It is that time again! It is time to make a bonus chapter on Dragon Ball: War Between Worlds. Basically, a bunch of information, such as mistakes, multipliers, and cut parts from the story.
Let's begin.
Mistakes I made
The first mistake I made in this story was that Capper and Raddis were the two starting main characters, which is a big no-no for a Fan Fiction. I should've started with Goku and Vegeta.
The second mistake I made was basically cutting Capper and Raddis out from the story and making them as useless as dirt. I was originally intending to make them very important to the plot.
The third mistake I made was not having Luffy use his Conqueror's Haki. I had so many characters to deal with, that I forgot, despite One Piece being the 2nd anime I know and love best. It honestly would've done a big deal against the Voidic Beings.
Those are all of the mistakes I have acknowledged. There are probably many more I haven't realized, but these are the three mistakes you probably have noticed in both fanfictions.
Now to move on to power scaling and multipliers.
Super Saiyan - x50
Super Saiyan 2 - x500
Super Saiyan 3 - x2,000
Legendary Super Saiyan - x50,000
Super Saiyan God - x20,000
Super Saiyan 4 - x408,500
Super Saiyan Blue - x1,000,000
Super Saiyan 5 - x2,000,000
Super Saiyan Blue Evolution - x20,000,000
Majin Evolution = x100,000,000
Ultra Instinct Omen - x2,000,000,000
Ultra Instinct - x50,000,000,000
Super Saiyan White - x472,000,000,000,000
Ultra Instinct Stage 2 - x500,000,000,000,000
Divine Namekian - x500,000,000,000,000
Super Saiyan White Evolved - x9,440,000,000,000,000
Primal Evolution - x5,000,000,000,000,000,000
Ultra Instinct Stage 3 - x50,000,000,000,000,000,000
Super Saiyan X - x1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
Ultra Instinct Stage 4 - x1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
Omni Evolution - x1e+54
God Form - x1e+200
Voidic Form - x ?
Fusion Dance - person1 power level + person2 power level x 500
Potara Fusion - person1 power level x person2 power level
Arhenahin Fusion - person1 power level x person2 power level x 10,000
POWER SCALING
1. Goku (Voidic Form)
2. Akuma \ Omni Gogito (Second Time)
3. God
4. Arhenahin
5. Tiias
6. Tier Sevens
7. Tier Sixes/Omni Gogito (First time)
8. Tier Fives / Nygyn
9. Tier Fours / Zalama
10. Tier Threes / Goku / Vegeta
11. Tier Twos (Oblivion post-resurrection)
12. Tier Ones (Oblivion pre-resurrection)
13. Tier Zeros (Ahton and the other Founders)
Cut Story
I am going to reveal some parts of the story's plot that I never put in for different reasons.
My first idea for the story is that Capper and Raddis were going to become very strong, and eventually surpass Goku and Vegeta in the story. Then, they'd be the ones to take down Akuma. I realized the OCs surpassing the main character so fast wouldn't make much sense, though. I was going to make the excuse that it is generations ahead of Goku and Vegeta, so they had a lot of potential.
I could still make side stories involving the aftermath of War Between Worlds, but that will not lead into an entire new Fan Fiction.
Gohan was also going to get a moment to shine, where he unlocks Omni Evolution and combines it with Mystic, making it even more powerful than Goku and Vegeta's. He was going to remind Goku that he is a part of his bloodline too. I honestly regret not putting that in. It would've reminded the readers how much potential Gohan truly had and how he could've surpassed Goku and Vegeta at some point.
As for the crossovers, I was originally going to have the main characters be mixed between timelines and have them explore each other's locations and be confused to why they are there. I wanted to include this as well, but I decided I didn't want to do it, as at the time, I thought it'd make the Fan Fiction overly long. I regret not putting this in as well.
For Vegeta's death, I had a little document saved with just this one scene to save it for later. Unfortunately, I forgot about it like an idiot and never included it. It would've fit Vegeta's character more to do this. I'll show it here.
"Vegeta," Goku says, "I guess... this is it...?"
Vegeta smirks at Goku. "It's been fun, Kakarot. Not even the afterlife will be able to save us now."
Vegeta yells, as a yellow outline begins to surround him. Goku's eyes widen when he realizes what it is. "No, Vegeta... You couldn't..."
He vanishes behind Akuma, placing a hand on his shoulder. "Kakarot, save yourselves!" He forcefully teleports him and Akuma away.
"VEGETA!" Goku yells, holding his hand out in desperation.
Akuma turns around toward Vegeta, whose body is glowing yellow. He looks up, entering Omni Evolution. "Disappear."
Then, Vegeta would've done the same sucidal explosion that he did against Buu, but it wouldn't have worked that well against Akuma. Goku would've gotten angry, having the vision with Vegeta, and then getting the Voidic Powers.
It's also really crazy how much your original idea for a story can change over time. I sent one of my friends a PREVIEW of Omni Gogeta fusing against Tiias. I am going to show a comparison between the old preview, and how it turned out.
Old Preview
"FUU... SION... HAA!" Goku and Vegeta's fingertips connect, a bright light engulfing the center of everything.
"This power..." Capper says, shocked. "It's like... it's like it's almost Omnipotent!"
Omni Gogeta levitates toward the ground, as his glowing hair waves back and forth. "Capper, Raddis, everyone, allow us to show you, our combined power."
"Amazing!" Naruto says, in his Six Paths Mode. "I've never seen someone so powerful! We can beat this guy!"
How it turned out
"Arhenahin: FUSION!" The two of them say. Their auras connect into one, as trillions of Omniverses begin to shake around them. They flicker, pillars of light shooting out of the ground everywhere.
White rays of light are visible, as a dome of energy surrounds the span of millions of Omniverses. Bright flashes flicker everywhere, as Tiias grunts, punching the ground to stop himself from being sent back.
A bright, long-haired figure levitates down the clouds. Pure energy curls off of it, as the hair waves back and forth. It gains a galactic aura, as it opens its eyes, them being fiery.
"This power..." Capper says, shocked. "It's like... it's like it's almost Omnipotent!"
Omni Gogito levitates toward the ground, as his glowing hair waves back and forth. "The fusion... has returned! We are neither Goku or Vegeta, Gogeta or Vegito! We are... GOGITO!"
"Amazing!" Naruto says, in his Six Paths Mode. "I've never seen someone so powerful! We can beat this guy!"
The preview I sent my friend wasn't complete anyway. I feel like how it turned out was a lot better than the old preview, however, that is only my opinion.
I was actually going to have Gohan die instead of Vegeta, but I felt like Vegeta's death would have much more of an emotional impact than Gohan's. (Unless you're a Gohan fan, of course.)
I was going to have Gogito come in later, and only once. He would kill Akuma and end the entire war. However, I wanted to make the fight more rewarding in the end and have the Fan Fiction go on for a little longer, so I decided against it.
Remember how Luffy first encountered Naruto in the story, that Luffy tried to fight him, but Naruto stopped it? Before, I was going to have the anime characters fight each other out of accusations. That would provoke needless fighting, though. It would've resulted in some cool fight scenes, but I decided to rather not do it.
I kind of regret not having Dragon Ball: War Between Worlds have Dragon Ball Aftermath in its title. The name should've been: "Dragon Ball Aftermath: The Final Chapter". It has a better ring to it, in my opinion.
Anyway, that is all for right now. As for Dragon Ball Super: After Broly, it is not canceled. I am taking a break from writing and am kind of burnt out on it after all this time. Until next time, I will see ya!
~ Scruffy
