Hey guys Valsi here. This is not a new chapter since I am currently still doing the rewrite of this Story and that's why I post this.
I wanted to inform you guys that it will take a bit longer until I finished the rewrite since I find that this story had multiple problems with how I wrote it. For example I think my OCs are way too shallow and I want to try to give them more depth. Another is the way I just gave Train the Sharingan and made it totally OP. Something like the Sharingan can alone change the world of DxD and has massive potential when I bring it into the story and make it part of Train's character Arc. I will also think that I focused too much on the Training Room and instead should have made him do stuff like quests or interact with characters in Kuoh Town, like Issei or even the Fallen Angels (I have no plan what to do with them yet). I'll probably also rethink certain abilities I'd give to Train. For example, I think I will take away Train's powers of Noctis and instead give him the Hiraishin no Jutsu for various reasons.
I hope you guys understand it and continue to read it. I try to update on a regular schedule which is at least once every 5 days. (The first 3 Chapters are already rewritten. Major changes from Chapter 3 onwards.)
Now I will reply to the Reviews of you who have already posted them. I will reply to all the Reviews until I have finished the rewrite directly when I read them, except for guest Reviews they have to wait until I bring out a new chapter.
Plums: Yes it was and yes it is. The DxD part will come and the Gamer will come back too.
0vrLrd71:
1. I made it so that he can only enter the Dungeon from his house and later he can create Dungeons freely.
2. I thought I only used the first person… I'll fix it during the rewrite as well as other mistakes.
3. I won't allow him to gain all the Mangekyou abilities. However, he can gain two additional Mangekyou abilities when he inherited them after gaining the EMS.
Blazing heart frigid soul:
1. He will get to fight Dante and Vergil, and he will learn quite a bit from them.
2. You're right. I did some more research on UBW and it gets more and more OP. Unlike Shirou, if Train gets this ability he will be almost impossible to defeat by other weapon wielders (expect for gun users). If I would give it to him he could learn all weapon fighting styles in the world. Yeah, Train doesn't have the problems that limited Shirou which limited him a great deal. With the current combinations of all the abilities, Train will become able to copy almost every technique he comes across.
3. Since I am planning to make UBW become part of Canis Lykaon this ability won't cost as much MP, also the world won't try to erase the swords he creates. So, you will see swords raining down onto Train's opponents.
Guest: That's a horrible description… but not inaccurate.
Renextronex: She will know that as soon as Train shows them what he is truly capable of.
Thetruerorschach: Kind of forgot about that… Boruto never really caught my interest as Naruto did. I did look into it and that ability won't make it into my story because it's boring compared to other abilities, but thanks for pointing it out.
The lord of fate: Maybe. It's one of my favorite types of magic and seeing how many dragons appear in the story it would be a good ability for him to have.
Fushes: He will use more guns and more than just pistols and fitting skills.
belamy20: I have to agree with you I didn't use the potential of the Sharingan's Hypnotic abilities and try to bring them more into the story. As for Issei… he will help him, but Issei will more be like a student to him and later a rival. This story won't focus on Issei's Harem since Train will do more his own thing than just follow the canon storyline. For example, he will take part in Asia's rescue, Riser and Excalibur, but the Underworld Trainings Arc won't happen and instead, there will be an OC Arc. Also in the Kyoto Arc, I can promise that Train will be the main center of the story.
Bridd: There will be 3 to 4 OC in the Harem of Train and no more. I will mostly use OC that appear for Plot points or new opponents. Otherwise, I will bring in a couple of OC who will join Train's group... and of course the OC of my pal who will use Vritra.
Chyllen: The ability to slay gods becomes only clear after he mastered Canis Lykaon. The System will force him to do quite much… You're right that the party was pretty unbalanced with only damage dealers and that's why Marie will come in as a Supporter. As for your ability suggestions… Harry Potter wasn't really a fan of it and Ruby… yeah, that could work. Also definite what you mean with OP, at the end of DxD Issei is able to take on a Super Devil who are OP compared to most of the other beings and I want Train to match Issei in the end. I introduced the Training Room because it is an interesting place where matchups can happen that normally shouldn't, but you're right that I focused on its way to much what I hope to change in the Rewrite.
Inritus: I admit that the conversation wasn't the best I wrote, but to be fair I didn't change all that much in that chapter since I at first only wanted to fix a couple of mistakes. Yeah, the Devil went down easily because it was Train's first encounter with the Supernatural and I thought that would be a good way for Train to get the attention of the Devils. The guns he uses are named during chapter 3. I actually didn't consider giving him a gunblade because I wanted him to wield a Scythe as his main weapon. As for a favorite gun… I don't have one. I'm doing Archery and only decided on guns in this fanfiction because in our world it is the most common weapon yet rarely used in DxD.
AJ Harvey: I too love the game and lore of DMC, but I won't give Train anything that could make him part of Sparda's Bloodline because it would create quite the problems with what I have planned. Train's family will later in this story play multiple bigger parts and him suddenly having these powers wouldn't make sense when the rest of his family hasn't. But you can count on seeing Train use multiple weapons from DMC.
And for all who made it down here I have a question:
With what kind of animal should Train make a summoning contract?
