the wall, snarling
"Er..." the group blinked and watched, enjoying the drama
"You! Went to a brothel?" She hissed, glaring darkly into his eyes.
"Yeah?"
"And you reviews it!"
"... yeah?"
"And you said she was better than me?!"
BANG!
"That's what you're mad about?" Ben groaned, having gone facepalmed into the table
Helen turned her death-glare at Ben, making him flinch, before turning to Manny. "My house. Right now!" She ordered "I am going to fuck you so good you won't ever look at a Citrakayah bitch again!"
"You guys are dating?" Rook asked, feeling worried and ashamed they dragged Manny into this if it got him in trouble
"Friends with benefits, fuck buddies." Manny explained with a nervous sweat drop "Completely casual. We got needs so we normally have fun with each other."
"That's good." Ben sighed because if he found out that Manny had cheated on his girlfriend he would have lost a lost of respect for his friend
"If you take him to another brothel without my knowledge again... I'll fuck you ALL!" Helen snarled
"... Sounds fun." Kevin smirked
"I'M on top!" She glared, giving clear indication.
...
All three boys covered their asses in fear
"... So, Friday? I'm sure Ben wouldn't mind." Swift joked, sitting on the Reviewer's table
"Not. The time. Swift." Ben blushed, hissing through his teeth.
"Come on!" Helen glared, pulling Manny by his jacket
"R-Right. Later guys!" Manny nervously responded and waved, being dragged by his fuck-buddy.
"She is oddly jealous just for a fuck buddy." Kevin commented
"Citrakayah's and Kineceleran's have a small rivalry going on because of the speed thing." Swift said, taking a bite out of some of Ben's chili fries
"Hey, that's-" Ben frowned
"Ah, that would be it." Rook nodded in understanding "Perhaps it is the same with my species? Which might explain why I did not enjoy it too much."
"Eh, probably." Swift smirked as she took a couple of more fries.
"Those were the last ones!" He frowned
"Looks like you'll have to buy more." she smirked with a wink while licking the chili off her fingers "I'll go grab you some more, I'll add it to your tab." with that she jumped off the table, her tail teasingly brushing Ben's nose, before she walked away with a sway of her hips
"... She likes you." Rook blinked before he took a drink from his cup.
"You think?" Ben asked, a bit sunken in with himself now nervous
"I believe so. Unless she is just enjoying the fact you are 'easy' to mess with." Rook answered
"... Where are you getting this shit?" Kevin asked
"I am trying my best in order to pick up signs." Rook answered "But it does beg the question; which species brothel next?"
"I think we should slow down." Ben commented "We did... what? Three in a week?"
"Yeah and I don't know if my dick can handle another one right now." Kevin added
"Oh, I am sorry." Rook apologised
"Plus... we have work." Ben reminded "Patrolling Undertown tomorrow."
"And I have a few orders for car repairs I have been neglecting." Kevin remembered
"Ah, I see. And I remembered that I have patrol in the prison for the next few days." Rook agreed "Next week then?"
"Yeah." Ben nodded
"See you guys, next week." Kevin waved as they left for their respective jobs.
"Later." they waved
"Here is your fries." Swift said, putting a new plate down
*time skip*
It was the next week and the Intergalactic Reviewers had rejoined at their usual table "Hey, guys." Ben waved.
"What's up?" Kevin followed back
"Hello, Ben. How was your patrol?" Rook asked
"Eh, same old." He shrugged "Mostly boring."
"Hey, have we thought about the newest brothel?" Kevin asked. "Swift, three coffees!"
"Right, right, you damn perverts." she huffed
"Well, since I figured out how to get the 'shuffle' setting on the Omnitrix, I think we should be good." Ben answered.
"... There is a 'shuffle setting' on the Omnitrix?" Rook blinked
"You sure you don't just hit it really hard and that 'skips' the alien?" Kevin remarked
"Shut up." Ben deadpanned
"Here you go." Swift said, setting the drinks down on the table
"Thanks, Swift." Ben responded.
"Awesome." Kevin smiled, taking his own drink and exhale contently.
"Thank you, Swift." Rook nodded
"If you guys are really that desperate, why not go to a Splixson joint?" Swift asked sarcastically "Get your own personal little Harem's for the night."
"... That's not a bad idea." Ben answered
"A Splixion brothel... We might have to look into that." Rook added
"Excellent idea Swift! Here's an extra big tip, unless you want Ben's tip!" Kevin joked and handed her some taydens
"Thanks." Swift sighed heavily and took the taydens.
"Ah, I have found the brothel." Rook spoke up after some research.
Ben ignored Kevin and Rook as they chatted, getting up and walking up behind her "Hey, Swift, you okay?" he asked
"I'm fine. Why?" She asked as she turned to him, seeing his eyes.
"You just seemed a bit annoyed back there." he shrugged, rubbing his neck awkwardly "Your boss isn't giving you shit again, is he? If he is just say and I'll have a word with him."
"It's not that." She looked away. "And you're nice to say."
"Then what is it?" he asked "I'm always here to help."
Swift sighed, turning away as she saw another person trying to flag her down. "Sorry, I've got to serve tables. We'll talk later." And went off.
Ben sighed and nodded, walking back to the group
"Trouble in paradise, Ben?" Kevin joked.
"Shut up." Ben responded
"Here we are. A Splixion brothel, however, it is on its home planet." Rook pointed on the internet.
"How far away?" he asked
"If we use the 'Warp Drive' about twenty minutes." Rook explained. "Depending on traffic."
...
"Nice."
*time skip*
"'Twenty minutes' you said." Kevin commented as they left the ship. "'Depending on traffic'."
"I am sorry, I miscalculated." Rook apologised
"It took ten." Ben responded "Don't apologise."
"Yeah, I'm just messing with you." Kevin patted his back.
They soon arrived at the brothel, a monochromatic sign that read 'Multi's' was hanging up with a revolving door at its entrance "Revolving door? Why do I feel like that is a bad sign?" Ben commented as they entered the place
"Perhaps it is just aesthetics?" Rook asked
As they entered they were greeted by a Splixion hostess, who looked like she was wearing a black leotard on her silvery body with A/B-Cup breasts "Hi~" she cheered childishly
"Err. Hi. Are you open?" Rook asked nervously
"Of course. We don't get many different species, customers." The hostess responded as she leapt down and passed a book to the three
"... Don't take this the wrong way, but... how old are you?" Kevin asked
"I'm forever 24." She smiled, giving a peace sign with her three-fingered hand.
...
"Okay." Kevin deadpanned as the three began to leave.
"Sirs! Please wait!" The Splixion girl called out in worry. "We don't get many other species in our establishment. It would mean a lot for us if you would review us. You can experience your own harem for today!" And that made the three stop
"'Harem'?" The three asked and turned around.
"When you put it that way." Ben grinned as they walked back over and where ready to choose their girls
"Who do we have?" Kevin asked as they opened the book.
"And I'm sorry about the confusion on our physical age. We don't have the 'assets' for some people." The hostess apologised
"Do not fault yourself for genetics, Miss. It is understandable." Rook reassured her.
'Next place we go to better have girls with big boobs.' Kevin thought "I'll have this one." he said, pointing to a girl with a big ass
"Of course, Sir." The hostess answered
"I think... Oh, she looks nice." Ben followed up, pointing to a little pudgier girl, than the hostess.
"Oh, my sister! I am sure you will enjoy her!" the hostess smiled
"Huh. Okay." Ben blinked. "Must be a little weird for you to say that."
"I think I will go for, Miss Holly." Rook asked, pointing to a picture.
"Fantastic choices! Please, enjoy!"
"Thanks." The three answered and left for their rooms.
"Later guys." Ben spoke as he arrived at the room.
"Don't wait up!" Kevin smirked as he went to see his 'harem'.
Rook gulped and opened his door. As each walked inside they saw a gathering of identical women, all waiting for them and either sitting or standing to await their patrons.
"Whoa!" they all said as one
*with Ben*
"Well, I see why she said it was 'a harem'." Ben commented as he walked in
"Welcome, Master." The Splixion girls spoke with smiles, trying not to do the creepy 'village of the damned' thing
"Thank you. Will we begin?" He asked as he took his jacket off. He looked around, counting the amount this girl had duplicated himself 'Two, four, eight...' He mulled around in his head "Sixteen? There's sixteen of you?"
"I thought it would be a treat, Sir." The head Splixion girl answered who was obviously the originator
Ben nodded, standing tall and judging how tall they where compared to him
They came about to his stomach, three feet in height, black 'horns' on her head, a somewhat plump body, pudgy hands, leotard-style markings on her body and yellow eyes with A/B-Cup breasts.
Ben shrugged and sat down, making it so he was more or less the same height as them
"Who do you want first, Master?" The head-girl asked
*with Kevin*
Kevin was relaxing in the bed, sighing in relaxation, as his fifteen or so girls where licking every inch of his body 'Okay. This is great.' He thought with a perverted smile 'Tickles though.' He stretched, laughing in a good natured way
"How does it feel, Master?" The first girl asked
"Great. It feels really good." He smiled "Oh~!" he groaned, some tongue's hitting his balls and penis
"Does this please you, Master?" A duplicate asked
"Yeah. It does... Why don't you suck it?" He inquired
"okay!" one nodded and opened her mouth
"Ah~, kinda tight. But it's nice." Kevin smiled as he felt her mouth suck on his cock.
*with Rook*
"How does this feel?" Rook asked as he teased two of the girls as best as he could with his hands and tongue... and every single one of his girls where all moaning and rolling around the floor
"Hmm?" He asked, seeing the girls all pleasured at once by Rook's technique.
This was rather... strange
*with Ben*
"Ah~! Oh yes! Master! So big!" The Splixion moaned as she bounced on about half of his cock. And at the same time, the other Splixion duplicates continued to moan, feeling Ben's cock in each of them. Though it sounded sexy, Ben knew the downside of the Splixion race, all of them feel the same pleasures and pain.
Which he had known since he was a child but at the same time he didn't think it would effect sex this much. And almost in unison, each of the duplicates began to climax and squirt as the basis was filled with Ben's cock making him sigh lightly
"S-Sir?" The Splixion woman panted as she looked at him.
"Yeah?" he smiled charmingly
"Would you like to try our ass next?"
"Sure." He nodded and slowly pulled out, making the other duplicates exhale in relief and excitement.
*with Kevin *
"Sir? Is everything alright?" One of the duplicates asked
"Yeah. Just... a little bored. When I heard 'harem' I thought, 'individual girls to fuck'. Not 'girls who all feel the same thing when one is fucked'. Not your fault though." Kevin admitted "It just feels like I'm only having one girl, which I am."
"Sorry." The main girl apologized as she remerged back with her doubles and into one girl again.
"What're you doing?" Kevin asked before the girl crawled onto his body and began to suck his cock in he '69' position as best as she could. "Oh~."
*with Rook*
"I'm sorry, Sir." Holly apologised as she was cuddled by Rook.
"Why are you apologising? I had a good learning experience and a good time." Rook answered as he snuggled her.
"Really? Thank you, Sir." Holly answered
"Absolutely." He nodded before he stretched gently. "I think our time is up, correct?"
"Yeah, it is." She nodded as she knew she had to get up...but Rook's fur was fluffy and soft. "Five more minutes." She whispered, which made Rook chuckle lightly.
*later*
It was some time later and the Reviewers had left the Splixion establishment and flying back to Earth in their 'Rustbucket'.
"Okay. Be honest...Who else thought that place sucked?" Kevin groaned as he laid in a chair with Rook and Ben both reluctantly raising their hands
"Well. They cannot all be winners." Rook admitted.
"At least they tried." Ben added
"Ben. Let's be honest. Splixion's cannot be a 'harem brothel'. Sure it's a nice 'one on one' place, but basically it's not happening when all the girls are the same person." Kevin answered as he began to type up his review
Kevin
Just visited the Splixion brothel 'Multi's', a disappointment of an establishment and the first one to drop the ball for us. Though the girls seem young, they are of course of age, they just have a 'forever early twenties' look to them. The hostess was kind and informative, though that did little when she offered the 'special' side of things. Their apparent special is 'service harem'. It sounds enticing, but it throws you off. Basically, the girls you choose for the 'harem' are all duplicates of the same girl; meaning you only have to please one and you're fucking them all.
3
"That's... brutal." Ben admitted as he saw it.
"Oh yeah? Think you can do them a bit more 'justice'?" Kevin asked
"Alright, let me take a go at it." Ben spoke as he and Kevin switched seats.
Ben
Hey guys. So I'll be straight up... While the idea of this brothel is amazing, unfortunately the limitations of the species hold it back.
The girls are amazing and they are so tight and fun!
But the 'harem' aspect, sleeping with a bunch of woman at once? It should be a man's dream right?
Well unfortunately when they all feel the same thing that doesn't work. Getting a blowjob from five girls at once was possibly the best feeling I've ever had, don't get me wrong! But when you are fucking one girl... And the others are all just laying there and moaning, not doing anything sexual just moaning, it breaks your immersion and ruins the mood.
The girl did her best, she was amazing, but you can only do so much
4 out of 10
"Rook, your turn." Ben spoke up as Kevin took the controls of the ship.
"Alright. But I will do my best to be a gentleman and maybe help their revenue." Rook answered as he went to the computer, beginning to type away.
Rook
Hello everyone. Once again we have been to a new establishment. A Splixion Brothel. Their speciality may be tempting but it is also a problematic limitation. The girls themselves are lovely and enjoy snuggling, but their natural 'shared consciousness' works against them. It would be better for them to go with a different special for their brothel. I think they can do better if they change things up.
3
"Huh." Ben commented
"What is wrong? Did I make it too 'soft'?" Rook asked.
"Not really. Just very to the point." Ben shrugged "Hopefully these don't hurt that place too much."
"Here's hopin'." Kevin crossed his fingers as they were now caught in traffic. "Oh, come on!"
*Time Skip*
"Morning Ben, morning Kevin." Rook spoke as the three had arrived at their regular table
"Morning." they greeted
"Guess not many people are commenting as much today." Ben pointed out as they were sitting in their seats, showing that not a lot of people were congratulating them.
"I wouldn't be so sure." Kevin answered as he got his phone and went to the comment section of their reviews which he had booked marked because why wouldn't he?
"What do you mean?" Rook asked
"Take a look." Kevin answered, showing the pinned comment for 'Multi's'.
-Thank you for your honest opinion of our establishment. We are sorry you didn't have a good time. I suppose we will have to close down for the time being.-
"Why're you showing us this? Guilt-tripping us?" Ben frowned
"Read the replies." Kevin answered, showing some of the comments on that comment.
The group blinked and did as they where told
Each one of the replies for Multi's was reassuring, saying to 'stay open' even some suggestions on changing things up with their specialities
"Oh. Okay." They blinked.
They noticed the suggestion they change the specials to extra small girls or massages or other elements that played into the species strength
"Does? Does this mean we have helped?" Rook asked
"Yeah, I think so." Ben nodded. making Rook sigh in relief
"You guys ordering the normal?" Swift asked
"Yes please, Swift." Rook asked
"And get something for yourself." Ben offered as he passed her some money.
"Whoa! Are you sure?" Rook, Kevin and Swift asked in unison.
"Why're you two yelling? Look, I'm just being generous right now. Plus...I'm in a good mood." Ben answered
"Thank you..." she blinked, seeing how much he payed her. It was well over her normal wage for the month. Enough for three months at least. "I'll. Get you your drinks." She nervously walked off.
Bwoop!
"Huh?" Kevin looked at ben before his phone sounded off.
On the screen was another comment from 'Multi's'.
To the Intergalactic Reviewers,
Thank you so much for reviewing us. You've given us a lot to work with and improve upon. If you want to come again, the next time will be free. winky face emoji and heart emoji
Kevin just smirked and pocketed his phone. "Did something happen?" Rook asked
"Nah. All's good." Kevin waved off. "You know... It's my choice next. You better land on an alien with a good body."
"Alright." Ben answered, twiddling the Omnitrix and transformed... into 'The Worst'.
PUNT!
"Hell no!" Kevin kicked him away in annoyance, all the while Ben was laughing.
"I'm just messing with you! Ha, ha, ha!" Ben laughed, unhurt by the kick and turned back to normal. "Okay, okay. For real this time." And selected the randomiser once again. The group surrounded the watch, looking eagerly as the button was pressed down...
FLASH!
"Are you trying to impress me with turning into Jetray, Ben?" Swift asked as she returned with drinks
"Huh? Seriously?" Ben asked as he looked down at his form. "Wow. Yeah, this'll work."
"... What will?" she asked, setting four drinks onto the table "And if you stay in that form I'm going to assume you are offering something. And there are two potential outcomes to that offer."
"Ah, sorry Swift." Ben apologised as he sat down.
...
"You still hadn't changed back yet." she commented
"Whoops!" Ben apologised and turned back to normal, chuckling awkwardly.
Swift rolled her eyes and sighed softly
"You are too stupid at times, Ben." Kevin sighed.
*Time Skip*
"Later guys." Ben waved as he arrived home
"See you tomorrow!" Rook waved as Ben walked out of the car and back home
"I'm back." Ben called as he entered the room
"Hey, Son. How was work?" Ben's father asked as he saw him
"Good." Ben smiled weakly, but also clearly still a bit upset
"Do... you want to talk about it?" He inquired, a little worried for his son.
"Same old same old." was Ben's reply
"Your mother's making dinner. Do you want-?"
"No thanks, Dad." He answered as he went to his room.
"Oh, you're cousins are visiting!" he called up to his son
"'Cousins'? You mean Lucy?" Ben asked
"As well as Gwen and Sunny. I also think Gwen brought her girlfriend as well."
"Oh, right... I'll be down." Ben answered, realising... it might be nice to see them.
"Ben, they..."
And as Ben opened the door to his bedroom... He saw said four girls in his room, cleaning it "...What the heck?!" He yelled in shock.
"Ben!" the four women gasped, as Ben saw them
First, there was Gwen, Ben's first cousin, fiery red hair and green eyes, wearing a red shirt, a black skirt and stockings flat shoes, C-Cup breasts and a slender but strong figure.
Next was Sunny, almost identical to Gwen save for her dark black hair, purple eyes, D-Cup breasts that were hugged by her purple shirt and black skirt.
Lucy was next, blonde-haired, blue eyes with whisker marks on her cheeks, wearing a long black shirt with a white star on her C-Cup chest, white stockings and flat black shoes.
And lastly was Hope, AKA Charmcaster, Gwen's girlfriend and fellow sorceress. She had long silver hair, purple eyes, wearing a violet dress-robe with dark purple leggings/boots with some black straps on her thigh. And D-Cup breasts.
"Gwen? Sunny? What-? What're you doing?" Ben stammered as he saw them.
"Well we came over earlier and wondered where you were. So we checked your room and it was filtth. So we decided to clean, which was when Aunt Sandra and Uncle Carl got home." Gwen explained "And Ben, seriously, your room was a disaster zone, how did you not constantly break an ankle in that mess?"
"I'm agile enough?" He recoiled gently.
"Wow. Doin' some 'research' Ben?" Sunny teased as she produced a 'magazine'.
"Hey! That's private!" Ben snapped as he snatched it back from her "Why are you girls even here?"
"We came to see you." Lucy answered innocently.
"See me?"
"We heard how upset you where." Gwen elaborated
"Yeah... That." Ben realised, sitting down. He rubbed the bridge of his nose and sighed heavily. "Look, I appreciate this... But I could've done it."
"Ben. Mr Smoothy's from... the Jurassic Era." Hope commented as she levitated an old Mr Smoothy's mug.
"... I was getting around to it eventually." he grumbled as he sat on his bed... Or had been planning to, but he actually sat on Sunny's lap
"Oh~." Sunny smirked as she felt him on her lap.
"Huh?" Ben apologised
"Sunny." Gwen glared, before turning to Ben. "Look. I don't want to see you feeling sorry for yourself."
"Yeah Ben. We came to be here for you." Sunny purred and hugged him
"Oh." Ben nodded...before he clicked on. "Oh...!" His eyes widened. "But? Don't you all have boy or girlfriends or something?"
"I'm single right now." Sunny smirked
"Same." Lucy agreed
"Please tell me that you-." Ben asked as he looked at Gwen and Hope, thinking they had good standards to not sleep with him.
"I'm not. I'm into girls, Ben." Gwen huffed
"Thank god." Ben sighed in relief.
"Come on, love. Let's leave the three to their own devices." Hope asked, taking Gwen's hand.
"Hope, you forget why we are here." Gwen added as if this was practiced
"... Oh no..." Ben blinked
"I may like girls but you're bisexual." Gwen continued
"Oh, true. And we did want a sperm doner for the baby." Hope added as she tapped her chin
"A sper- a spur... HA?!" Ben asked in shock, losing his breath as he heard that. "You're asking me to be-? Are you serious right now?"
"Well we can't ask Kevin. He and I use to date, I'd be weird." Gwen waved off "But you and I are also closely related. So it'd be like it was my child by blood anyway."
"... Can't argue with the logic of someone with a Doctorate in magic." Ben answered
"But... Isn't there some magic you could use for this?"
"If there was do you think Anodite's would ever mate with other species?" Sunny quipped
"Two points to magic users." Lucy smirked and raised two fingers, wiggling them playfully.
"Oh..." Ben muttered as he slumped back, his head resting between Sunny's breasts
"How'd they feel~? D-Cup ta-tas." Sunny teased
"They're nice." he mumbled
"Hey, kids! Your aunt Sandra and I are going out, be back in a few hours!" Ben's father called up
"Okay, Uncle Frank/Dad/Mr Tennyson!" The group responded
"So. A few hours~." Sunny smirked, removing her shirt.
"... You aren't wearing a bra." Ben blinked, feeling naked breasts either side of his head
"Am I required to wear one?" She asked puckishly.
"Usually, yes." Gwen nodded as she frowned at the girl who could pass as her twin
"Nyeh." Sunny stuck her tongue out playfully.
"Now then, what do we have to-? Jesus Christ!" Hope asked as she zipped Ben's pants off and revealed his half-erect cock!
"H-Holy..." Gwen stuttered, unable to look away
"Wow! Always knew you where gifted, Ben!" Lucy cheered
"Sorry. I'd be harder if I wasn't nervous." Ben admitted
"'Harder'? You're not fully erect yet?" Lucy asked
"No... Way!" Gwen gulped and mumbled
"Well then." Sunny smiled as she nestled Ben's head between her bosom. "Lucy, can you get him hard?"
"Of course!" Lucy grinned and kissed him, her hand rubbing his member... And her hand became tendrils of mud, rubbing every inch at once in a hundred different directions
'Oh, my fucking, GOD!' Ben moaned as he felt his cock being teased while being kissed by his cousin-in-law. Yeah he quickly became as hard as stone
Lucy moaned lewedly, slurping up all of Ben's saliva that she could
"Fuck, are you this thirsty?" Hope asked in shock.
"Yeah!" Lucy grinned as she broke the kiss, licking her lips "I also heard doing that is apparently really erotic!"
"It looked weird." Hope commented "But speaking from experience it can be hot."
"Hic!" Ben hiccuped as he was in a bit of a daze. "Okay... Who's first?" He asked
"Looks tasty!" Hope smiled before taking his cock into her mouth and sucking
"H-Hope!" Ben moaned, before he was pulled back a little, being kissed by Lucy, while Sunny rubbed his balls.
"So full. Even after all those kinky 'reviews' of yours." Sunny smiled and licked her lips
"Hmm?!" Ben's eyes widened as he heard that. "You read those?"
"Big fan. You should add a tip section." she suggested "Tips for you, and tips for each business. A totally free option if people want to directly support."
"Might... Wait a while for that." he grunted
"I think the Arachmochimps sounded the hottest." Sunny joked
"Can we not talk about Ben's whore-site, please?" Gwen asked while unable to look away from his cock
"Can you say that when he's packing *this* monster in his pants?" Sunny answered as Ben grunted, splurting his seed into Hope's mouth, making her unintentionally swallow and drip some down her lips.
"Hope... You're mouth..." he moaned blissfully
GULP!
"Ah~." Hope smiled. 'Yep. I'm going to get pregnant.'
"Come here." Gwen suddenly called and pulled Hope into a kiss
"Hmm~." Hope smiled as she shared the remaining cum with Gwen.
'Oh, sweet merciful-' Ben thought before Lucy stroked his cock. "Whoa!"
"Don't go limp on us now." Lucy smirked.
"Err. I won't but... Condoms. In the drawer." Ben asked
"Why? You won't need them." Sunny responded sensually. Before she straddled his hips and impaled herself in him. Sunny's eyes almost popped out of her head as she felt Ben's entire length shoved into her. "A-Ah! Oh fuck!"
"God, you're tight, Sunny!" Ben moaned "I'm... Actually surprised about that!"
"Sh-Shut up! Ah~!" Sunny moaned as she slapped her hips against Ben's own and fucked him "Yeah! So deep and big~" she grinned and kissed him
'Those words.' Ben thought as he gripped Sunny's ass and ploughed her deeper. He couldn't hold back now!
Sunny's ass bounced with each thrust, Ben's 'wild side' was showing. He kissed back harder and rougher, fucking Sunny with wild abandon.
He kissed her deeply, rolling their hips together
"Whoa~." Lucy looked on in awe as she saw Ben fuck her intensely, rubbing her slit as she imagined him doing it to her.
Hope and Gwen meanwhile where still making out and moaning