Answering Your reviews:
Okay folks thanks for the support on this story over the past 6 or so months and I do apologise for the slow updates in the past, I was a school student and was trying to write 9K chapters in my spare time which was very limited as it was and that was making me make many Grammatical and Spelling Errors. However due to me now working on Chapter's solely from home and with Google Documents I'm able to get Chapters out there sooner as you may have noticed with the past 2 or 3 chapters. Google Docs also helps me catch any other errors so basically every ridiculous or funny Harry Potter, Name, Place or Spell. I will be going through Part 1-5 using Google Docs once more to go over any errors once again. But I've got a couple of reviews and I want to answer some of their questions or problems.
First of all
Ale74: I'm happy that you really liked the Hogesmade chapter, I'm not really a Romance writer (Kind of funny seeing as I've set up 3 future relationships already. Rolls eyes) so I wasn't sure how enjoyable people would find that chapter as I was doubting myself the entire way which is why it was a bit shorter than most chapters. And don't you worry I shall be updating this story as soon as I can, I'm already 2K words into Part 9 and this is going to be a long chapter, I can promise you this (I'm aiming for another 20K Chap)
Kyu9930: Hey Kyu9930 onto your Nitpicking. Do not worry you aren't, other people have complained about it to and by the end of Part 3 or 4 it's gone other than the occasional slip up from Harry or Samuel. You also get an answer to why she's called that in Part 5. Should I have included that in Part 1? Probably. But it flowed better in Part 5 which is why it's there. Other than that I do hope you are enjoying the story.
Guest: First thing I want to say is thanks, I want to try and make my story unique and I do what everything to be believable within the world. Thank you for mentioning how the story jumps around, to answer the Harry Dumbledore conflict. Harry didn't have a proper chance to voice his emotions at that point as Tracey was jumping down his throat. But if you could, would you be able DM me if you have an account and let me know other places where it does that so I can explain it or fix it. Now I completely get your point about Metamorphmagus which is why I never made her a proper one and Spoiler Alert for later Chapters: I plan on removing the ability giving her a fixed appearance. End of Spoiler The reason I actually wrote it in the first place was to deal with inconsistency in Part 1 because I was Lazy and because it allowed me to give her two Fanon Hair Colors Blond and Brown which she inherited from her Mum and Das respectively.I hope you can look past the Daphne thing for a little bit longer and continue to enjoy the rest of the Story
Thanks for the reviews, they really do help me improve as a Writer and especially in this story's case, makes me feel good about Writing it. I'm also writing a Harry potter X Miraculous Tales of Ladybug and Cat Noir fic at the moment which has shorter chapters and that I'm moving through rather swiftly; I would love it if some folk went and checked it out, it's called Miraculous Harry.
Also Here's a Prlogue for Part 9
ADF Part 9- Prologue
Looking around the library I sighed as it was almost completely void of any other students. Most of Ravenclaw were using our own personal common room Library or were watching Harry and the Quidditch team down at the Quidditch Pitch, the first match of the Season was at the Weekend after all.
Reading through my book I searched for any possibility about what the Headmaster was hiding in the school, the other two were looking too well when Harry wasn't at Practise anyway.
Then I heard the familiar sound of a Chair scraping against the up I saw Hermione Granger sitting down so I said as quietly possible "Nice to see you Hermione" she jumped up in fright, the poor girl and said "Oh, Daphne it's just you"
I giggled slightly which was very unlike me and said"Yeah, how are you doing after last Friday night" She rubbed her arms and said "I'm doing good, jacob is being really nice and friendly and is actually telling Ron off and even Ron has stopped being such a Nuisance" I faked fainted and said "Now that's a surprise"
Looking at her busy hair I said "So where are they?" She gave out a loud snort, "Them? Go anywhere near a library without me dragging them? Don't make me laugh!"
She started giggling before asking "What about you? I thought you would be with Harry and Mr Malfoy at the Quidditch practise" I shuddered and said "Hell no, I hate Flying and being on broom's I love that Harry and Samuel love it so much but I ain't a fan."
Grinning at me she said "Oh almost fell off the broom in my first proper Quidditch Practise" I laughed and said "I did fall of my broom the first time I went on one by myself before 1st year, had it not been for Harry's quick reflexes I would have seriously Injured myself. The entirty of first year he had to defend me from Madam Hooch who wondered why I didn't want to fly."
She laughed but then said "No offense Daphne but I have some homework that I'm actully behind on that I need to catch up on."
I waved her off and said "None taken, I should probaly go any how, the Boys will be finished with their flying by now anyway" I closed the book and carried it back to its shelf and made amental note of the shelf number before leaving the Libary.
Anyway until Part 9 comes out. Goodbye for now.
