what if the factions didnt fall? a Tobias and Tris Fanfiction

by Lizbear7

What if The Dauntless never attacked abnegation. What if Tris and Tobias stayed in Dauntless. In this fanfiction there is drama, romance, heartbreak, and betrayal. My fanfiction is set about a year after Tris's initiation into Dauntless. Will Tris and Tobias's relationship last? I guess you will have to read to find out more!

17. Chapter 17

Sorry for chapter 16 being so short. I am going to go ahead and jump to right before labor and delivery.

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POV-Tris

These past days have been long. Tobias and I have visited Erudite, and Candor shortly after he got 'promoted'.

Because Tobias excepted the leadership position, we are getting to move into a new apartment.

" how many more boxes do we have to pack?" I ask.

"I think about two or three." he says.

" let me help finish packing." I say.

"Tris." he looks at me sympathetically.

"you know you cant help." he tells me.

"its just putting things in a box." I retort.

"Tris, you herd what Dr. Mindy said. you have to take it easy. she also told you that you cant do really any lifting at all."

he is right. I am just not used to feeling helpless. I don't like it.

"fine." I say.

he just comes up and hugs me.

"I love you. you know that right?" he asks

" I would love help, but its not good for the baby, or you."

" I know, I- it just I don't like feeling helpless. like I need everyone else to do simple things for me."

he just hugs me tighter.

A few hours have passed. he finished packing.

"so when do we move?" I ask.

" I thought we moved next Thursday." he responds.

"okay." I say.

I start on my way to the bathroom. once I get there, I feel a gush, and than a bunch of pain.

I don't know what to do so I scream.

"TOBIAS!" I scream.

He comes rushing in.

" Tris, what's wrong."

" I think my water broke." I reply.

he looks shocked. like the wind was knocked out of him. he stands there with his hands clenched around his mouth.

" Tris. we got to get you to the hospital NOW."

I don't argue.

he helps me up, and we head out the door with out grabbing anything.

POV-Tobias

I can't believe this is happening. I am worried, and excited at the same time.

I am going to have a kid.

I want to be excited desperately, but fear of becoming that monster consumes me.

Tris keeps reassuring me that I won't, but she does not know that.

not only am I worried about that, but I am worried that her father is going to chew me up and spit me out.

we are going to have to tell them. about the miscarriage and this.

I know for a fact that my father is going to be pissed.