let me begin with apologising for the lack of updating.
ive re read the chapters i've published and those that i've written in the drafts and i realized i'm not content with the way the story is going. i haven't lost creativity for the story and i will continue updating if that's what you (the readers) want but i feel like i owe you all the scrapped ideas i had since i began this story - you can read there are no spoilers just scrapped ideas that would've made this story grimmer and maybe even make you hate Naomi Nakamura
1. Yuuto and Veronica were supposed to have more prominent roles
2. Naomi, Yuuto, and Veronica were meant to have murdered, Akira Saito before the main story's events
3. Akira Saito murdered Naoto Yamamoto, they attended yosagami high instead of cross academy
4. Naomi was investigating the murder of her friend and snuck into the house to acquire evidence when she found out about the affair
5. Veronica and Yuuto were look out
6. Naomi was caught but had the evidence in the form of a disturbing snuff film saved on a usb drive
7. Yuuto commited the actual act of murder in defense of Veronica who's life was in imminent danger, Naomi buried or more precisely burned the evidence
8. Akira Saito is reported missing and fugitive
9. Naomi with the help of her friends burned the body and hid the murder weapon in plain sight after washing it down with bleach
10. This the only reason Naomi accepted the scholarship to attend cross academy, a scholarship she only applied for to screw over her classmate, Yina
11. Veronica was meant to go back to America before the new year began as agreed by the three of them on the fated night but she decided not to
12. The main story was meant to start about with Naomi breaking and entering into Kaien Cross's office and finding out about the night class
13. The reason she gets called into the headmaster's office was to be questioned by the police because they found her burned carcass in a land fill
14. Rido Kuran knows what happened the night they killed Akira Saito and still involved with Naomi's childhood and has a obssessive fascination with her
15. Senri Shiki and Naomi were meant to have a close relationship instead of Aidou Hanabusa
16. The reason Naomi would sneak off campus was to get Yuuto and Veronica story straight before they got questioned by the police
17. Tanaka was also meant to be more prominent as he eventually finds out about that night and becomes the three students alibi for that night
18. The story was meant to be about Naomi spiraling and progressively making worse decisions that only yielded temporary solutions
19. Haruto was never supposed to exist
20. Asuna was meant to be a clean slate for Naomi but instead influenced Asuna to be a worse person and ignore her morals establishing the fact Naomi is a bad influence
21. The uneasy feeling of Naomi gets of someone watching was meant to be her guilt overwhelming her until she sees the bodies Rido possess to get close to her
22. Rido is meant to represent the worst parts of herself as he's someone aids, even encourages her to act on her worst instincts
23. Naomi frames someone else for the murder of Akira Saito since i scrapped the idea i never worked out on who she frames
24. Naomi was never supposed to be at cross academy during the ball and Shizuka, but busy plating evidence to frame someone
25. Naomi was never supposed to train with Yagari or at all, she was meant to be left twisting in the wind as some type of karmic payback
fun fact: Naomi stans big time rush
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