Original Posted On: Feb. 26, 2020
Beta Read by: Heckelman88, Crowfeast, Tachyon99, xhope14x, Neostardustdragon101
THANK ALL OF YOU WHO VOTED, OPTION B IS THE MOST VOTED OPTION, AND NOW I HAVE PLANNED ACCORDINGLY. SORRY FOR THE CONFUSION AND I WILL ACCEPT ALL HATRED FOR THIS.
I did that so I could finish this chapter, it is short, yes, but it effects the story as a whole. and it seems that Asia being saved by Issei and the Uzumaki girls will be what I am going to be doing, so look forward to it.
However, I did receive a review, that I will not tolerate.
It was sent in by a guest, and this is what they said:
"Guest chapter 30 . 18h ago
You are a pathetic piece of trash. You wanna know why? It's because you're promoting child pornography between Naruto and someone with a child-like body, especially since that someone is a child. Seriously, anybody who think otherwise will just keep sucking your dick with vigorous, blind loyalty since they like to read stories written by sick fucks like you. If there was a comparison between you and the monkey, I'd read the monkey's story since it'll be better than yours in every way. With that out of the way, please proceed to kill yourself in the most gruesome way. Thanks."
What I asked was pertaining to Asia's future. I never once mentioned it was for her to join Naruto's harem, it had nothing to do with his harem, so for this person to send this, and then tell me to kill myself, show me that there are some real degenerates on this website, and not all of them are writers. Don't believe me, I decided to let this review stay up, because I am setting an example.
If you are going to complain, make sure your facts are correct and relevant to what is being talked about.
Sorry about that, to those who are innocent, I'm very sorry, please enjoy the chapter.
Review Response:
Crywolfseven: I am happy I did as well.
Yahiko 8D: No, Anko won't go to Issei.
Le Phoque Blanc: Yeah, when Ddraig sees Naruto it will be chaos. And Anko was a last-minute addition as I went through so many alternatives to cover for Koneko/Shirone.
AxeMan18: Yeah. Maybe. I am actually doing shorter chapters until I feel like I can do another 5K chapter.
Guest: May the dead Biblical God give mercy to devils. This was hilarious.
Darth56: Thank you man.
Darkmaster10000000: No snakes irl. I would rather die. Yeah, I also wonder what Raynare and her followers will do.
Jupiter50: Thank you.
WindCitySlayer1: Thank you.
Akuro361: Yeah, having Anko will be interesting with her 'bad girl' persona.
Calderoneric758: Yeah, Anko and Akeno are pretty close.
Have a Little Feith: I seriously thought you did hate it. Anko is a snake that was turned into a devil, sorry for not being clear.
Spark681: Thank you.
Dlowe265: Thank you man.
Grounded Forever: Is that a bad thing?
Autobot-Wolfsketch: Issei will be terrified of Anko when he meets her. As for now, Issei hasn't met Anko, due to her being in College and having a heavier homework load, and being a lazy person, she doesn't help with stray hunts.
Xemonon: No, Shirone and Xenovia won't become devils. WHY DOES EVERYONE TELL ME TO GET OVER MY FEAR OF SNAKES LIKE ITS AS EASY AS THROWING A ROCK!
Arraia: Thank you.
Chronosign: Read the end of the chapter.
Primarx: I hope I don't burn out either.
Guest: This is the DXD Anko, like how I have a DXD Tsunade and had a DXD Jiraiya.
Current Harem:
Zest, Gabriel, Lucoa, Serafall, Penemue
OKAY, LETS READ THIS SHIT! I DON'T OWN NARUTO OR HIGHSCHOOL DXD!
"Hey" = Speaking
'Hey' = Thinking
'Hey' = Memory
"Hey"= Sacred Gear/ Communication link/ Tailed Beast
Chapter 30: Begging for Another
Kuoh…
Rias watched Shirone and Xenovia eat outside from the ORC clubroom window.
'They declined, but they didn't even hear me out.' She thought as she shook her head. 'I shouldn't be thinking like this. They have every right to be weary of me, I am a devil and as of late the peerage system has been abused to the point that the head of the Yokai faction would probably wage war.'
"That isn't all."
Rias blinked and looked around.
'Am… no… I could just be over thinking this.' Rias thought as she walked away from the window and sat down, pulling her drawer open, seeing a few books.
The Make-Out Trilogy, a few of the Naruto: Light Novels, Tales of a Gutsy Ninja, and her childhood favorite, The Golden Protector.
Rias smiled at the fond memories and grabbed the children's book.
'I wish I had someone like this.' Rias thought as she read the book. 'Someone like him would be a God send.'
There was a knock at the door.
"Buchou," Akeno called out before she entered the room, seeing Rias nose to nose with a book. "I have a report for you."
"Oh, hello, my dear fallen." Anko said as she slinked behind Akeno, closing the door and caressing Akeno's stomach as she pressed her pelvis against Akeno's butt.
"Oh, Anko~" Akeno said with a blush. "Not in front of Buchou."
Anko pouted before leaning in, resting her chin on Akeno's shoulder, wrapping her other arm around Akeno's waist.
"Alright…" Anko whined.
Rias smiled as she watched her Queen and Rook show their love for one another, even if she didn't want to see its more intimate moments.
"What is it, Akeno?" Rias asked as she bookmarked her book and started paying attention.
"Well, Issei has made contact with a girl from the church." Akeno said, getting Anko's and Rias's attention.
"I'm listening." Rias said as she leaned onto her desk.
Few Days Later…
It was the weekend, and the Uzumaki Sisters were hard at work doing their homework with Zest tutoring them.
'They are getting better.' Zest thought proudly as she corrected their mock tests. 'Xenovia is better with numbers, Shirone is a literature genius, and Kuroka is better at sports.'
Zest couldn't be prouder of her children.
*KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK*
"XENOVIA!" a male shouted. "XENOVIA, PLEASE ANSWER THE DOOR, THIS IS AN EMERGENCY!"
"Is that…" Xenovia said as she looked up.
"It's Hyoudo," Shirone said, sensing who it was, "And… he is panicking."
"Hm, I wonder why?" Kuroka asked, starting to stand up but Zest stood up completely.
"I'll get it, finish your work you three," Zest said, Kuroka pouting as she sat down, really tired of doing her homework.
Zest walked to the door, making her rabbit ears vanish before answering the door to see Issei, gasping for air and wearing casual clothing.
"Sensei." Issei gasped.
"Hyoudo, what's wrong?" Zest asked with concern, seeing the blood soaking his clothing, showing stab wound signs but no stab wound.
Xenovia walked up, wondering what was going on, Issei seeing her.
"Xenovia, I need to talk to you, Kuroka, and Shirone!" Issei said as he collapsed to his knees, slamming his head into the floor.
Seeing the looks, Zest said, "Don't worry, I have something to do anyways, so I'll let the four of you talk."
Zest then walked further into the house while Xenovia, Shirone, and Kuroka all walked inside the living room with Issei following. However, unknown to the four, Zest was on the other side of the wall using the invisibility jutsu in order to listen in on the conversation.
"So, what's the matter, Hyoudo?" Kuroka asked as Xenovia had to continue doing homework, much to her chagrin.
"You have to help me. Asia was abducted by the fallen and they took her to the abandoned church in order to steal her Sacred Gear!" Issei exclaimed, getting the residents of the house to widen their eyes a bit in shock before they cooled their expressions in favor of confused looks.
"I'm sorry, Hyoudo, but we don't know what you're talking about." Xenovia responded from the table, getting a nod from Shirone and Kuroka.
"But Buchou told us that you told her you were yokai and an exorcist," Issei stated.
Zest's eyes narrowed and she subtly sent KI towards the girls, causing them to shiver as they knew Zest must have heard that and knew they were going to be punished later.
"Please…" Issei begged. "Please, help me save Asia. I will do anything. I will talk to Rias and have her leave you guys alone, but I need your help."
It was sort of pathetic.
Seeing this person begging them for help.
Xenovia, Kuroka, and Shirone wanted to help but didn't know if it was the right move.
Yes, saving an innocent human would be the right thing to do, but risking exposure to the devils and possibly breaking the treaty between them and the fallen made this a bit harder.
"Well, you can start by telling us what happened from the beginning," Shirone snipped, glaring slightly at the boy as she grabbed both of her older sister's hands.
A short time later…
Tsunade and Shizune were checking Misla again, as her Queen and Pawn.
"We could say you are fully recovered, but as a friend, I will say a few more days of bed rest, and then one more check-up and we will say fully recovered," Tsunade told her King, who smiled brightly.
"Thank you, Tsunade, Shizune," Misla said tearfully. "You two and Naruto have helped me and my son…"
Tsunade's phone went off.
"Sorry, give me a second," Tsunade said, slightly embarrassed as she pulled her phone out, seeing it was Zest. "Hello, Zest."
"Sorry to bother you, Lady Tsunade, but I'm going to need your help with a problem the girls have gotten themselves into." Zest said over the phone.
"Go on," Tsunade said as she left the room.
Kuoh…
Issei felt nervous as he sat across from Shirone while Xenovia continued doing her homework as Kuroka had left to make a call. However, unknown to Issei, Kuroka simply held her phone to her ear while she stood next to an invisible Zest who was making the real phone call.
He may be a pervert, who enjoyed the looks of any girl, but right now, he was a pervert on a mission.
Shirone was playing her Nintendo 3DS, A Link Between Worlds.
Xenovia was doing the rest of her homework, which her sisters had finished.
"So…" Issei said nervously, as he looked at Kuroka's and Shirone's tails and ears. "Yokai, huh?"
(Kuroka has one tail)
"So…" Shirone said mockingly. "Devil, huh?"
Issei felt bad.
"That's rude Shirone," Kuroka said as she came back from her "phone call" and flicked Shirone in the back of the head, "He is our guest and is asking for help, so be nice to him."
Issei felt relieved.
"But he is a pervert," Shirone said, glancing at Issei.
Shirone had told Kuroka about Issei, and while Kuroka didn't mind, she didn't want to be ogled at the moment.
All three sisters were wearing sweatpants and shirts as it was the weekend.
Zest had been wearing the same.
They were comfy and if they got damaged during training, they could easily be replaced.
"Anyway," Kuroka said, changing the topic, "I have a plan."
"Thank you," Issei said as he bowed. "Asia… she is a sweet girl, and doesn't deserve this."
"We know, you told us." Xenovia said softly as she finished her homework.
"We will help you, Hyoudo," Kuroka said as she sat down. "We have a family friend coming over to help, just in case shit goes south. You said her sacred gear was Twilight Healing, right?"
"Yes, it's a healing sacred gear," Issei replied, touching the torn uniform. "It was able to heal me, a devil."
The yokai in the room could feel how intense Issei felt about this with Senjutsu, while Xenovia couldn't.
"If what you said is true, then the fallen are stationed out in the old church building on the outskirts of town, so fighting won't be all bad," Kuroka said as she looked at her sisters and Issei. "However, we will need a barrier, just in case the Fallen try to flee, so we can keep them from getting away. That means I won't be fighting."
"That's fine," Xenovia said as she stood up, summoning Kubikiribocho, still damaged from her fight with Raynare, "I need to fix my partner anyway."
"Now, onto you, Hyoudo," Kuroka stated as she looked at the Pawn of Gremory, "What is your sacred gear?"
Issei summoned his gear, the dormant Boosted Gear, no different from the simpler Twice Critical.
"I was told my gear can double my strength every ten seconds," Issei said as he scratched his head. "I know, it's weak."
Kuroka touched the gear.
"It isn't weak," Kuroka stated sincerely, "Hyoudo, it will get stronger, but you have to find your resolve or else you will never get stronger."
Kuroka, her sisters, and the hidden Zest didn't know how right she would be, but for now, it doesn't matter.
"You think so?" Issei asked as he recalled his gear.
"Yes," Kuroka said honestly.
"So, this is part of the reason why you called me over?"
Shirone, Xenovia, Kuroka, and Issei turned around and saw Tsunade.
Issei felt horny, covering his nose as blood nearly gushed from it.
Tsunade still wore her traditional outfit, revealing a lot of cleavage.
'Okay, calm down. Calm down,' Issei chanted over and over again in his head.
"Pervert," Shirone droned out, the words metaphorically forming an arrow, shooting at Issei, stabbing him in the chest.
Tsunade hugged the girls before she turned her attention to include Issei as well.
"So, you have a little nun to save now," Tsunade said, having been briefed earlier, "And you want me to be her trainer after you save her, I guess I can do that. The yokai and Angel Factions have been trying to make something akin to the Evil Piece system, and she could be a part of my group if the Tarot Cards work." (1)
"Tarot cards?" Kuroka asked confused.
"Yeah, Yasaka wants to be able to have a reincarnation system in case there's a yokai genocide," Tsunade explained.
"Oh…" the three girls said.
"Okay back on topic, this nun…" Tsunade said as she sat down, looking at Issei.
Meanwhile…
Sona and Rias were playing chess at Sona's apartment.
"Do you think Issei will be alright?" Rias asked as she moved her Knight.
"I do." Sona said as she moved her Bishop.
"How so?" Rias asked, looking at the board, trying to figure out the best strategy. "He doesn't have much offensive abilities yet."
"I don't know, but something… powerful tells me he is going to be fine." Sona said softly, touching her temple.
Rias looked up from the board.
"That turtle dream again?" Rias asked, very concerned for her best friend and fellow King.
"Yeah, it hasn't happened in a while, but it is still… scary." Sona said.
For years, when Sona would be upset or worried, a turtle would appear in her dreams.
Though, it wasn't like any turtle she has ever seen.
It was massive, lavender and gray, lobster like shell with spikes in it and one eye permanently shut.
"What did it say?" Rias asked as she moved a pawn.
"He said… to not worry. Everything will be fine." Sona said as she evaluated the field.
"Okay." Rias said, paying attention to the board. "How are Lily and Oscar doing?"
Sona smiled fondly at those words.
Her niece and nephew, the children of her sister Serafall, were massive lights in her world.
"They are doing fine. They came over last week all happy and giddy." Sona said with a smile.
Rias nodded and then blinked.
"WAIT WHAT? THEY WERE OVER LAST WEEK?" Rias asked as she stood up, slamming her hands onto the table.
"Yes…?"
Rias growled.
"Those little monsters put super glue and itching powder in my panties." Rias stated angrily.
Sona had to stifle a laugh.
'So, that is why they wanted to see the ORC clubroom last week.' Sona thought, remembering the small children who were barely two years old asking her to show them Rias's clubroom. 'But when is the question.'
Rias saw Sona's attempts at hiding her laughter and crossed her arms, pouting.
"But you got it off, right?" Sona asked as she regained her composure.
"Of course, I did, and almost destroyed my body as I had to burn it off with PoD." Rias stated angrily as she sat down, Sona making her move.
"Well, then there isn't anything to get mad over." Sona replied.
Meanwhile…
Ophis sat alone, watching over her base.
Naruto had made it a while back, and she was currently housing a few people of questionable backgrounds.
First, was some kid named Vali and his group of vagabonds.
Then there were some heirs to the old Satan's living in her base.
And there were more, but those groups stood out more at the moment.
'Hm, as long as they don't cause me or Ashura trouble, it should be fine.' Ophis thought as she pulled out a recent photo.
It was of her, Naruto, Zest, Penemue, Gabriel, Serafall, Lucoa, Yasaka, Amaterasu, Kunou, Misla, Sairaorg, Tsunade, Shizune, Jiraiya, Kushina, Oscar, Lily, Joseph, Mary, Xenovia, Kuroka, and Shirone.
They were all huddled together on Genbu, the picture having been taken by Naruto's clone.
'Hm,' Ophis thought with a small smile. 'My family has gotten very big.'
She put away the photo.
'I love them all very much.' She thought as she entered her base, to do her job.
Chapter 30, DONE!
Okay, short chapter, yes, but it is set up for next chapter, however, things will hopefully be different.
Like The Engulfing Silence said at the end of Devil Ninja chapter 56, "If you give Frodo Baggins a lightsaber, then you need to give Sauron the Death Star."
I will proceed to make Raynare's group stronger than they are in canon is what I am saying.
1 This is an idea by Chronosign, giving him all the credit for he worked very hard on this. He asked if the Yokai could use the Tarot Cards like the Brave Saint System and the Evil Pieces. And this is what he came up with.
World: King
Empress: Queen
Strength: Rook
Magician: Bishop
Chariot: Knight
Fool: Pawn
Lovers: would link grant a single ally a shared feature, like the 6 pains linked sight for example.
Devil: would be when a rook, bishop, or knight gain the power of a pawn.
Death: would be when they can avoid certain one time while in enemy territory.
Tower: would be where there gain a higher level of clarity to where they can predict luck.
Hierophant: can use low to mid-level telekinesis.
Emperors: can teleport to without the use of a magic circle.
Hanged Man: can do castling with any piece from the same peerage.
Temperance: can gains an affinity for an extra element based attack.
Sun: gains resistance to fire, ice, and water attacks.
Moon: increases the users over all speed the higher they are.
Wheel of Fortune: gains at least two different mutation effects (extremely rare).
Judgement: can gain access to dark chakra nature.
High Priestess: can gain access to light chakra nature.
Justice: can absorb damage and reflect back at the attacker with 2 to 5 times the original strength, can only be used 3 times a day at most or risk bodily harm.
Hermit: can turn invisible to enemies for a certain amount of time depending on the user but can always be seen by allies of the King.
Star: can instinctively tell when what part of the peerage is in trouble and can sense emotions and potentially lies.
I say I would love to do this, but which ones besides the top ones that are representative of the Evil Piece System should be used, let me know in a review.
AS usual, thank you for reading, thank you for the idea Chronosign, and please leave a review, even if you hated it.
