Please do read this. I make these for a reason, and seeing hardly anyone review and let me know on thier opinions on things that I place in this story make me feel like I shouldn't even bother with this sort of stuff. I am not forcing you to do it either, it's up to you, so if you don't want to then don't. If you do leave a review, then at least talk about some of things within this chapter or previous ones.

It gives me a chance to actually talk to you guys and for you guys to talk to me '1 on 1' in a sense, except its online through PM's.

Please, let me know on who you want in the Harem for Twisted Hero and Determined Knight. I'll start on the chapters for Determined Knight once I get the final idea for the Harem, considering there is like 9 more chapters at most - maybe one or two interludes - for the story. So, please choose some girls from Beacon for him, and since the story is ending at the Vytal Tournament, the Fall of Beacon won't happen.

You can even have Jaune, Terra/Saphron, Yang, Pyrrha seduce Cinder for all I care.

There is NO limit for Twisted Hero for the Harem, since it is a crack-fic and mostly humor and romance, there is no limit for what females can be placed in the Harem, as long as there is NO genderbends. Let me know in reviews or PM's.


RWBY - Twisted Hero

Alright, since no one had PM'd me, that means I will come true to my promise, and I will continue it, however, re-reading it makes me cringe a little on the inside. So, I will be re-writing it and changing some things up to make myself more comfortable with it. The idea will stay the same, however, since some people had some problems with me doing things like I did in the past, I will change them.

So, Jaune will still have his fear of machines/animatronics, and he will still have his fear of being touched - which will be worked on throughout the story!

Instead of trying to make it something serious like I normally try, I will be making it more of a humor and romance fic. That means that things will be heavily OOC for many characters, and people would act differently! Of course, the premise of the story will still be the same and things that happened within canon will change!

The females will be Overprotective in various stages of the word of it, maybe even a Yandere or two thrown into the mix to make it more humoristic. Remember, all Yandere's aren't murder happy!

It will be a Jaune x Harem for the fun of it.

Genderbends are a No-No! Meaning Ren will NOT be a female!

Jaune's semblance will still be a thing, meaning that he can combine nightmares along with his amplification, meaning he can bring his nightmares to life, however, the downsides for it will be he will be unable to control certain animatronics and they will all have different 'abilities' and reactions to others.

I want YOU guys to choose the Harem for this story, and ANY female - Young and Old - is acceptable! Meaning you can have Salem, Raven or Summer be with Jaune and be the big scary Mama's that want to smother him with love and affection, and even the vilains will be able to enter - with various stages of overprotection and how far they will go to actually protect him.

Although, some of the females that I will choose, or you choose will want to... take advantage of Jaune and try to corrupt him.

Lewdness/Fluff/Limes are to be expected in this story! Lemons are on the brink, so I will decide whether they go through or not.

I have currently re-written 3 of the chapters so far, some things have changed, while other things may have stayed the same!


RWBY - Determined Knight

Ok, I know what you are saying, the fact that I haven't been updating this story as much, and to be frank, I am a little upset about it as well, as this was one of the first stories that I ever uploaded on this site. It has just been hard to continue on writing it and having the enjoyment whilst doing so.

The reason why, is because when I first uploaded this story, I was in a sort of RWBY-craze, where everything I did was RWBY related - Reddit threads, reading fanfictions, hell, I even had some ideas of other RWBY stories lingering in my head, waiting to be written down, I was even watching the show all over again.

However, all of that energy that I had for the series had died down... I'm not sure when it did, but it happened, meaning that it is very hard to write for long periods of time for something RWBY related, even the Mini-Series that is meant to be coming out next - The Branwen Boy - in which the pairing is Naruto x Yang x Raven, which does have some kinks and is much more mature in taste compared to Oleana's Maelstrom.

I know that Determined Knight is nearly finished, with I believe about a dozen or so chapters left, but it is just getting hard to write, along with the sheer hatred that I have been PM'd by some in which I wont name, and some of the guest reviews that I had to delete. It was just so much, so that is another reason in why I have been putting off making chapters for anything RWBY related.

Since I can't determine who else to put in the Harem for determined Knight, other than three which will probably be obvious by now; Pyrrha, Yang and Ruby. I will let you decide on who else will be in it, I choose a certain amount, and the most popular you place in the reviews/PM system. Please make note they can be only from Beacon and have some backstory on how they first bonded. It will make things easier.

So please, do choose who you want in the Harem for the story, and try to be different for it. From Team RWBY - I am using Ruby and Yang ONLY! I am using Pyrrha as well, so that is three from Beacon Academy. Saphron and Terra Cotta ARE indeed part of the Harem, however, since they are older and live away from Beacon/Vale they won't appear much, maybe a few more times in the story before they have their own little chapter with the other members of Jaune's Harem... either before or after they confess to him.