hello everybody, it's been a while huh , I'm super sorry that I have been away lately. This was not planned at all. I been super busy with work now ever since Covid-19 hit and my work is considered essential so my hours are very long.
However, This does NOT mean I'm dropping this story. Hell no, I'm going to finish this story. However, I been re reading everything as of late and I figured out what the main issues I can see.
Namely I been using "Chekhov's gun" and thanks to ChampionMike957, I been making the characters swear WAY to much. So here's what's gonna happen for the rest of the story.
1. All characters will act how they do from their original series but still be somewhat original. I gotta do this particularally for Sakura, Asuna, Hinata, Orihime and Saeko since they already have their own lovers in their own series ( Naruto, Bleach and HOTD).
2. Venom will be more like the comic book and act more vicious and brutal when he takes over Venom. I'm dropping the whole food arguement between him and Issei entirely because at this point it's just annoying. Expect Venom to be a lot more brutal and vicious like his comic book counterpart.
3. I'm getting rid of the whole "Shy" persona around Basara and Mio. Looking at it now, it doesn't make sense at all for Basara to instantly become flustered when Mio is naked around him but is completely fine when he's with Chisato, Yuki or Landred. They will act fine around one another and only will get flustered when they are doing something sexual. I don't wanna spoil anything but there will be a reason why this will happen in future chapters. All I will say is that it involves Chisato and Sapphire to some capacity.
4. Similar to Venom, Ghost Rider will act more like his counterpart with originality to some capacity. There's a whole plethora of powers he could use and I gotta start now.
5. I'll be breaking the chapters up into volumes for easier reading. Rather than having it be "Life 35- Title here" it will be titled as. "Volume 5, Life 3- Insert title here". This will be for the readers and my self to break up and allow easier way to know what arc is going on.
6. I noticed that I been using ALOT of Chekhov's gun lately when it comes to the Harem. I set up Yubelluna, Reiri and others and then dropped them. That has to stop. I'm also gonna stick to the LN too and add the important ones who show up in the DXD/Shinmai LN Hopefully I got the FINAL, COMPLETE Harem list below:
Issei's Harem: Rias, Akeno, Asia, Xenovia, Irina, Koneko, Ravel, Ingilvd Leviathan, Rossweisse, Roygun Belphegor, Tsubasa, Kuroka, Homura, Yubelluna, Raynare, Asuna, Tohka, Yasaka, Aine, Medusa, Elminhilde, Hinata, Sakura, Azuki, Sinon, Saeko, Tearju, Laila, Ikaruga, Hikage, Haruka and Seekveria.
Basaras Harem: Mio, Maria, Zest, Yuki, Kurumi, Chisato, Sapphire, Grayfia, Aki, Landred, Nanao, Ino Yamanaka, Tsunade, Rin, Yumi, Asuka, Miyabi, Orihime, Yurishia, Raphaline, Boa Hancock, Ezra, Celis, Kalawarner, Mieri, Lucy, Rangiku, Sona, Reiri, Miyuri, Chifusa, and Nel.
This will without a doubt be the LAST time there will be an Authors note. Again guys I'm super sorry for the delay.
Remember, be safe and wash your hands! We're all in this together!
I'll see you all soon!
