Hello everyone, I know that you guys are expecting a new chapter, but unfortunately, its not. I'm here to inform you guys that this story is now R.I.P

R.I.P

Rewrite In Progress, what else?

Looking back at things, the early chapters are...not bad, but not good either. And that I've actually rushed the chapters to be able to follow the episodes, which is a bad thing to do, cuz there was no room for developing the characters with team AFKT (Apricot). That and, in my opinion, everything is so messy.

And to be honest? I cringe a bit in the early chapters. Because those chapters were when I was still inexperienced.

I've also been reading some other stories, obviously, and reading the beautiful pieces of literature they wrote makes me want to turn to this and improve...

And don't worry, this decision didn't make itself known in my mind just now. This has been going on for weeks, and it's bothering my mind, making me unable to write without thinking of this particular story. And I know that this story has been diminishing a bit even with the improved chapters, so that's why I decided to rewrite this, to make it better.

In fact, I'll be working on the rewrite this week, look forward to it!

And now, here is the list of changes in The Prince of the Swarm in Remnant...the title is a mouthful...better change that too...

1. The title- It's too much of a mouthful, enough said.

2. Team AFKT- Sadly, I'll cut off half this team, discussed this with my friends and they agreed, eventually. Basically, Tyr and Krista are gone now.

3. Alain's personality- I'll be changing him...a lot...like him being unable to go red when Yang decides to pounce on him...and expect him to be more cunning...and less of the Alain you guys know and love.

4. Alain's Alignment- I've realized something, when a character comes from Starcraft or any world that's messed up, then you can expect they did some messed up things, whether or not they did it for the good or the bad. Because that's the kind of place Starcraft is, like Warhammer but less on steroids. So, I'll try to make him a Chaotic Good guy...at least, I'll try my best...

5. The Harem- There will still be a harem, my stance doesn't change in this, maybe the members have gone down a fair bit...maybe...

6. The Beginning- This is where I'll be spending a lotta time here, Beacon won't start right away, but it won't be far off either.

7. The 3 races- Terran, Zerg, and Protoss, each have their own strengths and weaknesses...but combined? You gotta be from Warhammer to be able to even fight it out. I mean, they managed to hold off against the powers of a literal Dark God, and that was even before Kerrigan turned into a Goddess! Basically, expect either the Terran or the Protoss to not make an appearance...or maybe both...I dunno...

8. Alain's new team- Already have the people in mind for this. They are so underrated and barely used...

9. Natalie and Zavalis- Two OC's given to me by ApertureGaming011, don't know who will make an appearance or if they'll make an appearance at all...I want to apologize in advance if they won't be in the story at all...

10. Other units?- Maybe, the units that will be used are the ones used in Starcraft Campaign mode, and I'll try to stick to that...try being the keyword...

And that is all, I hope you guys understand, but the thing is this, I'm rewriting to make this story better.

I'll see you guys in a few...
Ciao! Peace!