Star Wars Episode VII The Force Awakens rewritten

by Mr Nutz

I know I'm gonna get hate and death threats shoved up the ass for this, but I don't hate the new trilogy. But if I were rewriting it, is it any indication that I think it's perfect? Of course not! But what I'm doing here is reintroducing familiar elements but putting new spins on them. So try to keep an open mind here, okay?

22. Ch 19 Infiltration: Part 2

Pryde raises the alarm as we cut to our heroes noticing the alarm (without their helmets). Han says the line. "I have a bad feeling about this." Suddenly, a squad of stormtroopers appear behind them.

"Freeze! Drop your weapons!" Finn points behind them. "Look! A wookiee!" "We're not falling for-" Suddenly half the squad gets blasted by Chewbacca's bowcaster and they finish off the rest. Han gives a thumbs up to Chewbacca. "Perfect timing as always!"

Chewbacca growls in response. "Well. There's no point in wearing these anymore." Everyone takes off the armor and runs down another hallway. Meanwhile, Kylo Ren and several of his dark warriors walk down another hallway. "You are certain he is here, grand master?" "Yes. I would very much prefer Han Solo alive. He is mine to confront."