Hey everyone, I just wanted to give you an update on this story. Originally I was planning on releasing the wedding episode, and I reread everything. I'm not as proud as I once was of this fic, and until I can get to a point where I feel good about sharing it, I'm going to rework this book. An author's job is never done, and I hope you will forgive me, and continue to follow along. I don't think it will take too long to do everything, but I think I need to focus on making your reading experience as good as it can be—
I also realize that my writings may come across as cheesy. I recognize that it may have stemmed from my childhood, as I had a facination with many of the 'solve in 40 min or less' episodes. I do not blame them, as they are masterpieces, yet the mentality in my mind hurt this story for the worse. Something like this is takes a lot of time and energy to work out, arranged marriages aren't as easy breezy as I may have had it appear. There were a lot of character inconsistencies, and I wasn't bonding with Susan/Peter's spouses. I hate when I have a character sit there for the sake of being a character.
I'm going to do my best to make a (hopefully) wonderful read and I can't wait for you to see the final result of this progress. Thanks again for being understanding, and I'll see you soon!