First of all, I owe an apology to all who expected a new chapter of this fic, unfortunately this is not the case.

I have decided to make this announcement for several reasons, but I think that something better can be achieved than what I am doing and I know that many liked the concept, but I honestly believe that it could have been done better.


First: Argument not established at all

The first chapter of this fic was written by the first thing that came to mind that was not modern firearms for a gate story, was somewhat improvised and I was writing it according to what occurred to me without an order or an objective.

As a result, chapters came out of which I didn't even know that something was going to happen that made me write some things that I later regretted.

We can say that this was a product of bad planning and is something I want to correct.


Second: The grammar

It is not surprising and I have already been stressed, the grammar becomes very bad and I accept that when I read it again it is very embarrassing not to have corrected certain errors, I know that English is not my main language, but I should make an effort not to stab the dictionary.


Third: Not Clear Concepts

When I decided to introduce the intervention of God / Allah in history, I was not very clear about the worldbuilding with which I was going to address it (how would they intervene, when would they do it, why would they do it?) As well as other issues related to mythology and religion.

Summary, I didn't even know his role in the story

In addition to these three factors there are others, such as:Characters and Historical errors

(Although I will accept it, I did not mind doing some anachronisms and I think that a story in a movie, series, book or Fic will never be 100% historically correct, let's also accept it, some touches make the story more entertaining, real life is more boring than any fictional story)

So Quagsire, are you going to abandon this fic?

Yes and no

What I want to do is a rewrite, something that is entertaining and is the best possible writing within my abilities, although I know that I will not reach the level of a native speaker at the moment.

But Quagsire, then what would make sense to read the same thing again, but better written?

It would not make any sense, so I will make a different story, it will be at a time somewhat close but equally interesting with one of the most important events in the history of mankind.

Will you use the same characters?

I'm not sure, maybe yes, but most likely not, I want to have a well-made character token, so I want to have a pre-set script before writing.

When will you write this new story?

I would not know when because Valentine's Day and Carnivals are approaching in my country, I also injured my ankle training so I do not spend much time on my computer.

What will happen with Test of Faith?

I may regret it and follow it with this story, but I also accept if someone wants to continue it for me.

Any other questions can be left in the Reviews, again, sorry for the inconvenience, but I think that doing something that takes longer and this well done is better than something that is done in a hurry and without motivation.