Star Wars Episode VII The Force Awakens rewritten

by Mr Nutz

I know I'm gonna get hate and death threats shoved up the ass for this, but I don't hate the new trilogy. But if I were rewriting it, is it any indication that I think it's perfect? Of course not! But what I'm doing here is reintroducing familiar elements but putting new spins on them. So try to keep an open mind here, okay?

25. Ch 22 Return of Phasma

As soon as Finn and Chewbacca reach the next floor, they round a corner to another balcony overlooking the chasm and hear a familiar voice. "FN-2187…" They turn around to find Commander Phasma and a cadre of stormtroopers. "Considering your new affiliation, you should not have come back."

Chewbacca aims his bowcaster but Phasma shoots one of his hands with a quickdraw pistol, causing Chewbacca to roar in pain and drop his weapon onto the floor and Finn puts his hands up. Phasma asks him. "Is there anything you'd like to know before you meet your rightful end?" "Yeah. Your leader is Han's kid." He looks to Rey and Kylo down below fighting each other with their lightsabers. Finn turns back to Phasma. "How did he ever become Supreme Leader?"

"Ah yes. I helped him ascend to his position just as he helped me ascend to mine. I allowed him to get close to Supreme Leader Motti. Then he killed him. I was promoted to commander in appreciation for my assistance. And now… You die…"