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An Unexpected Meeting
My name is Nev, and I'm 14 years old. I have brown hair with some natural pink strands which is really rare but I inherited it from my mother before she abandoned me and my father and my three brothers who all hate me because I remind them of her. I have blue eyes with silver sparkes, and am tall, thin but fit. I don't work out or wear leggings like most girls in my class because I find that super superficial and boring, I'm happy the way I a,m. My hobbies are singing, horse riding, reading, shooting bows, and I love to write poetry and novels. I'm also a good singer, despite never taking lessons, but I'm too shy to sing in front of everyone. I'm beautiful, but nobody notices that and I don't believe it. I'm pretty nerdy, and nobody wants to hang out with the nerds. Also, I am very shy and very lonely. I love fanfictions, but everyone laughs at me for that. I am av ry good riter.
It was a normal day, and I was avoiding Jessica and her friends (or followers like I called them) on my way out of AP English. They had spent their day laughing at my clothes. Just because I couldn't afford their fancy Hollister and what not. I don't need to waste money like that.
I was walking down the halls to the street, to walk home because money was tight and we couldn't afford public transport. I passed Jessica and her friends and they bullied me like everyday, so I ran out crying. I ran down the street to the beach where I hide behind a palm tree, until JUAN SANTIAGO appears in front of me and helps me up.
He smiles. "Hey beautiful. Why are you crying? What's your name?"
"Nevaeh Brohkln Diamnd Starlight," I stutter. "Oh my god, you're Juan Santiago!"
He kisses me.
To be continued!
Unread Reviews (1)
Merry Cap writes: Hello! Welcome to the fandom! I love to see new people! I'll just give you a little bit critique; Illéa doesn't have AP systems (it's not a thing here). If someone's good enough to do a subject at extended level, then you do it with a higher year group. Also, most beaches don't have trees on them, because they're artificial and nothing could actually grow there. All the palm trees you can find on photos are in sepperate earth and very high maintainance. I do look forward to hearing why Juan would ever do that, given that he's pretty known for a small social circle and not putting a lot of that out there. I suspect it might be a mistake, given that Juan is 12 years older than your protagonist? As for your writing, I would suggest to cut out the introduction, or cut it down, to preserve some mystery. Maybe also write out what Jessica does, exactly? J Go on! Looking forward to more!
SuuperNevaeh123205 replies: Thanks! I didn't know that! I'll say that she does classes on Senior level then!
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Hello yes this is 100% canon, thanks Pocket for this incredible idea.
