Alright, I want you all to be honest here with this story and Kingdom of Love. I am gonna put it blunt because I am not gonna beat around the bush.

Do you think it's gone sour?

Now what I mean by that is, I have been reading from the beginning to the end, and it's gone exactly where Haunting Past, (the original story before this).

Down hill.

It happened a long time ago, actually, I would say from about Chapter 7 is when it really hit that point. So, what I am going to do is take a deep breath and rethink and rewrite this story over.

But I really want you guys to decide.

Finish this disaster?

Or do a much more better, well-written, cooler rewrite that actually has a plot?

Let me know in the reviews or PM me.

Petrolhead1 skidding away.