-dragon349295: that was fast. This story has a tiny bit more to go, but we are indeed in the home stretch.
-cricketsundew: I'm glad the emotions are standing out. That was the whole point of writing this after all, to practice showing emotion.
-queenglorythefirst: while you may not be the first to review, you are still queenglorythefirstplace. You were the first to review to this story, and my other story, and you are the reason this story made it past chapter three. I would have taken it down if you hadn't showed up.
-oragonking: I'm sorry that you are unhappy with the outcome, but Fatespeaker is gone. Remember, even in the books it said that animus magic can't bring them back.
-donhp: *screaming* YES! YES! YES! Thank you! I was getting a little worried about how you all would take it, and how I would break the news, but there will be no animus magic in this story. I'm sorry, but here is my reasons.
I don't like magic, because it's cheap. I actively avoid books with magic, (nothing against y'all who enjoy it) because it is too easy to use it as a fix all. How is the bad guy so powerful? Magic. How did the good guy beat him? Magic. How is that guy not dead? Magic. See what I'm saying?
I have read all the wof books, and when I say I'm a fan, I pretty muchly mean the first five, because there is way too much magic in all the others. That being said, for some reason, I did enjoy darkstalker.
I am avoiding magic because it is too easy of a way to solve the dragonets problems. I want them to face their problems in a more realistic way, (as realistic as talking dragons can be, at least) because if, in the end, everyone is magically healed, then there was no point in worrying about the characters in the first place.
-blueberry avarr: jeez-o-pizza's, you don't mess around when it comes to reviewing, do ya? Thank you for all of your feedback. My phone alerted me to your reviews at four in the morning. I'm a light sleeper, so that scared me for a second. I can't reply to all of your points here, this response area is already way too long, but I can say that no, there is not a happy ending planned, and I really hope I'm not going overboard, although I said I probably would in the intro. This story was originally meant to be way beyond my normal tone, and I hadn't intended to let anyone read it. Also, I would trade world of tanks for war thunder in a heartbeat. The problem is, I don't have a pc at my disposal. I'm stuck with a phone, which is great for writing stories(NOT!). I appreciate realistic gameplay, and being a ww2 history nut, the kv2 is one of my favorite geek out subjects. It was originally built to counter Finnish bunkers, so it makes sense that it would suddenly make armored vehicals cease to exist.
Innocent cinnamon: welcome! I like the name, although I don't like cinnamon. I really tried to keep everyone in character, although it can be difficult.
Nonya: I'm sorry, but it is way too late to add your character. Also, as I said before, this story is prewritten, so I can't just go back and change the whole thing.Okay, I'm sorry for the huge response section. Forewarning, this chapter is a little dark.
ran back to the trough and got more water, this time to cool her ear. Then he got a third bucket and poured it gently over all the burns.
Sunny was crying, weakly, like she was on the verge of passing out. Her sobs were hoarse, and she held the damaged arm close to her.
Clay felt a shiver go through him as he began to fully comprehend what had happened to her.
He dropped the bucket and gently lifted her off the floor. Clay cradled sunny in his arms as he felt tears sting his eyes.
"It's okay,". He whispered, "it's all over now. You will be okay now."
Sunny threw her good arm around his neck and buried her head in his chest. She cried and shivered, her little body was quaking in his arms. Clay held her. It was all he could do.
Okay, to be honest, I could end the story right here. I felt that this chapter was a little choppy, lower quality than the rest. This was also my last prewritten chapter. I have the next chapter finished, and I have the very last chapter done. But between those two, I have some important things that need to be covered, and I'm not sure how to do it. I'm having a hard time getting from point A to B. You see, it's been a long time since I read wof, and when I sit down to write, the story dosent just come to me like it used to. I am beating my head against a wall as I try to think of how to write it.
So, in short, I feel like this could end it. But maybe I'm wrong. Do you think the story has gone far enough? Or do you think it is incomplete? Please let me know.
