The Outsider

by CharacterImagination2

Veronica Mars life is extreme, she is not your regular teenager and Neptune is not your regular town. Veronica has always been an outsider, pretending to be an 09er has been Veronica's life since she began high school. Little did she know that her rebellious sneaky 'non-09er' plans had not gone unnoticed over the years. Shocked to find out that she had been on the PCHers radar.

16. Notes

I tried to write this as a comment on my story but it came up as written by a guest so I figured this would be easier.

I just want to start with a thank you for reading my story.

I have NOT forgotten about it, I plan to finish it going through the entire show with my own version of events. I have been making a plot plan so that its easier to set up each chapter and what will happen in them. I personally struggled to find any WEEVER stories that I liked (there are so few) and I want this to be one that not only i enjoy.

I realise Whats been posted so far has many mistakes (it's what you get when you post each chapter without reading over your work lol) I will be replacing each chapter soon.

Many of you have picked up on the plot hoes that I also recognised in my own story as well. Before I start writing it over again I wanted to find out what other people suggest for points in the Veronica Mars plot i should avoid, alter or include?

To answer a few questions I was hoping to make Thumper a good guy...Well as good as a PCHer Can be. I want to create a 'mini family' for Veronica and make her more of a badass from the beginning. In my rewrite of this I want to make Veronica less of an 09er before Lily's death and have her issues with her mom more pronounced.

I try to write about situations I know and the Veronica Mars character is one i personally can identify with. No, Im Not a badass detective (a girl can dream thought) but in all seriousness, I've been through some rough times as I'm sure many others have too. The harshness of Veronica's personality is much like my own, i too have experienced abuse and seen people i know go through substance abuse issues. I don't want my story to get too dark but I plan on touching on these issues that are also shown in Veronica Mars.

Please let me know what you think!