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Hey everyone. I know I said I may rewrite it, but I decided to just end it. I did genuinely enjoy writing this at one point, but my passion for it just died out. It became boring and more of a chore than a fun activity. I did want to continue writing, but stopped.

Now inspired from the author, Pungent, I think I may as well show you all what I had planned for the story. And rewrite. They will be split off into sections.


Rewrite

For the rewrite I was going to change part of Fenrir's past and general personality. There were many things I was trying to do with his personality but didn't know what direction to pull him in, so I scrambled it around.

Personality

I had intentions of making him more of a serious character than what I originally presented. Fenrir was essentially going to be a more cold person and more analytical, he would occasionally warm up to those he's close with but overall stay a bit of a cold individual, being very blunt and straightforward person(he was still going to hide that he was from a separate world because he knew people would think he is insane). I was going to make him more impatient and more prone to outbursts of anger in which he would get physically violent with people, losing his analytical exterior. He would be more patient with friends. There was also another idea that he would be a very prideful person, but I never knew how to go about it and I still don't know how I would have.

Backstory

As for his past, I was going to scrap him having a sister and make him an only child. His father was supposed to be a mercenary who always pushed Fenrir to be a capable fighter and his mother died during a forsworn raid. He and his father would remain close but slightly distant as Fenrir aged into adulthood.

Fenrir and his mother had a mixed relationship. They would often argue and fight, but it would usually be mended whenever they had days outside. Despite this he was still close with his mother. His mother died in a forsworn raid (as already said) when he was 15.

Before being introduced to the main questline Fenrir was to join the companions and become the harbinger.

He would not discover he was dragonborn until he was at least 22. He would join the dawnguard shortly after the main questline and only stay as a member of Isran's inner circle, never rising to leadership. The Dragonborn dlc never began before Fenrir was sent to Fiore (foreshadowing).

After the main questline he would join with the college, increasing his general skill with magic. Soon after that, he would finish up with the thieves guild. Nothing happens with the dark brotherhood. He reforms the blades, but does not kill Paarthurnax.

Story Rewrite

Fenrir and Valerica arrive in Fiore the same way they did in the original. The only difference is that the encounter doesn't end up with a fight between Fenrir and Natsu, as Fenrir understands he did teleport himself into the middle of a fight. Bora still escapes. Fenrirs instead of being assisted by Vaermina would instead be assisted by the Ideal masters who have wiggled their way inside his head. Fenrir never learns Requip, but does learn more from Durnehviir.

During the events of the first season, as for the rewrite, everything goes as the original story with the minor character change and Fenrir only showing mastery in lightning magic, while being poorer in ice and fire magic. Fenrir was to go with Lucy and Natsu to Everlue's mansion and assist in breaking in, making his proficiency in stealth apparent.

The lullaby arc was intended to go very differently. Instead of a deadly flute, Eisenwald intended to use one of Hermaeus Mora's black books to suck in the entire town of clover. Because Fenrir is yet to encounter Miraak, he doesn't know what it is. Valerica is present for the event and is able to identify the book.

In between this, Fenrir goes on a mission with Erza (character relationship development. No intention of shipping.) and they track down Bora on accident after being hired to shut down a smuggling ring inside of a city.

During the Galuna Island arc, this is where more elements of Nirn start appearing (dremora at the moon alter and a little bit of Azura). Erza, Lucy, Gray, and Natsu see the dremora but Fenrir keeps them in the dark as to what they actually are until he decides they should know.

From here to the attack on Fairytail arc I have nothing planned out. I wanted to focus on the bigger events and worry about the filler stuff after I figured the rest out.

The first part of when the team sees the guild in ruins stays the same. Instead of Valerica getting attacked by Gajeel it's Fenrir. The match ends in a draw and Fenrir is pissed about the ambush. Makarov and the others try to calm him down but fail. Valerica is forced to put a calm spell on him. At some point, Lucy gets kidnapped and Fenrir leads an assault on Phantom Lord. After the assault Phantom counters as usual. Fenrir this time will not pull a Deus Ex Machina and let Erza handle the Jupiter canon. Fenrir boards the guild hall mech with Natsu, Elfman and Gray. He still meets Sol, and after Sol triggers memories involving his mother's death. Fenrir almost kills Sol, and would have if not for Aria interrupting him. They fight and Fenrir wins only barely.

For the Loke arc I didn't have much planned but wanted to keep the original Idea to a degree. For the most part not much was going to change from what I had planned, which just about brings us up to speed of where the last chapter is. The only thing I was going to change is the mention of Vaermina.


Intentions For the Story After Rewrite

Fenrir is still contacted by Vaermina during this time and ends up having a story arc associated with him. The guild follows him around while he tries to figure out who he is seeing in his dreams. It was at this point I intended to bring out an OC who practiced in oneiromancy. The OC would peer into Fenrir's mind when he sleeps to make the Visions face clearer. It was Miraak. Miraak escapes Waking Dreams at some point. Fenrir not knowing who it was describes the mask he saw to Valerica. This leads to a manhunt in which Fenrir tries to locate Miraak without knowing what he's getting in to. A fight ensues between the two, in which Fenrir gets knocked unconscious after Miraak exhausted Fenrir and knocks him unconscious for a time.

Valerica takes Fenrir back to Magnolia where he recover. The guild gets ready to head out to fight Miraak but is stopped by Fenrir telling them that what they're doing is a dumb idea. That's all I had planned for the time being, but intended to expand further on that. What I intended was for Miraak to fake his death and become a recurring antagonist for a few arcs until he dies.

During the Tower of Heaven arc I quite clearly hinted at Fenrir replacing Erza to be sucked into the Lacrama. Fenrir was I meant to be hard to capture with card tricks and this causes Trinity Raven to be sent out early. That's all I planned until I got to the arc.

The battle of Fairy Tail is the exact same, just with Fenrir.

Lastly is the Nirvana Arc. This is where everyone was going to meet Durnehviir (after the rewrite). Fenrir is asked if he is a dragon slayer "if you're asking if I kill dragons, then I used to. I haven't killed one since I got here." They ask what kind of dragon Durnehviir is and Durnehviir tells them he is "a standard dragon, just one who has an interest in necromancy."

Because of this team Natsu begins to feel uncomfortable around Fenrir because of Durnehviir being a dragon of necromancy. Despite Fenrir explaining that Durnehviir wasn't his only dragon teacher, they still feel a large sense of discomfort around him from that point on.


This is all I had planned and all of it was constantly changing around with ideas I liked and disliked. The Nirvana Arc I went through 2 separate times, and Fenrir's personal arc I went through at least 4 or 5. I only gave out general information of what I had planned and some intricate details. I think it was because of this I got tired of the story.

Anyway, thank you for sticking with the story like you did and I am grateful. I always saw fanfiction as a fun hobby, but also as a way to express my imagination when two world meet. Thank you for being here, and I don't plan on leaving the scene yet. Bye and have a wonderful day