Dramione and the Sorcerer's Stone

by Emmione Watser

Previously 'A Dramione story: Us against the world': First year'. Draco and Hermione meet before they even go to Hogwarts. A friendship appears between them. Once they get to Hogwarts, however, they have to meet in secret, and be mean to each other when they are with others. It's the thrilling Harry Potter book, but with a little twist. Pansy, Blaise and Draco are quite OOC. R&R!

20. To my guest reviewer: 800 Ninjas

Hello 800 Ninja,

No need to be sorry, I'm so glad you've given me critique! I'll definitely work on the conversations between them, and you can tell me if they're getting better, or still need a lot of work. I'm not completely sure what you mean by unoriginal. Do you mean it's too much like the original book, or someone's already done a fan fiction very alike this?

And also, could you be a little more specific when you say 'Some off key parts'? I want to improve my writing, and it would be so helpful to know what's wrong and how it could be better!

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad you like the story at least a little.

Thanks and I hope you're well,

Emmione Watser

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Hello again,

Thank you, I'll definitely take that stuff into account. I actually haven't read any stories about the same sort of thing, but I'll take your word for it! I hope I can get better and help you understand what's happening and all.

Stay tuned and stay safe!

-Emmione Watser