Alright, I want you all to be honest here with this story and Kingdom of Love. I am gonna put it blunt because I am not gonna beat around the bush.
Do you think it's gone sour?
Now what I mean by that is, I have been reading from the beginning to the end, and it's gone exactly where Haunting Past, (the original story before this).
Down hill.
It happened a long time ago, actually, I would say from about Chapter 7 is when it really hit that point. So, what I am going to do is take a deep breath and rethink and rewrite this story over.
But I really want you guys to decide.
Finish this disaster?
Or do a much more better, well-written, cooler rewrite that actually has a plot?
Let me know in the reviews or PM me.
Petrolhead1 skidding away.
