Hello dear reader,
This story has been written over the course of a couple years. Years where I change a lot and often, at the beginning it was simply to pass time over my summer vacation – at the time I was really passionate about Bleach, writing and getting my thoughts onto paper (though it's digital, so no paper, lol). Over the span of months and years I constantly came up with new ideas, so the story changes from chapter to chapter. Which is also why I can't continue this story, I've ran out of passion for Bleach, and my story. If I were to continue writing, it would be to fix my story for the start. I've left so many plot holes and characters in the dust, I've time skipped incorrectly, the characters are a mess, the pacing is horrid, my grammar is unbearable, and my proofreading is nonexistent, and I haven't given the protagonist a goal either; one of my biggest sins. I've even tried re-reading it myself and couldn't get past a couple chapters due to my spelling mistakes and bad dialogue…
At the start I shamelessly copied another stories beginning with a twist, since I loved that first chapter so much, that another author had previously written. It also might've sparked my interest in writing this fanfic. As the story went on I changed my mindset on what Ichigo should do, instead of how he should achieve it or with what effort… What I'm trying to say is that I'm no writer, and my native tongue isn't English either, and I haven't really read many books in my life, so I've not given the story a lot of thought. I've written the chapters so quickly because I felt there was a "demand" for them, and released them without really checking for spelling mistakes, or use of incorrect words. I just wanted to release more and more and get positive feedback that came with the first few chapters, and in the end that backfired. The story got all messy, it made no sense and the progress was too fast.
Thank you if you've honestly enjoyed this mess of a fanfiction, and thank you even more for simply giving it a read and telling me it was great or that it sucked. If I ever were to write again, it would have to be something fresh and thoroughly thought-out, with a road map and anchor points, with a finish line as well. If anything I've learnt that writing properly isn't easy, and making everyone happy with a chapter is also impossible, yet I think that some reviews did help shape it somewhat.
Oh well, thank you again for reading my story and if you've read this, you're awesome too.
Maybe you'll see more of me in the future, who knows.
Sincerely Onyxiton.