Update (five years later)
Can I start off by saying that I suck so much for leaving the story where it was. Like, hello? I'm 90% sure no one will ever see this, but if you do, I am honestly very sorry. I started this story when I was 13 years old (and you can tell). I cringed so hard when I first found this story. The plot moved way too fast and my grammar was atrocious. I mean, the story had potential if it weren't for my crippling anxiety that constantly causes me to never finish things and then I start feeling bad because if something doesn't come easy to me I start backing away from it and that stems from being a gifted kid at a young age and then experiencing burn out at about 10 years old and being depressed ever since and... I am oversharing. What I'm trying to say is: it was a pretty shitty thing of me to leave the story the way it was. I honestly didn't know what was going to happen next. I knew that Tris and Tobias were going to end up together (of course), but I didn't;t know how to get there. If anyone wants me to actually finish it I guess I will? I'm 18 now and I've gotten a lot better at writing, I promise. I won't put anyone through that awful writing again. You could also PM me if you want the gist of it! Thanks for reading my awful fic :).