After re-reading my own story, "Love and Danger" I've realized that I will not build upon the story that I established. There may have been a lack of motivation to write part two. But, I refuse to build on a story that I don't like to read, especially my own. The story I wrote was mediocre, personally. I know that some people say that your biggest critic is yourself, but in this scenario, that is the truth. I know some people actually enjoyed this story, and I am not going to lie, it was fun to write, and I appreciate those who took the time to read this story. The way I wrote the character of Spider-Man and Peter Parker, it didn't feel right. The character of Peter Parker is similar to every single one of us, who has responsibilities of his own. He is the 'Everyman' of the Marvel universe, that's why people like him. He is like one of us, and it is admirable. But the character of Spider-man is the hero that everyone should aspire to be, sure some people may not have spider-powers, but you get what I mean. The idea of 'Spider-Man' is not a man, it is a symbol of being a hero. That's what makes him Spider-Man. I feel as if my story was lacking that. I know this was supposed to be for fun, but I want to read a good story, like the rest of you all. So I want to write a story that I like to read. I am working on new projects, which may get in the way of focusing on this story. This would mean no more part 2.
Also, I would like to thank MckinnellFamilyTrio for taking the time to write some of the chapters.
I know the story may have an abrupt ending, don't worry. Here are the ideas we brainstormed for Part two. ENJOY! - TheTypingAvocado
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DANGEROUS LOVE
BROKEN
-2 weeks pass and nothing is heard from Peter, he didn't go to school during that time
-Liz decided to give Peter space for those few weeks, so hasn't Older Pete, He knows how his younger self can be with Loss
-She realized how to control emotions and her mind, improving with a few weeks
-She spent time improving herself, improving her grades and improved her friendship with Older Pete
-He discovers how powerful she could be while training her, a slight misfire from liz caused some fire to hit him, which caused him and the symbiote to hiss from the pain in unison, the mask gaining a goopy venom maw for a few seconds before the pain dissipated.
-He was impressed with her progress and she's her potential as a hero
-But there was a un-familiar web-slinger already on the streets on the news, taking care of the crime for the meantime
-She thought the new vigilante patrolling was Older Pete, but he rejected
-She patrols for the first time ever, making rookie mistakes and all that, but with Older Pete by her side, looking afar
-Then Electro and Mysterio appear to receive an item
-Liz knew how powerful she was, and blocked a blast from hitting a group of kids
-But Electro overpowers her, until a dark costumed spidey appeared, stunning him for a moment
-She confronts him, thinking it was Peter, but that Spidey quickly denied
-Then a blast hits his back, hurting him momentarily until she unexpectedly blasted at electro with such force
-It left Electro damaged and forced to retreat, Mysterio gets the item and leaves
-They both mention how they saved each other, and hoped to meet again
-They both have a fun interaction and go their separate ways
(Frustration)
(Dark Depression)
-Every morning Peter wakes up, he feels like nothing is real, has no motivation to get up
-He couldn't cook, so he ate cereal, with those two weeks,
-All he did was wake up, eat whatever was left, finish packing, then plays video games for the rest of the day (during those two weeks)
-The older Peter had a feeling that something wasn't right and warns his younger self
-This time, Peter couldn't bring himself out of his bed, he even gained a few pounds (not fat though)
(Letting Emotions taking over)
-MIDDLE-AGED Pete is tired of younger Peter's stubbornness and reminds him that Aunt May wouldn't want him like this.
-Peter grew in anger, he just wanted to be alone, but Spidey Venom wouldn't let him
-He reminds him that there were people counting on him, but Peter wouldn't budge
-The older Peter finally lost his patience and took out his frustration against Peter
-They both physically fight, breaking walls and rooms in the house
-Ultimately, Older Pete beat the younger Peter and showed how weak he has gotten
-The Older Peter saw so much in his younger self that he couldn't let him waste away
-So he just left, because he didn't want to kill Peter, but wanted to smack some sense into him
-"don't worry, he just needs time to think, he'll join us eventually..." the symbiotes voiced to him
-Peter was there alone, in a damaged home and with a damaged mindset
-He picked up the shattered pictures of Aunt May and Uncle Ben and tears up
-He cried alone, holding pictures in hand, realizing of the mess he has become
(Main Motives)
-Electro comes back to their base, injured, but Mysterio successfully received the part
-The sinister six consist of Kraven, electro, sandman, Mysterio, Vulture, and Rhino
-The alternate sinister six consist of Shocker, scorpion, sandman, Doc Ock, Tinkerer, electro
-But they needed one more piece, and it's in the stark tower
-So they planned to make a siege on Stark Tower, to find the missing piece
-The missing piece is the energy source or the experimental energy source in the Iron man suit
-Their main purpose was to create a machine that could rewrite the fabric of their life, making whatever they wanted, essentially warp the world into what they want
-They used their last energy source on the particle collider, so they needed a new one for this new device
-a heist being planned
-Their main motive was to change their miserable lives, by warping reality itself
-The man pulling the strings isn't seen, but his presence is felt
-He gives them a task, that they are more than willing to do
-The task was to kill the spiderman, and once he was dead...their lives will change forever
(Drawing Suspicions)
(Suspicions)
-The Next Day after Liz's first patrol, she was exhausted
-She finds Miles, with a hurting back, similar to the other spiderman
-The cheerleaders notice that Liz's hair smelled burnt
-It drew suspicions by Liz and Miles
-They confronted each other about it and found out their secret personas
-They bonded over the night before... (deepened their relationship)
(Strength in Numbers)
-Then they notice an attempted siege by the group of villains and decided to step up
-The sinister six, more like 12 because of the members from the other universe, all attacked STARK TOWER
-They were powerful and seemingly unbeatable, because there were plenty of them
-But only three heroes stood in their way
-Until, Venom joins the fight, bringing along Black Cat
-Liz knew who she was and was mad at her
-The ladies decided to put their differences aside, to help others
-They had to evacuate citizens, quickly, while fighting the twelve
-However, they were confused to see two spidermen, but they attacked them
-Miles struggled, he had no web-shooters
-But Spidey Venom thrived, using his organic webbing and his knowledge of the six weaknesses
-Liz took on both Sandmen, using her fire to create them to glass
-Venom took on shocker, vulture, and Rhino, but got overwhelmed
-Their endurance wasn't strong and realized that there were plenty of them
-So the 5 heroes got exhausted but succeeded in stopping 11 out of the 12 villains, though doc ock was illusion made by Mysterio
(Become Greater)
-Peter cleaned up the glass and damages of the house
-Then he saw a picture of the whole family.
-He remembered why he became the hero, and remembers what His older self told him
-"I know how you feel, I lost my aunt this exact same way... almost 3 years ago... your hopeless, you think that even with your powers, you weren't able to save your family, you start getting depressed, not even getting out of bed, worried that you might lose someone again, but remember what uncle ben told us, With great power, comes great responsibility, you might not be able to save everyone, but you have to try to save the few you can..."
-Then he looked over to the news broadcast of the attack on stark tower
-He knew his older self was right, Aunt May and Uncle Ben would want him to do better
-To Be Greater
-He came to his senses and ran over to find his suit, which was dusty
-"They Need Me"
(Calm Before the Storm)
-As the gang finished up webbing up the 2 different sinister six groups, they turned them over to SWAT
-they realized one of the doc ocks wasn't accounted for, though they were exhausted from their long and strenuous battle
-They decide to rest at Eddie's place since that should be a good place for them to hide and rest,
-They have little bits and pieces of conversations, (and black cat starts to pick up on Eddie's feelings for her)
-As they rested, the symbiotes on both Eddie and older peter stir, and have a conversation with each other,
(maybe check in on some of their dreams... or nightmares?)
-Liz's nightmare is losing Peter after a great fight, (its of him getting impaled in front of her)
-The Older Peter remembered the memories between MJ and him
-Miles was scared about his father finding out his secret
-Black Cat's dream is of having kids and finally settling down
-Eddie just wanted to settle down...with Black Cat
(The Eight-Legged Monster)
-As soon as the group woke up, they planned out what they had to do
-After a few hours, they finally found doc ock, and after a bit of fighting, the group had the upper hand, until doc ock activated something, and then he was coated in a redness all too familiar to older peter, "carnage"
-Although, MONSTER OCK WAS UNSTOPPABLE!
-HE TORE APART EDDIE AND VENOM
-HE KILLS EDDIE AND DISPOSES OF HIM
-Young Peter finally arrived to see Eddie lying on the ground, bleeding out, and the rest of the group struggling to fight off what at first he thought was a returned carnage, when he saw doc ock's arms, and all became clear... "that madman..."
-He quickly joined up with the other peter, who was all too happy to see him, quipping at him, "a couple of minutes earlier wouldn't have been so bad either,"
-to which young Peter replied, "what ya gonna do?" (that is a spidey 3 reference)
-Iron man arrived with his emergency armor after reports of quaking from this area
-Both Peters tried their best to hold their ground, but ultimately failed
-Monster Ock beat the Spectacular Spiderman to a bloody pulp, nearly killing him
-They were beaten brutally by Monster Ock, they really needed a miracle if they where to beat monster ock without anymore casualties
-Monster Ock stood there, seemingly victorious over the group
(On the Ropes)
-They knew they couldn't let him get out to the city
-He was TOO POWERFUL
-So they powered themselves one last time, while both Peter's remained on the ground
-Then Miles and Liz did whatever they could to not let Monster Ock out to the city
-A damaged Iron Man used his high-frequency weapons to keep it down
-Liz notices its main weakness is fire, so she decides to attack with Fireball
-She uses all her power to weaken the Carnage Symbiote,
-The Venom symbiote leaves eddies corpse, changed from the death of its host, now red and black, (because if the blood it absorbed) It bonds with a dying Peter, saving his life
-But he panicked, he didn't like symbiotes but Spidey Venom helped him calm down in the moment
-Peter later embraces the Toxin symbiote and uses it to fight against Carnage
-It's strength overwhelmed Monster Ock
-The carnage symbiote wasn't strong enough
-The ultrasonic cannon made the Symbiote release from Doc Ock's body
-The lab was rigged to self destruct, but luckily all of them make it out, even with Eddie's body
-Eddie however dies, which Black Cat mourned over his body
-She realized that she loved him
-Doc Ock & the sinister six goons were headed over to the Pentagon
-The other sinister six were sent back to their universe, once the portal activated
-It is revealed that The Master Planner was behind all of it.
-He hacks the security cameras to view everything
-It is revealed to be Norman Osborne, the green goblin
(Acceptance)
-A week later...
-They go to Aunt May's funeral, but Peter celebrating her Life and not mourning it
-He still shed tears, like the rest of them
-Then a few hours later, they go to eddies. Peter feels very sorry they used to be like brothers, but after he became spidey, their friendship diminished, until Eddie hated him, he had hoped to fix things with him, which he hopes he managed to do...
-Their headstones were next to each other
(-Spidey Venom) Peter came to the funerals as Peter's cousin Daniel
-Peter finally went to Liz's play on Christmas week, and made her happy
-Afterward, they would have a Christmas party
-Peter's gift was the adoption papers to be Tony Stark's son
-Liz gets her necklace which is shaped like a heart
-Miles was gifted a new suit
-They were all invited into Shield by Nick Fury, who is revealed to be Liz's distant uncle
(Goodbyes)
-tony tries to fix the portal, so that the older peter could go home,
-They decide to take a selfie together as a group, to remember the adventure
-After a while, tony finally fixes the portal, and after everyone says their goodbyes,
-Peter and Older Pete have their final 1 on 1 talk
-He advises him to appreciate and love Liz and appreciate the time he has with her
-"To not take her for granted"
-Finally, the older peter returns to his universe
Lover
-New Years Eve
-Peter and Liz go patrolling together before the new year (and later run into miles who is patrolling)
-Once they were done, they head to the Stark Tower and Peter and Liz share one final date, until 1 year anniversary
-Peter remembers the advice he was given, and heard the countdown for new years
-While Liz enjoyed the party below them, Peter brought her close
-Once the countdown went to zero, They shared their new years kiss
-Liz and Peter cuddled on top of the building, observing the New Year's Party below them
THE END